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    Dance With Us 3

    Story written on February 27, 2009 by tibette417.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=72737
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    Coming Home

    Bette (groaning as she realized the true culprits): Tasha you (watching as she bent her head down) and Shane why am I not surprised…
    Tasha (defensively): Well at least I don’t own a rubber ducky with horns and a pitch fork or a demented rabbit…
    Shane (defensively): The rabbit is so not demented, its misunderstood…
    Kit (rolling her eyes): Sure, now where did I hear that one before…
    Bette (mouthing): I’m doomed…
    Angie (looking up at her momma): Boom, Stitch go boom…
    Alice (grimacing): Angie your momma is going to kill me…
    Bette (shaking her head): Come here you (picking up Angie and hugging her tightly) I love you.
    Angie (kissing her): Love you too…
    Carmen (kissing Shane’s neck): Take lessons dear…
    Papi (kissing Angie goodnight): It just might keep you from not being able to sit down for a week…
    Tasha (shrugging): All you need is rope and a chair (realizing what she had said as everyone looked at her, thankfully Angie was oblivious.) Shit…
    Kit (rescuing Tasha from further embarrassment): Here (handing Tasha a large carry out bag) before Angie decides she wants an entire ground fleet to accompany the battleships and my sister has a panic attack or ends up not being able to sit for a week (ignoring Bette’s mumbled curses.)
    Tasha (grateful): Thank you. You ready pumpkin (Angie nodded) alright thank you good night ladies (pausing) and Shane (Shane looked at her) have fun with the rubber ducky….
    Shane (reaching for her as Carmen held her back): Wait till I get my hands on you….
    Papi (opening her phone): Ms. Peabody how can I be of assistance. No not since earlier. (Taking the phone away from her ear) has anyone heard from Tina or Helena in the past couple of hours (glancing at Bette) well except for her earlier (winking.). Helena was due at a dinner with her mom an hour ago.
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    Comments

    1. I wanted to read through the whole chapter, but I really had a hard time following the dialogue because of all the descriptions you added in parenthesis. I understand that this is how it is done in script form, but because there is no spaces between the characters lines, it really is hard and confusing to read. I wanted to though!! If you change the format let me know. Thanks!

    2. Okay, I read it. You’ve got the makings of a really interesting story here, but to echo what Seahurst said, the formatting makes this fairly difficult to read. If you need a hand with formatting or whatever else, PM me and I’ll be happy to help. Cheers

    3. WOW! First I was like WTF, then I was like what she raped her, then I was like man what is Bette doing now I’m just confused I don’t know what to think.

    4. I have received a lot of WTF’s (lol.) I’ll give a short explanation. Helena’s a mess and is drowning in alcohol, pills and her past. Bette and Tina are the only ones to reach her. However, Bette has to push Helena to her limits of losing all control before they can get through the walls. The passion between Helena and Tina was bordering on consensual and non consensual. Between Bette and Helena however, it was Bette pushing her control so Helena would let her walls down.

    6. Thank you for the suggestion. I’m still getting the hang of this and appreciate any tips or advice. It’s been re edited for viewing and if it needs more drop me a line.

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