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    Damaged Ch. 35

    Hey Tina, where does it hurt at?

     

    Its my neck, its killing me.

     

    Alright, Im going to lift you ok? If you feel pain, itll just be a little. Mark slowly pushed his hands under Tinas body and lifted her up slowly. Tina winced in pain, but slowly wrapped her arm around Marks neck. Mark started to move slowly out of the bedroom and through the hall. Bette ran out of the house and started the car. Bette stood next to her car and waited for Mark to head out the door. Mark slowly made it outside and walked down the steps slowly. Bette open the door, and Mark slowly sat Tina down on the seat. Mark closed the door and headed over on Bettes side. He moved the seat back and sat behind the drivers seat. Bette got into the car and drove to the hospital.

     

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                Alice was sitting in the office, waiting for her interview. She tugged at her skirt, making sure everything looked ok. She overlooked her paper for umpteenth time. She kept looking at the clock, every 5 minutes. She was very nervous, she didnt think what to expect when she walked through those double doors.

     

    Miss Pieszecki, shes ready for you. Alice stood up and grabbed her purse. She grabbed her portfolio and headed for the double doors. She pushed the doors forward and noticed the long table in the room. She walked to the other end of the table and stopped in front of attracted woman. Alice stood there with portfolio in hand. The woman turned her way and smiled.

     

    Hi, Miss Pieszecki. Im Jordana Wilson. She held out her hand.

     

    Nice to meet you, you can call me Alice. She smiled and shook her hand. Alice took a seat and sat her portfolio in front of her.

     

    Is this it? Jordana asked.

     

    Yes, everything should be in there.

     

    Why dont we take a look. She smiled and opened it up. Alice watched Jordanas every movement. She became more and more fond of this nicely tanned woman. Her brunette hair, so flawless. Her soft lips, cute nose, beautiful brown eyes. Alice placed her hands in between her thighs and watched this woman closely. Jordana put the folio down and put her hands on the table.

    Comments

    1. I really hope Al and T are okay. Carmen really need to drop that Nikki chick…she is bad news. Can you say stalker!!! Great job with the story. Thanks for writing ;-)

    2. Well, well now Marina finally has her chance to “check Melissa”. I somehow get the feeling that Neither Jenny nor Marina has seen the last of Melissa. Ah poor Tina , I hope that she will be alright after the surgery. Alice it’s about time that you saw a doctor. Please let the baby be alright..As for Carmen, what the Hell is on her mind. Get rid of the stalker. Nice update anyway. Looking forward to seeing you again……

    3. hey i love the story lines you got going. im not trying to come off the wrong way or anything, but i think carmen is outta character in this whole Nikki thing. what i think you’re tryin to do is lead up to the fact that shane will find out and be hurt. like she always ends up being. i may be totally wrong. so sorry if im offending you. Im kinda tired of seeing shane hurt all the time. And im pretty sure carmen wouldnt be the one who hurt her. but you never know…
      – a devoted reader

    4. I agree with what ones poster said . I know this is fanfic(and a TERRIFIC ONE AT THAT) but Carmen is really actiong out of character , like she doesn’t care for Shane which is very odd because she’s in love with her from day one. Sorry for the rambling , you are doing a great job I just don’t get Carmen in this fic.

    5. I love it but if alice loses the baby she will need a lot of help from her friends but I think she would only want dana or mark please post soon

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