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Dance With Us 16
Kai (wondering if Bette really did need those cloves of garlic): Bette relax or I’m going in my car and getting a Valium…
Alice (smiling): I want some…
Tasha (rolling her eyes): Why, you don’t need it?
Carmen (teasing): No but you might (laughing, dodging the thrown napkin.).)
Center Table
Tina (picking up Angie; she was relieved and nervous at her daughter being here): Hey baby! Did you have a good time with Noni?
Angie (nodding; looking at the two strangers): Who this?
Tina (smiling): Angie, (softly) you say I’m Angie and who are you?
Angie (looking at her momma then at the two other woman): Who this?
Michaela (laughing): She’s absolutely precious.
Danyael (reaching across the table): I’m Danyael and this is my girlfriend Michaela, your mom’s aunt.
Angie (looking at her momma, complete child innocence): Like my mommies…
Tina (laughing):Yes like your momma B and I (watching as Angie put her small hand into the larger one.)
Angie (trying to remember what her momma B taught her): Nice meet you…
Michaela (biting her lip): She’s too cute for words.
Front Counter
Helena (sipping her juice): Remind me to bring Angie for the next meeting we have.
Kit (looking at her): Why?
Papi (motioning): Because she can melt anyone’s heart and get right to the matter at hand. She’s going to be a heart breaker.
Helena (watching): And Bette’s going to stroke out.
Kit (setting the dish towel down): Let me go calm my sister down before she does blow a gasket.
Helena (helpfully): I have Xanax, Vistaril and…
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(46 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
wow…its been too long and hopefully the next update will come asap..i love this story..i imagine it must take a lot work to come up with all the banter between all the characters..i was wondering how long it would take before one of the gang found out…wonder how Alice will handle it and once she finds out the truth?? Please update again soon.
Oh so happy you are back with this. I have been checking all the time and when I saw that you posted!!!!!! So excited, love it, please keep going.
woo woo Great to have you back at last lol. I am going to enjoy this slowly pmsl.
For a comeback, this was one. I love family time like this. Life is too short to be fighting and unhappy all way through, Life is so short that any opportunity to be togetherand happyas a family is great.Yet I didn’t want somebody to know what was happening between Bette, Tina and Helena just yet. Not this way anyway. Now, I hope Alice would decide to talk to Tina first before making any fast conclusion. It great to have you back mate. PPVS
Hello TB417, Wow wee what a great chappie.The showdown with Tina aunt and partner was tense and sweetly balanced by the hilarity of Bette and the gang. The methods suggested to try Bette down were so humorous.Good to have Dylan and Helena maknig headway and with Peggy’s approval. They do have far to go and are now on the right track.Angie was adorable as she stole the show and added much needed calmness to Tina’s meeting.The house party was a blast as the whole gang took part. So much laughter and enjoyment as well as splashing and soaking.Then Tina offering Helena some comfort at Dylan’s departure is caught by Alice. Dropped mouth as Alice tries to digest this sight and think about the hurricane to follow.TB417 you have rewritten the rules here and I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your stunned and Loyal Fan.
Oh shit now Alice know!