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    Dance With Us 16

    Story written on November 22, 2009 by tibette417.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=74574
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    Uh Oh

    Tina (laughing): Papi you should have stayed quiet. 

    Lisa (grabbing Kai as she ran past): Time out…

    Tina (picking up Angie): Time out. You need to get some juice in you or you’ll get sick.

    Angie (leaning back): Aunt Lena funny….

    Helena (taking a deep breath): Not funny, getting to old…

    Kai (sticking her tongue out): Aren’t you and Bette the same (Lisa’s hand covered her mouth.)

    Lisa (warning): Don’t finish that.

    Bette (handing Angie her juice cup): Slow baby. (Looking at Kai) and yes do not finish that.

    Tasha (setting things on the table): She takes after you, slow is not an option.

    Kit (brushing back Papi’s hair): True…

    Dylan (carrying out a stack of paper plates and two towels slung over her shoulder): Helena, your mom wants to talk with you about something.  

    Helena (wringing her hair out): Thank you (kissing her softly.)

    Dylan (shaking her head): Your welcome. Oh and Carmen and Shane just pulled in.

    Carmen (opening the gate): Sorry, overslept…

    Bette (brushing back Angie’s hair): That’s what they’re calling it these days.

    Shane (setting a few bags down): Calling what…

    Tina (slapping Bette on the arm): Do not finish that and please don’t encourage her.

    Bette (mischievously): Oversleeping versus um…

    Shane (catching on): It wasn’t like that. Well um…

    Bette (teasing): Busted…

    Carmen (wondering; realization dawning on her): Bette get your mind out of the gutter. (Thinking) it’s always the excuse why you two are always late.

    Tina (setting Angie down who immediately ran to Papi): No it’s not always the same excuse. We have a child and (forgetting what she was saying as Bette leaned down and kissed her, nibbling her bottom lip, leaving her standing there.)

    Dylan (waving her hand in front of Tina’s face): Ooh that’s the same look Helena gives me after ouch (pulling her arm back.)

    Helena (noticing Tina’s blush): That reminds me of you…

    Tina (shaking her head): Hush (darting after Helena after she smacked her ass.)

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    1. wow…its been too long and hopefully the next update will come asap..i love this story..i imagine it must take a lot work to come up with all the banter between all the characters..i was wondering how long it would take before one of the gang found out…wonder how Alice will handle it and once she finds out the truth?? Please update again soon.

    4. For a comeback, this was one. I love family time like this. Life is too short to be fighting and unhappy all way through, Life is so short that any opportunity to be togetherand happyas a family is great.Yet I didn’t want somebody to know what was happening between Bette, Tina and Helena just yet. Not this way anyway. Now, I hope Alice would decide to talk to Tina first before making any fast conclusion. It great to have you back mate. PPVS

    5. Hello TB417, Wow wee what a great chappie.The showdown with Tina aunt and partner was tense and sweetly balanced by the hilarity of Bette and the gang. The methods suggested to try Bette down were so humorous.Good to have Dylan and Helena maknig headway and with Peggy’s approval. They do have far to go and are now on the right track.Angie was adorable as she stole the show and added much needed calmness to Tina’s meeting.The house party was a blast as the whole gang took part. So much laughter and enjoyment as well as splashing and soaking.Then Tina offering Helena some comfort at Dylan’s departure is caught by Alice. Dropped mouth as Alice tries to digest this sight and think about the hurricane to follow.TB417 you have rewritten the rules here and I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your stunned and Loyal Fan.

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