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Dance With Us 16
Kit (swatting her): Behave both of you…
Papi (mumbling): How much trouble can we cause? And what is your mom doing (mumbling) besides the obvious?
Helena (watching as Peggy set a deck of cards on the table): I have no idea.
Corner Table
Peggy (dealing the cards): Rummy…
Shane (seeing Kit heading their way): Trouble…
Alice (taking her cards): Sure…
Carmen (taking her own set): 300 or 500?
Tasha (looking around): Only you…
Dylan (looking at Helena and Papi who were arm wrestling): Excuse me…
Shane (grabbing her): Oh no you don’t. I’m not sitting her watching Bette by myself (wincing as Bette growled again.)
Kai (reaching over): Bette will you relax? And what are we chopped liver?
Lisa (rolling her eyes): You’re going to be if you don’t sit still….
Kai (snapping her teeth): Bite me…
Carmen (laughing): Ooh someone’s frisky…
Lisa (clamping a hand over Kai’s mouth): Shh…
Bette (growling): I swear, does she have to go and do that (gesturing to Angie showing Tina’s aunts something.)
Peggy (softly): Bette, honey, calm down. This isn’t good for your blood pressure. Tina’s fine, Angie’s being her usual charming self…
Alice (teasing): That she does not get from Bette (slouching in her chair) if looks could kill.
Kit (pulling a chair next to her sister): Bette we all know you’re the bad ass of the bunch, relax. You’re making my blood pressure jump.
Peggy (watching as Angie bee lined for their table): And here comes our little charmer.
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(46 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
wow…its been too long and hopefully the next update will come asap..i love this story..i imagine it must take a lot work to come up with all the banter between all the characters..i was wondering how long it would take before one of the gang found out…wonder how Alice will handle it and once she finds out the truth?? Please update again soon.
Oh so happy you are back with this. I have been checking all the time and when I saw that you posted!!!!!! So excited, love it, please keep going.
woo woo Great to have you back at last lol. I am going to enjoy this slowly pmsl.
For a comeback, this was one. I love family time like this. Life is too short to be fighting and unhappy all way through, Life is so short that any opportunity to be togetherand happyas a family is great.Yet I didn’t want somebody to know what was happening between Bette, Tina and Helena just yet. Not this way anyway. Now, I hope Alice would decide to talk to Tina first before making any fast conclusion. It great to have you back mate. PPVS
Hello TB417, Wow wee what a great chappie.The showdown with Tina aunt and partner was tense and sweetly balanced by the hilarity of Bette and the gang. The methods suggested to try Bette down were so humorous.Good to have Dylan and Helena maknig headway and with Peggy’s approval. They do have far to go and are now on the right track.Angie was adorable as she stole the show and added much needed calmness to Tina’s meeting.The house party was a blast as the whole gang took part. So much laughter and enjoyment as well as splashing and soaking.Then Tina offering Helena some comfort at Dylan’s departure is caught by Alice. Dropped mouth as Alice tries to digest this sight and think about the hurricane to follow.TB417 you have rewritten the rules here and I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon.Many thanks from Your stunned and Loyal Fan.
Oh shit now Alice know!