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Cure-all, Chapter 21
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Tina noticed Carmen’s faraway look, and decided to change the subject.
"You know what you should do?"
The young woman looked at her, quizzically.
"You should pack a small bag and get yourself on a plane to Vancouver. I’m pretty sure a certain sailor would really appreciate to have her very own private nurse up there." Tina said, arching a brow.
Carmen thought for a moment, surprised but mostly delighted by the suggestion.
"You… You think she’d like that?" She asked hesitantly.
"I ’know’ she’d love that." Tina assured her smiling.
A huge grin spread across Carmen’s face. She threw herself to the blonde’s neck and hugged her tight.
"You’re right" She said excited, "Thank you!… I have this photo shoot tomorrow that I can’t miss, but I’ll leave right after that. I’ll go and book a flight right away!" With that, she jumped on her feet and ran out of the room.
Tina grinned at Carmen’s excitement. She thought with melancholy that she had just given up her excuse to call Bette, but the smile on Carmen’s face had convinced her that she had been right…
She smiled. Shane would be in good hands.
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A few days later, she had just gotten back from work and was checking the mail when the doorbell rang. She opened the door and found herself face to face with a huge bouquet of flowers. She smiled… Yesterday, it had been a gorgeous golden bracelet. Helena was obviously trying to make up for her absence. She had called the day before, apologizing for not being around when Tina had come back.
The blonde was genuinely touched by her efforts, and she knew that she meant well. But the scenario was only repeating itself. Helena would always apologize, she would always try to make up, she would always cover her with wonderful presents… She was the most generous and would stop at nothing to show Tina that she cared… But was that enough to make a marriage work?
But the question, the real question that Tina still didn’t dare asking herself was… Did it even matter anymore?
The blonde placed the beautiful arrangement on the living room table, and went up to her room to take her shower. She knew that she needed to figure things out, but work had been a providential diversion which didn’t leave her much time to think.
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ok…it’s official…i’m hooked!! i’m loving this story, you wouldn’t believe how excited i got when i saw it was 14 pages!! how long now before they get to speak again??? ppvvvvvvs!
Holy Moley Woman! You weren’t kidding when you said it was a loooong chapter. Loved it, but I’m dying here. Those 2 need to get together soon please. PPS!!
thanks for the lon chappy! loved it:) ok so now we need Tina to talk to Helena and Bette to hurry up and cure this disease so she can get back home where Tina tells her she left Helena for her….man is that it? I’m so hooked can you tell? PPS
Wow, what a dilemma for Tina. That was very bittersweet. PPS.
it’s time for tina to let go…of helena LOL
love this story… i think tina needs to go to helena and find her with another woman.. then book her flight and go to bette… so you are waiting for the presidents results here in the states… it should be a long night… wish us luck… so are you going to L5 next week in london… i am… if you are going… look for me…PPS
wow phew! u have ways with words. keep it up. im hoping that maybe, just maybe Tina will visit Bette. But i rather Bette find the cure and go home to Tina.
poor tina she must broke things with helena so she could fallow her heart and be with bette
wow such a long and well written update. I enjoyed it so. Well I see we have Tina attempting to be a mature adult, instead of cheating on Helena she wants to tell her how she feels first…so do it already and go to Bette.
Finally they both admit they have fallen in love. Such a great story.
that was beautifully written! thanks for the very long update!
What a wonderful chapter! I can’t wait for Thursday…OH..for your American friends, like myself, you should post a “victory chapter” on our Tuesday night. Must get to bed have to be at the voting booth at 6:30am. PPS
These 14 pages read like 2 – they flew by – so beautiful and touching. Your writing is such that I feel the passion and the love radiating from these 2 women. Here’s hoping there’s another 14 pg chapter waiting for me after I cast my vote in the big election on Tuesday……
awww – what a heart tearing story! I was so exicited about your fantastic loooong post! Thanks so much! And please post again before your trip – there is just no way that I survive the absence of your story for such a long time…. :)
Okay, they have fallen in love with each other and are not even in the same country, what is the next step? I hope that the survive this time away from each other. It also gives Tina some time to end her marriage to Helena.
” I needed to hear your voice one last time before I left. ” OMG, what an admission !! How could she hung up right after saying this ?! Well, actually… Actually, I can certainly see why she would do that, she just wasn’t ready to face the consequences of such a revelation, but at the same time she desperately needed to say those words to Tina for somehow it must be a relief for her… But how could she leave Tina like that ? With those words ?… This is so heartwrenching, no to mention excruciating ! … Anyway, off to read your last update now !
WOW This is so freaking good!
Wow…now thats what you call a chapter..nicely done love:) I am loving this story K…absolutely great…cant wiat for more….how many pages can you do this time;)
Finally caught up…phew..Fab update, great story telling but what do you mean by “…Since she couldn’t save herself.”?? I’m officially worried now, is Bette sick??Answers, please! ;)
ok, i’m dying here. so much love and sooo much pain. great chapter, great story! PPS
wonderful, just wonderful.. pps…
aaaahhhhh i can’t believe u could’nt even give us one kiss, your killing us woman, but i can’t wait to see what happens next!!!!
Thanks for the long post. I can’t wait until you can post an update. I know, I know—greedy, right? Heck, you just posted 14 pages and I’m asking for more! So DEMANDING…LOL! It’s such a bittersweet goodbye, it just broke my heart. Safe travels and PS.
oh wow, that hurt so much, brilliantly done. Thank u. pps