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Dance With Us 9
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Bette (pulling back so she could look at Tina): I know this hurts but I want to know one thing. (Pausing) did your father ever….
Kitchen
Peggy (leaning back watching Shane and Carmen tease Alice): Alice you asked for it. Open mouth insert foot and there you have it…
Alice (hitting Shane on the shoulder): But do you have to be so mean about it…
Carmen (sipping her coffee): It’s not mean (teasing) it’s honest (ducking the playful swat.)
Kit (coming in with Angie): Our rooster has been up for a while…
Alice (smiling): Go cock doodle doo your mommas then your Aunt Helena….
Kit (taking a plate from one of the cooks): Um no. Not this morning…
Alice (continuing): Why? Is Porter getting old or TK? Poor thing…
Peggy (sipping her tea): Old is not something I would describe Bette as…
Carmen (not getting it): Well um never mind…
Shane (laughing): Wait to Porter finds out…
Kit (knocking her hand on the table): Do me a favor (seriously? They looked at her) tone it down on the teasing right now. Tina’s not feeling to good and Bette’s being the proverbial…
Shane (understanding and helping Angie with her pancakes): Bear…
Alice (pouring Angie a glass of milk): Alpha (Carmen clamped her hand over her mouth.)
Papi (walking into the kitchen; yelling on the phone): Well find someone. I’ve been up most of the night (smirking) no I didn’t enjoy it. It’s a complicated mess. Read the headlines. No I’m taking time off for a family emergency and I’ll be taking more time off for another emergency if you don’t get your head out of your ass and do what I pay you to do. So fix it (shutting her phone.) Good morning…
Peggy (teasing): Honey, we can fix this…
Papi (not getting it): Fix what…
Peggy (winking): You not enjoying it….
Kit (laughing): That was good…
Papi (pouring coffee; kissing Kit; then Angie): How’s my favorite girl?
Angie (holding up a piece of pancake): Bite…
Papi (taking the piece of food): That’s good baby girl but you finish it up. I’ll get her to school.
Peggy (waving her h and): Nonsense. My driver has already been called and she’s on her way. So relax.
Helena (yelling and storming out into the kitchen): I can’t believe you….
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Nice curve ball adding Catherine and Dusty to the mix. It’s definitely becoming a much more complex crime scene.
Badge #417 You are doing a wonderful job, with the people and the crime sence. Now you have added Dusty and Catherine and Wentworth. Lets get Dylan and Helena together. Peggy is so very good to the girls and might have added two more children to theother 9 or 10. thanks
wow that was so great..everything conversation …i can only inspire to be you..PPS
Who dun it????? Wow, what a mess. Let’s get Dusty and Catherine back in jail. I hope Bette doesn’t come face to face with Tina’s sister and father; they may wind you in the hospital and Bette in jail on assault charges. Great post. PPS
Wow, I totally love your dramatic writing style. Great job.
Hello TB417, What a wonderful mess you have created. I am just loving how all the gang are together and yet apart. Can’t wait to read more so please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Oh damn drama drama !