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Crossroads- Ch. 19
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Lara felt as though her body was on fire. A swirl of emotions, all good, flashed through her mind, as she watched the woman she loved more than anything undress for her, leaving her without a rational thought. She reached down and tugged her own jeans off, exposing silk bikini panties. As she straightened, she felt Alice’s hands under her shirt, and she willingly raised her arms. Alice’s strong fingers lightly rubbed Lara’s muscles as she ran them down her back and unhooked Lara’s bra. Running her hands underneath the lacy cups, she liberated Lara’s breasts from the material, and lightly squeezed the nipples.
"Oh my god, you’re driving me crazy, Alice." Lara’s breath was a gasp. She twisted and stepped forward so that she was lowering Alice onto the bed. Sliding back, Alice watched as Lara crawled on top of her. For a moment, they looked at each other, their eyes full of love and wonder. Lara lowered herself, so that their bare breasts touched, and both women’s bodies shuddered at the light contact, and then Lara was sliding back, the friction between their bodies eliciting goose bumps, as she trailed slow kisses down Alice’s neck and onto her collarbone. She reached down with her right hand and allowed her hand to caress Alice’s leg and hip. She settled one leg between Alice’s legs and smiled as she felt Alice push against her.
Pulling back she lifted up slightly, and gasped in surprise, as Alice ran her hand lightly between Lara’s legs. She smiled when she saw the look of satisfaction on Alice’s face and buried her own face into Alice’s neck. She moaned as Alice’s fingers entered, and she felt her body take on a pace of its own as Alice began to slowly slide in and out. She called out, as Alice’s thumb danced over her clit, and her mind cleared of everything except her need, and the need of the woman beneath her. With her right hand, she reached down, and entered Alice, moaning again at the delicious wetness that she discovered. Alice’s answering moan practically sent her over the edge, and the two women began to match each other’s rhythms, their bodies moving together in a dance they were certain to master.
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These two are just so… sweet, and I mean that in the most complimentary way possible. Lovely chapter. Ta, Goldrun.
Damn – I missed posting the first comment again! Well, what can I say, Gold? That was hot. And cute. And hot. And sweet. And… did I mention hot? :) The end was just completely perfect – “you’re here”. Awwwww… can I steal that line from you in my story? :) And, as far as “ignoring” Alice’s emotions – that’s hooey (yes, I did just use the word “hooey”)! You’ve given us fantastic insight into both Alice and Lara’s characters – and, if there has been more of an emphasis on Lara’s emotional turmoil over Dana’s death, it has never been to the detriment of Alice’s character. On the contrary, I think that has allowed for a really interesting exploration of Alice’s strengths – something that we don’t get to see often enough. So, thank you for this story, and for yet another terrific update! Epilogue away – and, feel very free to make it a 50-pager so that we can put off the end of this lovely story for as long as possible!
Right back at you with the ability to write hotness. In fact, I think it’s safe to say you put me to shame. And yay for making Dana’s only concern that Lara loves Alice the way she deserves to be loved. That was the subtext, right? Or I am just filling in what I want it to mean? Hey, it works for me. Ditto bluemini on the epilogue…remember Lucky started as one! Looking forward to next week!
Could it be that I have been rendered speechless? Gold, shit fire, this is…gaaaah! I echo jp22’s, Blue’s and SammysGirl’s comments: sweet, hot, and so well done. Sigh, touch-feely–erm, no wait, I don’t mean touchy-feely in a creepy way, I mean in a healthy adult way, both physically and emotionally. It just goes to show you can’t beat engaging in NC-17 scenes with someone you LURVE, hehe;) Or showing your lurve through said actions. Or, whatever. It was just the right thing. I thought for 1.5 seconds that Meg might interrupt them and was prepared to scream at the computer but you did not disappoint. I loved Alice’s “did you hear what -I- said” right back at Lara combined with Lara’s sincere gratification for Alice’s support…and finally, neither of them bolts off before saying what they needed to say. Yes! So now we are privy to their knowledge that they are together together, and that is just sa-weet. I like the image and symbolism of Dana walking away…can she rest easy now? As always, I anticipate with great fanfic crack addict desire how you will epilogue and/or last chapter this goodness. While the number 20 is an excellent rounding off point, don’t forget that ’25’ and ’30’ are also divisible by 5, just in case you go off on a sequel tangent. Hahah, laugh, dammit, I am funny! Ah, what can I say, this fic is deep-dish-dee-lish. Can’t wait for more when you can get to it!! Thanks for sharing your consistently delectable writing, your awesomely witty comments and…I’ll be checking back, don’t you worry now…!
oh alice…oh lara…you two are just…to perfect…man…sigh…okay enough with the …’s. anywho!! great update and i cant wait for more!
Damn, you’re updates were still faster than I could catch up. I hate it when work is kicking my ass. :( Oh no…the end is near! How about a 5 * 5. (25 is my lucky number….hint hint :P) But good thing you’re going to do an epilogue. I always love those. :D As for the last two chapters. Wow…that’s all I can say. So much unsolved emotions are still in the air. Lara’s fear for rejection once she confesses what really happens in her dreams (and ofcourse the fear for her own dreams). Alice for saying I love you, but still insecure about Lara’s feelings for her (she doesn’t need to be). But I’m glad they found a way to get some distraction…yeah that was one hot distraction. :P And they can always talk tomorrow…or the day after tomorrow…or the day after that. Because you can say one thing for sure, Alive isn’t going anywhere and so is Lara.:D Btw, did you vist last.fm already?
so maybe now lara has over come her nightmares I hope so and Ihope that they are on there way to being together forever please post soon great update I love it
hot! absolutly!! are you sure, there ist just only one chapter? there has to fallow an epilogue! for sure!and there is a new coupple? i hope, meg is involved lol ! she is so cute, i don´t want her to leave l.a.liebe gruesse,naren