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Dance With Us 3
Story written on February 27, 2009 by tibette417.
Helena (softly): Gods (pushing Tina towards the couch never letting go; not wanting to ever let go; searching for an anchor in a ferocious storm of lust and betrayal, love and deceit. She gently reached down and pushed Tina’s legs apart settling her hips between them groaning as Tina thrust upward to meet her.)
Tina (groaning; grabbing Helena’s ass; pulling her closer; their mouths met in a bruising, dizzying kiss; she could feel Helena’s heat as the Brit straddled her thigh and began rocking against her): Gods….
Helena (leaning back a little and undoing Tina’s shirt; revealing delicious breasts hidden behind black lace; her hips pumping harder in reaction; Tina’s hands gripped her hips to still her): Tina…
Tina (gently; softly): Tell me..
Helena (shaking her head): No (reaching between them and undoing Tina’s jeans; wanting the sweet essence that was this woman; sliding her hand inside, her fingers through copious silky moisture coating them making not only her clit ache but her fingers as well as she remembered how good it felt to have Tina’s walls gripping them; grazing the hardened nub and eliciting a long throaty groan; pumping gently, teasingly she looked up into green eyes glazed with passion, leaning forward kissing bruised lips with gentle nibbles and bites; sliding two fingers inside her, smiling as Tina mewled and cried out.) Taste (sliding her fingers out and putting one in Tina’s mouth) so hot (as Tina sucked her finger in her mouth locking eyes.)
Tina (unable to control her bodies demands yanking open Helena’s shirt and undoing her bra revealing two soft creamy breasts): Beautiful (pushing up and seizing a hardened nipple between her lips sucking biting licking. Taking the other one in her hand she slid a shortened nail over the nipple; smiling at Helena’s smiling at her desperation.)
Helena (cupping Tina’s face in her hand; the smoky gaze consumed and devoured her; their mouths met demanding, fierce and hungry): I’ve missed you.
Tina (throwing her head back as Helena penetrated her fully; her eyes closed tightly, surrendering to her bodies demand and need for release; images of Bette making love to her, taking her, fucking her): Helena I can’t please…
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I wanted to read through the whole chapter, but I really had a hard time following the dialogue because of all the descriptions you added in parenthesis. I understand that this is how it is done in script form, but because there is no spaces between the characters lines, it really is hard and confusing to read. I wanted to though!! If you change the format let me know. Thanks!
Okay, I read it. You’ve got the makings of a really interesting story here, but to echo what Seahurst said, the formatting makes this fairly difficult to read. If you need a hand with formatting or whatever else, PM me and I’ll be happy to help. Cheers
WOW! First I was like WTF, then I was like what she raped her, then I was like man what is Bette doing now I’m just confused I don’t know what to think.
I have received a lot of WTF’s (lol.) I’ll give a short explanation. Helena’s a mess and is drowning in alcohol, pills and her past. Bette and Tina are the only ones to reach her. However, Bette has to push Helena to her limits of losing all control before they can get through the walls. The passion between Helena and Tina was bordering on consensual and non consensual. Between Bette and Helena however, it was Bette pushing her control so Helena would let her walls down.
nice story!
Thank you for the suggestion. I’m still getting the hang of this and appreciate any tips or advice. It’s been re edited for viewing and if it needs more drop me a line.
”Not anymore. You’re going to stay with Tina and I.” – Helena, T&B? Wow, this is certainly a combustive combo!
i think there is nothing hotter than the three of them together, i hope you continue with this story!!!!!!
Damn this is so good!