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Dance With Us 16
Everyone watched as Angie walked right up to her mother, the calming effect immediate and welcome.
Lisa (smiling): Remember that for future references.
Bette (kissing her daughter): Hi Boo, did you have a good time?
Angie (kissing her momma): Yes and momma T said if you don’t calm down you’re going to sleep on the couch.
That set the table into hysterics, not only because of the comment but Bette’s reaction. If anyone besides her daughter had said that they would be in serious hot water.
Bette (going nose to nose with her daughter): Your momma T said that…
Angie (wondering what was so funny): Yep. That’s what she said.
Everyone was still laughing and Bette tried to glare at them to no avail.
Shane (reaching over and high fiving Angie): Good girl.
Angie (getting down): Up (reaching for Shane.)
Shane (picking her up): Would you like a cookie?
Bette (finishing her coffee): No cookies…
Carmen (throwing a wadded napkin at her): Hush she’s five she can have a cookie if she wants.
Kit (playfully smacking her in the back of the head): Your daughter can have all the cookies she wants (ignoring Bette’s glare.)
Dylan (standing up): I’ll go get those cookies. What kind would you like?
Angie (reaching for her): Me come…
Alice (leaning on Tasha): We are in so much trouble…
Carmen (getting up): You think…
Lisa (wondering if she should retire now): Imagine as she gets older.
Kai (teasing): She won’t be that bad (seeing the looks of everyone) okay maybe but she’s absolutely adorable.
Tina’s Table
Michaela (laughing): Your friends are high spirited.
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(46 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
wow…its been too long and hopefully the next update will come asap..i love this story..i imagine it must take a lot work to come up with all the banter between all the characters..i was wondering how long it would take before one of the gang found out…wonder how Alice will handle it and once she finds out the truth?? Please update again soon.
Oh so happy you are back with this. I have been checking all the time and when I saw that you posted!!!!!! So excited, love it, please keep going.
woo woo Great to have you back at last lol. I am going to enjoy this slowly pmsl.
For a comeback, this was one. I love family time like this. Life is too short to be fighting and unhappy all way through, Life is so short that any opportunity to be togetherand happyas a family is great.Yet I didn’t want somebody to know what was happening between Bette, Tina and Helena just yet. Not this way anyway. Now, I hope Alice would decide to talk to Tina first before making any fast conclusion. It great to have you back mate. PPVS
Hello TB417, Wow wee what a great chappie.The showdown with Tina aunt and partner was tense and sweetly balanced by the hilarity of Bette and the gang. The methods suggested to try Bette down were so humorous.Good to have Dylan and Helena maknig headway and with Peggy’s approval. They do have far to go and are now on the right track.Angie was adorable as she stole the show and added much needed calmness to Tina’s meeting.The house party was a blast as the whole gang took part. So much laughter and enjoyment as well as splashing and soaking.Then Tina offering Helena some comfort at Dylan’s departure is caught by Alice. Dropped mouth as Alice tries to digest this sight and think about the hurricane to follow.TB417 you have rewritten the rules here and I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your stunned and Loyal Fan.
Oh shit now Alice know!