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Dance With Us 9
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Carmen (shaking her head): You’re going outside next…
Shane (looking at Bette): Anything we can do?
Peggy (rubbing Bette’s arm): Anything…
Bette (shaking her head; she was so close to just letting go; she hurt so badly for Tina and there was nothing she could do): No, not unless Tina says something.
Kit (finishing her breakfast): I’ll finish getting Boo ready. Eat something, you’re losing weight again and you can’t afford too.
Angie (kissing her momma): Me go…
Alice (laughing): She’s in charge, just like her momma…
Kit (picking Angie up): Porter the Third (kissing her cheek.)
Peggy (laughing): Exactly. She has the charm and personality of both her mother’s, she’s going to be a heart breaker.
Shane (proudly): That she is. Look at her now, she has every one of us wrapped around her finger.
Bette (smirking): And as she gets older…
They all looked at Bette, looked at where Angie had been then back at Bette. Peggy smiled and began making plans. Alice put her head down and begged for mercy, Shane and Carmen smiled proudly and shrugged.
Backyard
Dylan (lighting a cigarette; she had bought a pack last night before going down to the Police Station just in case she needed one and she really needed one right now): Helena please…
Helena (sitting down): I know why you don’t want to touch me…
Dylan (throwing her hands up): And why? (Pausing) since you’re so dam good at mind reading, tell me…
Helena (looking at the small tree): Because I’m not the same person. I’ve been to prison, I’ve been used…
Dylan (angrily): Bull shit. That’s bull shit. (Lighting another cigarette as Helena took hers) Gods don’t you see that makes me want you even more because you are so dam strong. I don’t want to touch you now because we don’t talk. We have little snippets of conversation then you, watching you, being close to you gets me so turned on and…
Helena (taking a drag on her cigarette then standing up): So it’s my fault you have no control. My fault as usual…
Dylan (grabbing her by the shoulders): No. (Bending her head down) no and don’t you even go there in that wicked little head of yours. You know dam well what I mean.
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Nice curve ball adding Catherine and Dusty to the mix. It’s definitely becoming a much more complex crime scene.
Badge #417 You are doing a wonderful job, with the people and the crime sence. Now you have added Dusty and Catherine and Wentworth. Lets get Dylan and Helena together. Peggy is so very good to the girls and might have added two more children to theother 9 or 10. thanks
wow that was so great..everything conversation …i can only inspire to be you..PPS
Who dun it????? Wow, what a mess. Let’s get Dusty and Catherine back in jail. I hope Bette doesn’t come face to face with Tina’s sister and father; they may wind you in the hospital and Bette in jail on assault charges. Great post. PPS
Wow, I totally love your dramatic writing style. Great job.
Hello TB417, What a wonderful mess you have created. I am just loving how all the gang are together and yet apart. Can’t wait to read more so please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh damn drama drama !