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    Damaged Ch. 35

    Story written on July 6, 2005 by Akiracolorblind.
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    Marina confronts Melissa..Carmen’s surprised..Alice’s job interview…Tina’s in pain..Alice goes to the doctor..

     

    I followed you, I had to see you. Carmen pushed her hair behind her ear.

     

    I told you, youll see me tonight. Now you have to leave ok?

     

    Alright. Ill see you around 10.

     

    Yeah. Carmen kissed Nikki quickly and headed out the door. Carmen looked around and headed down to the archives.

     

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                Alice headed over to Marks studio, before she headed over to her interview with L&G Magazine. She got out of her car and headed behind Jennys and Shanes house. She walked up to the door and knocked. She waited for a second and saw Mark appear. Mark smiled and opens the door.

     

    Hey.

     

    Hi. I just wanted to stop by and see what was going on.

     

    UmmNothing much really.

     

    Oh, I was wondering if you wanted to go out for dinner or whatever if youre not busy. You know its up to you”. Alice stopped when she saw a female appear behind Mark. Am I missing something here? She chuckled a little.

     

    Alice, this is Holly. Holly, this is Alice, a friend of mine. The dirty blonde stood close to Mark and waved.

     

    Hi, wellIm gonna go, I have an interview to go. I dont want to be late. Alice started to back away. It was nice meeting you Holly. Ill talk to you later Mark. Alice turned around and headed towards the front of the house. She walked to her car and got in.

     

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                Dana walked into her apartment and headed for the kitchen. She smiled when she saw Lara making dinner. She walked up behind her and wrapped her arms around her. She kissed Lara on her neck and laid her head on her shoulder.

     

    Hey you. Lara smiled while stirring the spoon in the pot.

     

    Hey, how was your day?

     

    Just fine, Ive been waiting for you to get home.

     

    Oh really? Lara took the spoon out of the pot and wiped her hands off. She turned herself around and wrapped her arms around Danas neck.

     

    Yes, Ive been dying to see that pretty face all day. Dana smiled and kissed Lara.

     

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    1. I really hope Al and T are okay. Carmen really need to drop that Nikki chick…she is bad news. Can you say stalker!!! Great job with the story. Thanks for writing ;-)

    4. Well, well now Marina finally has her chance to “check Melissa”. I somehow get the feeling that Neither Jenny nor Marina has seen the last of Melissa. Ah poor Tina , I hope that she will be alright after the surgery. Alice it’s about time that you saw a doctor. Please let the baby be alright..As for Carmen, what the Hell is on her mind. Get rid of the stalker. Nice update anyway. Looking forward to seeing you again……

    5. hey i love the story lines you got going. im not trying to come off the wrong way or anything, but i think carmen is outta character in this whole Nikki thing. what i think you’re tryin to do is lead up to the fact that shane will find out and be hurt. like she always ends up being. i may be totally wrong. so sorry if im offending you. Im kinda tired of seeing shane hurt all the time. And im pretty sure carmen wouldnt be the one who hurt her. but you never know…
      – a devoted reader

    7. I agree with what ones poster said . I know this is fanfic(and a TERRIFIC ONE AT THAT) but Carmen is really actiong out of character , like she doesn’t care for Shane which is very odd because she’s in love with her from day one. Sorry for the rambling , you are doing a great job I just don’t get Carmen in this fic.

    8. I love it but if alice loses the baby she will need a lot of help from her friends but I think she would only want dana or mark please post soon

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