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Cure-all, Chapter 21
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"You did?.." Tina said, delighted. Such a small detail, yet so incredibly important. "Oh, uh… My phone’s battery died and I couldn’t change it right away. I’m sorry…"
"Oh no, that’s okay." Bette quickly said.
"… I missed your call." Tina finished in the same time.
There was an awkward silence for the next few seconds. Neither really knew where to start. There was so much to say. How much they missed each other, how much they had been thinking about the other, how they wished that time in Walheim had never had to end… How they wished that Mark’s phone call, putting aside its great importance of course, how they wished that Mark’s phone call had come just a few minutes later…
So much to say…
But of course they couldn’t.
"How is Shane?" Tina suddenly asked.
"Oh, she’s much better, thank you." Bette answered, glad about the diversion, "She’s still in the hospital, but all the tests are showing only positive signs. She’ll be on her feet very soon."
"That’s great, Bette. I’m so glad… I know how scared you were." Tina said softly.
The brunette smiled on the phone.
"Yes, I was… But I, uh…" She started hesistant, "… I was lucky to have you…"
The blonde’s heart jumped in her chest.
As if I could ever have you… Bette thought, sadness filling her heart.
You’ll always have me… Tina thought, with a certainty that both surprised and elated her.
Silence again… They could almost hear each other breathing on the other end of the phone.
"Carmen is with Shane… She arrived a few days ago." Bette let out, directing the conversation towards Shane again.
"Oh, yes… I thought it would be a good idea to send her to Shane. The poor girl was so distressed. She would have gone crazy here… I kinda talked her into flying to Vancouver, but… I… I hope it was okay…" Tina said, anxious.
"Oh… It was your idea?" Bette asked.
"Uh, yes… I’m sorry, maybe it was too intrusive. I just thought… I’m sorry, I shouldn’t have interfered. It was none of my business…" The blonde’s words trailed off, and she suddenly felt very insecure.
"Tina…" The brunette’s voice was low and so soft, "You should have seen Shane’s face when Carmen entered her room. She was beaming. So much so that you suddenly wondered why she was in this hospital bed. She… she was absolutely glowing." She said, her voice charged with emotion, "Oh, Tina…"
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ok…it’s official…i’m hooked!! i’m loving this story, you wouldn’t believe how excited i got when i saw it was 14 pages!! how long now before they get to speak again??? ppvvvvvvs!
Holy Moley Woman! You weren’t kidding when you said it was a loooong chapter. Loved it, but I’m dying here. Those 2 need to get together soon please. PPS!!
thanks for the lon chappy! loved it:) ok so now we need Tina to talk to Helena and Bette to hurry up and cure this disease so she can get back home where Tina tells her she left Helena for her….man is that it? I’m so hooked can you tell? PPS
Wow, what a dilemma for Tina. That was very bittersweet. PPS.
it’s time for tina to let go…of helena LOL
love this story… i think tina needs to go to helena and find her with another woman.. then book her flight and go to bette… so you are waiting for the presidents results here in the states… it should be a long night… wish us luck… so are you going to L5 next week in london… i am… if you are going… look for me…PPS
wow phew! u have ways with words. keep it up. im hoping that maybe, just maybe Tina will visit Bette. But i rather Bette find the cure and go home to Tina.
poor tina she must broke things with helena so she could fallow her heart and be with bette
wow such a long and well written update. I enjoyed it so. Well I see we have Tina attempting to be a mature adult, instead of cheating on Helena she wants to tell her how she feels first…so do it already and go to Bette.
Finally they both admit they have fallen in love. Such a great story.
that was beautifully written! thanks for the very long update!
What a wonderful chapter! I can’t wait for Thursday…OH..for your American friends, like myself, you should post a “victory chapter” on our Tuesday night. Must get to bed have to be at the voting booth at 6:30am. PPS
These 14 pages read like 2 – they flew by – so beautiful and touching. Your writing is such that I feel the passion and the love radiating from these 2 women. Here’s hoping there’s another 14 pg chapter waiting for me after I cast my vote in the big election on Tuesday……
awww – what a heart tearing story! I was so exicited about your fantastic loooong post! Thanks so much! And please post again before your trip – there is just no way that I survive the absence of your story for such a long time…. :)
Okay, they have fallen in love with each other and are not even in the same country, what is the next step? I hope that the survive this time away from each other. It also gives Tina some time to end her marriage to Helena.
” I needed to hear your voice one last time before I left. ” OMG, what an admission !! How could she hung up right after saying this ?! Well, actually… Actually, I can certainly see why she would do that, she just wasn’t ready to face the consequences of such a revelation, but at the same time she desperately needed to say those words to Tina for somehow it must be a relief for her… But how could she leave Tina like that ? With those words ?… This is so heartwrenching, no to mention excruciating ! … Anyway, off to read your last update now !
WOW This is so freaking good!
Wow…now thats what you call a chapter..nicely done love:) I am loving this story K…absolutely great…cant wiat for more….how many pages can you do this time;)
Finally caught up…phew..Fab update, great story telling but what do you mean by “…Since she couldn’t save herself.”?? I’m officially worried now, is Bette sick??Answers, please! ;)
ok, i’m dying here. so much love and sooo much pain. great chapter, great story! PPS
wonderful, just wonderful.. pps…
aaaahhhhh i can’t believe u could’nt even give us one kiss, your killing us woman, but i can’t wait to see what happens next!!!!
Thanks for the long post. I can’t wait until you can post an update. I know, I know—greedy, right? Heck, you just posted 14 pages and I’m asking for more! So DEMANDING…LOL! It’s such a bittersweet goodbye, it just broke my heart. Safe travels and PS.
oh wow, that hurt so much, brilliantly done. Thank u. pps