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    Dance With Us 3

    Story written on February 27, 2009 by tibette417.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=72737
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    Coming Home

    Alice (picking Angie up): Of course. We’ll meet here for breakfast, right (everyone nodded) good.  
    Bette (watching Alice and Tasha leave): Kit I’m going over to the studio. I’ll call you later.
    Kit (hugging her tightly): She probably lost track of time but you being you are going to show up with flowers or some other little gift. (Bette bit her lip) busted baby sis. Face it (smiling) this time around you two are more in love with each other.
    Bette (seriously): I am and I made a promise to her that no matter what I’ll keep it. (Fidgeting) if not for us then for that little girl of ours. (Watching as Papi walked with Kit to her office to finish the business for the day.)
    Carmen (squeezing her shoulder): You know how it gets she could be in another conference to fix Lez Girls as she is now as Alice put it the head honcho and 
    Shane (supportively): I’ll go with you.
    Bette(smiling): No it’s fine. I’m just…
    Shane (shaking her head): I’ve got to check on some things anyway. See what the hell the schedule is like and such and who I have to report to or in my case answer too.
    Carmen (leaning up and kissing her): Good. It’ll give me the chance to get some grocery shopping down and actually bring home something healthy. (Kissing her again) maybe make you something (whispering a suggestion in Shane’s ear which promptly turned beet read.)
    Bette (laughing): Let me guess those homemade sugar cookies (Carmen nodded) Tina and Angie love them.  
    Shane (wrapping an arm around Bette’s shoulder): So, tell me what your plans are for this gallery.
    Carmen (giggling): Good one dear. Although I’m sure Bette would also like to know…
    Shane (turning around kissing her hard; her hands grasping her hips): You are so bad…
    Carmen (rubbing her bottom lip with her thumb): You know it…
    Shane turned around walked out with Bette wondering just what might be holding Tina and Helena up.

    Shaolin Studios Tina’s Office
    Tina (grabbing Helena’s hand): Stop, please. No more (exhausted and sweating) stop (panting…)

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    Comments

    1. I wanted to read through the whole chapter, but I really had a hard time following the dialogue because of all the descriptions you added in parenthesis. I understand that this is how it is done in script form, but because there is no spaces between the characters lines, it really is hard and confusing to read. I wanted to though!! If you change the format let me know. Thanks!

    2. Okay, I read it. You’ve got the makings of a really interesting story here, but to echo what Seahurst said, the formatting makes this fairly difficult to read. If you need a hand with formatting or whatever else, PM me and I’ll be happy to help. Cheers

    3. WOW! First I was like WTF, then I was like what she raped her, then I was like man what is Bette doing now I’m just confused I don’t know what to think.

    4. I have received a lot of WTF’s (lol.) I’ll give a short explanation. Helena’s a mess and is drowning in alcohol, pills and her past. Bette and Tina are the only ones to reach her. However, Bette has to push Helena to her limits of losing all control before they can get through the walls. The passion between Helena and Tina was bordering on consensual and non consensual. Between Bette and Helena however, it was Bette pushing her control so Helena would let her walls down.

    6. Thank you for the suggestion. I’m still getting the hang of this and appreciate any tips or advice. It’s been re edited for viewing and if it needs more drop me a line.

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