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    Damaged Ch. 35

    Story written on July 6, 2005 by Akiracolorblind.
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    Marina confronts Melissa..Carmen’s surprised..Alice’s job interview…Tina’s in pain..Alice goes to the doctor..

                Marina was walking around the bar, talking to people and getting their orders. She smiled and walked off and gave the order to the cooks. She came back around, giving people coffees and looked up. She saw the person she was waited to see. She walked around the bar and walked over to the table this woman sat at. She sat down and crossed her arms.

     

    Can I help you? The woman asked.

     

    Yes, you can help me?

     

    Do you know a sweet woman by the name of Jenny Schecter? She asked with a raise eyebrow.

     

    Name rings a bell, what does this have to do with me? Marina laid her arms on the table and folded her hands.

     

    It has a lot to do with youI remember you Melissa, and I know you remember me too. A couple of nights ago, you put your hands on Jenny Marina looked away and backs at Melissa. If you lay another finger on Jenny, and I find out its you. Itll be the last thing you do. Do you understand? Melissa smirked and leaned onto the table.

     

    And what will you do about it? Marina smiled and stood up. She walked over to Melissas seat and stood in front of her. She slapped her across the face and stood. Melissa grabbed a hold of her face and looked up at Marina.

     

    You *****! Youre going to wish that you didnt do that. She stood up out of her seat, standing toe to toe with Marina.

     

    Well youre gonna wish that you never put your hands on Jenny. I think its time for you to leave my caf. Melissa looked at Marina again and walked out. Jenny got out of her car and headed for The Planet. On her way through the door, someone bumped into her. She turned around and looked at this person. She noticed that it was Melissa and knew something was wrong. She walked around and looked for Marina. She saw Marina sitting at a table and went over. Marina stood up and gave Jenny a hug.

     

    I just saw Melissa, she stormed out of here. What happened? Jenny pulled away from Marina.

     

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    1. I really hope Al and T are okay. Carmen really need to drop that Nikki chick…she is bad news. Can you say stalker!!! Great job with the story. Thanks for writing ;-)

    4. Well, well now Marina finally has her chance to “check Melissa”. I somehow get the feeling that Neither Jenny nor Marina has seen the last of Melissa. Ah poor Tina , I hope that she will be alright after the surgery. Alice it’s about time that you saw a doctor. Please let the baby be alright..As for Carmen, what the Hell is on her mind. Get rid of the stalker. Nice update anyway. Looking forward to seeing you again……

    5. hey i love the story lines you got going. im not trying to come off the wrong way or anything, but i think carmen is outta character in this whole Nikki thing. what i think you’re tryin to do is lead up to the fact that shane will find out and be hurt. like she always ends up being. i may be totally wrong. so sorry if im offending you. Im kinda tired of seeing shane hurt all the time. And im pretty sure carmen wouldnt be the one who hurt her. but you never know…
      – a devoted reader

    7. I agree with what ones poster said . I know this is fanfic(and a TERRIFIC ONE AT THAT) but Carmen is really actiong out of character , like she doesn’t care for Shane which is very odd because she’s in love with her from day one. Sorry for the rambling , you are doing a great job I just don’t get Carmen in this fic.

    8. I love it but if alice loses the baby she will need a lot of help from her friends but I think she would only want dana or mark please post soon

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