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Dance With Us 9
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Dylan (factually): That’s what happened the last time. I want to talk with you, spend time with you…
Alice (shaking her head): That’ll last two whole seconds…
Kit (rolling her eyes): It depends on what’s supposed to last…
Carmen (trying to figure out all the conversation between the yelling): I think if they stop yelling they might actually get something done.
Shane (cocking her head): From what I get is Helena wants what she wants and Dylan wants to talk…
Angie (piping up): No yell, no go boom….
Kit (giggling): No boom but yes Boo, someone (a little louder) is yelling. (Pausing) and quite unnecessarily.
Bette (storming in): Who the fuck is screaming? I’m going to rip their vocal cords out along with a few pieces of anatomy too…
Peggy (seeing Bette was anxious and upset): Bette, there’s coffee…
Alice (getting a prescription bottle from the cupboard): And Xanax and Vistaril…
Bette (yelling): You two, take it outside (grabbing Helena and Dylan by the elbow) I will not have my daughter subject to your tirades. (Opening the door) so either talk and listen or fuck each other and calm down. (Slamming the door) you (pointing to Alice) put those back and stay out of it. You (pointing to Angie watching as her daughter’s eyes grew bigger) pay no attention to your crazy aunts.
Angie (finishing her breakfast): Momma (watching her) momma…
Bette (sitting down and nursing her coffee): Yes baby…
Angie (getting down): Love you (running over and leaning her head on Bette’s knee.) No hurt no more. All better (laughing as she was picked up; kissing her cheek.)
Bette (fighting tears; the innocence of her daughter was so precious and she was the balm to her soul and raw nerves): Love you too baby…
Papi (looking at her cell phone and getting up): I swear I’m going to kill someone…
Shane (wincing): Again, didn’t you just ream her bum not ten minutes ago.
Peggy (teasing): Do you need another manager, darling?
Kit (worried): She needs a swift kick in the bum…
Shane (finishing): Or a long walk off a short pier…
Alice (looking for Tina): Where’s TK? Still sleeping…
Kit (slamming her hand on the table): Alice…
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Nice curve ball adding Catherine and Dusty to the mix. It’s definitely becoming a much more complex crime scene.
Badge #417 You are doing a wonderful job, with the people and the crime sence. Now you have added Dusty and Catherine and Wentworth. Lets get Dylan and Helena together. Peggy is so very good to the girls and might have added two more children to theother 9 or 10. thanks
wow that was so great..everything conversation …i can only inspire to be you..PPS
Who dun it????? Wow, what a mess. Let’s get Dusty and Catherine back in jail. I hope Bette doesn’t come face to face with Tina’s sister and father; they may wind you in the hospital and Bette in jail on assault charges. Great post. PPS
Wow, I totally love your dramatic writing style. Great job.
Hello TB417, What a wonderful mess you have created. I am just loving how all the gang are together and yet apart. Can’t wait to read more so please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh damn drama drama !