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Damaged Ch. 35
Well Alice, Im very impressed with this. This is exactly what Im looking for. I think you got yourself a job.
Oh my god, are you serious? Jordana smiled and nodded her head yes. Alice shrieked and jumped out of her seat. Jordana got up from her chair and leaned against the table. Alice grabbed Jordanas hand and shook it.
Thank you so much for this. You dont know how much this makes me feel.
Ill give you a call and tell you when your first day is. Ill be seeing you soon.
Thanks again. Bye. Alice grabbed her portfolio and headed for the double doors. Jordana watched Alice walked out of the conference room and smiled to herself. Alice headed towards the elevator, in pure joy. She got a phone call and answered it.
Hello?Hey BetteWhats wrong?What?!Alright, Im on my wayBye. The elevator door opens, and Alice hopped on.
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Bette was pacing back and forth in the waiting room. Mark and Kit was sitting down, trying to keep her calm. She ran her fingers through her thick hair, waiting for the doctors to come. Bettes head turns towards the elevator and saw Alice, Shane and Carmen. Alice ran over to Bette and gave her a hug.
I didnt think you guys were coming.
Why wouldnt we? Were family remember? Alice said with a smile. Bette cracked a smile and sat down.
So what happened? Shane asked.
Last night, Tina rear ends a SUV. When I picked her up, she said she was doing fine. But today, she was in agony. She said her neck was bothering her, so I brought her here. Thanks to Marks help.
Well, have you heard anything yet? Carmen asked.
No, were still waiting. Alice rubbed Bettes back. They all sat down and waiting. Jenny and Marina came and waited for awhile. Alice picked up a pamphlet about pregnancy. She was excited and nervous about the whole pregnancy. She unfolded the pamphlet and started to read it. She cringed when she started to get cramps in her stomach. She didnt think anything and shrugged them off. Bette shot up from her seat when she saw the doctor head their way.
Mrs. Porter, I have some news on Mrs. Kennard.
Tell me, is it serious?
It would of got worse, if you waited. Mrs. Kennard has a ruptured disk that was cause when she slammed into the steering wheel. Bette became teary-eyed. Shell have to have surgery so it can heal, and shell be able to move that neck again. The surgery will be tomorrow. So you can head on home and get some rest. Come back in the morning.
If you dont mind, I would like to stay with my wife tonight.
Ok, if you would like to follow me, well get her in her room.
Alright, Ill see you guys later. Thanks for coming you guys.
Baby sis, are you going to be ok?
Yeah Kit, Ill be fine. Go ahead, Ill see you in the morning. Kit headed towards the elevator and waited to get on. Everybody else left, except for Alice. She started to feel pain in her stomach. She didnt know what was wrong, so she looked for a nurse. She walked over to the desk and saw someone.
Excuse meHi, I was wondering if you could help me.
Sure thing sweetie. What can I help you with?
Well Im pregnant, and Im starting to have stomach pains. So I was wondering if I could get myself checked out.
How far a long are you?
I really dont know cause this is my first time coming here.
Alright hunny, follow me, and well get yourself checked out.
Ok. The nurse came from behind the desk and headed towards the double doors. They headed towards the paternity area of the hospital. The nurse found an empty room, and Alice went inside.
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I really hope Al and T are okay. Carmen really need to drop that Nikki chick…she is bad news. Can you say stalker!!! Great job with the story. Thanks for writing ;-)
ohh i´m worried about Al´s baby now..i hope shell be ok and Tina as well..great update thanks:-)
Go Marina! Melissa has been officially warned. She better watch her back.
Well, well now Marina finally has her chance to “check Melissa”. I somehow get the feeling that Neither Jenny nor Marina has seen the last of Melissa. Ah poor Tina , I hope that she will be alright after the surgery. Alice it’s about time that you saw a doctor. Please let the baby be alright..As for Carmen, what the Hell is on her mind. Get rid of the stalker. Nice update anyway. Looking forward to seeing you again……
hey i love the story lines you got going. im not trying to come off the wrong way or anything, but i think carmen is outta character in this whole Nikki thing. what i think you’re tryin to do is lead up to the fact that shane will find out and be hurt. like she always ends up being. i may be totally wrong. so sorry if im offending you. Im kinda tired of seeing shane hurt all the time. And im pretty sure carmen wouldnt be the one who hurt her. but you never know…
– a devoted reader
Yeah! Marina “bitch-slapped” Melissa, but did Melissa really get it…hmmm.
I agree with what ones poster said . I know this is fanfic(and a TERRIFIC ONE AT THAT) but Carmen is really actiong out of character , like she doesn’t care for Shane which is very odd because she’s in love with her from day one. Sorry for the rambling , you are doing a great job I just don’t get Carmen in this fic.
I love it but if alice loses the baby she will need a lot of help from her friends but I think she would only want dana or mark please post soon