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Cure-all, Chapter 27
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The marble bust of Joseph Stahl, the benefactor, was covered in blood…
The blood of five professors who had been shot down. Amongst their lifeless bodies lying around, a soldier with an armband, shot in the head, his hand still gripping a gun… A rebel most probably.
“Tina, we have to get out of here.” James urged the blonde in a whispered voice, “They might still be here.”
A sudden noise seemed to prove him right, and he turned around swiftly, finger on the trigger of the gun.
“Don’t shoot…!” A voice suddenly reached them. A voice with an American accent.
A young man appeared from behind a large pillar. His hands were raised in the air, one of them holding a small video camera.
The man introduced himself as Max Sweeney. He was an American backpacker on a year trip through South and Central America. During his stay in Santaragua, he had heard about the orphanage and decided to make a small film on it.
“I got here this morning expecting games and laughter… But instead, I arrived just in time for the massacre.” He said shaking his head sadly.
He told them that the army had come. They had heard that rebels were hiding at the orphanage. They had found one talking to the professors near the revered bust. The execution had lasted less than 30 seconds…
“I have it all in here!” He said, holding the video camera.
He had hidden, scared to be discovered, but the soldiers, thrilled by their success, had gone mere minutes after the killing.
“We’ve got to get out of here.” James repeated, hustling Tina to the door.
But she stopped him and signaled them to shush. The silence that answered them was now more frightening than ever.
“What happened to the kids?” Tina said, deep concern obvious in her voice.
And James knew that she wouldn’t leave without an answer.
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Tina crushed the gas pedal as they passed the huge iron gate once again, but this time heading back to Santa Maria. James was driving his car ahead, and she was following him, behind the wheel on the orphanage truck that they had found in the garage. In the back, hidden under several big covers, Max the backpacker, and nine terrified small boys that wouldn’t leave her sight until she could be absolutely sure that they were safe…
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this is truly an amazing story! can’t wait for the next chapter. i am totally captivated! PPS!
this is truly one of the most amazing stories i have read! it it sucha thrilling tale.. please continue asap.
wow… you write like you were in this position before… i like that tina is not scared of these “Men”… i know you will keep her and bette safe… and james… PPS
I’m loving this story. Don’t keep us waiting too long for an update!
Hopefully Tina finds her way to Bette soon, but without bullet holes please! PPS
This story, or one like it, plays out somewhere every day and mostly without those of strong principles. We are truly blessed here in the USA
Wow I will wait with baited breath for the next post. Tina is playing with fire and there is nothing that will stop him from shooting her right where she stands. God Tina that I don’t know if I know how to be that brave. Great story k I love all the infectious disease tidbits.
don’t let anything happen to Tina please… wonderful chapter, pps!
wow very well written. I am sure this is as close as how it is in some of these countries.
oh come on… you can’t stop there… I love this story pleeeaaaase continue asap
Wow, that was fantastic. Can’t wait to see what happens next. PPS.
You write like you were in the war zone before. Love that our Tina is so very brave.When she is afraid she thinks of Bette, I been very ill, so help make me get better quicker and post very soon. thanks
OMG….how can you leave us like that. Please give us more soon.
Damn, Tina is brave or maybe not using her brain. Tina did something that most people will not do and that is to stand up and fight against the all out war. The sound of the trigger is not a good sign.
So you do have a thing for cliffies after all, huh ?… That’s just cruel !… LOL ! This chapter was absolutely ( fu..ing ) thrilling, K ! To me there are no other words to describe it. As for your characters… Well, I love this brave and incredibly strong Tina ( no matter how scared she must be inside ) and as crazy as this may sound I’m starting to fear even more for Bette than for Tina right now… I wonder what might have happened to her when she tried to get to the Embassy earlier… Especially since she was alone from what I gathered. She didn’t have a James or a Max Sweeney to “escort” her… Did I mention before how much I loved James, btw ? Fantastic chapter, Kword. Please don’t torture us too long, I can already tell the wait for next chapter is going to be excruciating.
This story is so realistic I have chills up and down my spine..Tina is really brave, God bless her
Bette where are you, come and resuce Tina!
WOW…go, Tina!!!
Puh…wow! Oxygen please! I was holding my breath almost the whole chapter! Amazing! Ant Tina is so strong and fearless…wow, wow, wow!!! Brilliant writing. Thanks for sharing your great talent with us. May I ask you a question? You don’t have to answer if it’s too personal. Were you in a war zone at some point in your life? I’m just curious because your writing seems so realistic.