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Dance With Us 9
Helena (bitterly): Like you know me so well…
Dylan (frustrated): Dammit Helena, no matter what I do it’s not good enough…
Tina (coming down the back steps): Can you two argue any louder?
Helena (bashfully): Sorry (pointing) she’s not listening…
Dylan (throwing her hands up): Me (rolling her eyes) you should talk…
Tina (holding her hands up): Hold it. Time out. Both of you zip it. (Rubbing her face) have a seat. Don’t say a word. I’m going to get a cup of coffee just sit there (walking into the kitchen; wincing as she heard Bette yelling.) Why is it, no one in this family can talk when they’re angry?
Bette (shutting her mouth quickly): Baby sorry, did we wake you.
Tina (shaking her head): No, the two culprits out there did. Where’s Angie?
Alice (biting her lip): With Aunt Kit, Aunt Papi and Noni. She’s going to school in style.
Tina (looking at Bette who put her head down): What? (Setting her coffee down) Peggy, Kit, where’s Angie…
Shane (dumping trash): So how about we go for a ride…
Carmen (picking up the breakfast dishes): Right to Anger Management Class.
Bette (groaning as she heard Tina yelling and more yelling from Dylan and Helena): She can yell but we can’t. (Wincing as Tina gave her a warning.) Can someone just shoot me?
Duffy Residence Outskirts of LA
Lisa (pulling into the circular driveway; she was bone tired; dragging and had to be back at the station in four hours; the case on Jenny Shecter had kept her on duty until now almost fourteen hours straight with four hours of sleep before that): Shit, someone shoot me (opening up the front door.) Baby…
Kai (yelling): In the basement love. I’ve got you’re panels and reports up now and I’m reviewing them. (Quiet for a moment) and I’ve ruled out everyone but two people.
Lisa (limping down the stairs): What have you found my evil little genius?
Kai Duffy held a MD in Forensic Psychology and Pathology, as well as Profiling and Mortuary Science. Lisa herself had a Bachelor’s in Criminal Law and Forensic Psychology.
Kai (looking up at her wife): Ooh flattery will get you every where. (Seeing her love in pain and exhausted) never mind go in there (pointing to the shower) take a shower and crash on the couch (wrapping her arms around her. ) The phones are rerouted straight to the answering machine, I’ll turn your pager and cell off and you can nap for a while.
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(27 votes, average: 3.41 out of 5)
Nice curve ball adding Catherine and Dusty to the mix. It’s definitely becoming a much more complex crime scene.
Badge #417 You are doing a wonderful job, with the people and the crime sence. Now you have added Dusty and Catherine and Wentworth. Lets get Dylan and Helena together. Peggy is so very good to the girls and might have added two more children to theother 9 or 10. thanks
wow that was so great..everything conversation …i can only inspire to be you..PPS
Who dun it????? Wow, what a mess. Let’s get Dusty and Catherine back in jail. I hope Bette doesn’t come face to face with Tina’s sister and father; they may wind you in the hospital and Bette in jail on assault charges. Great post. PPS
Wow, I totally love your dramatic writing style. Great job.
Hello TB417, What a wonderful mess you have created. I am just loving how all the gang are together and yet apart. Can’t wait to read more so please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh damn drama drama !