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    Dead Souls

    Story written on August 17, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Author Notes:

    Shane deals with life without Carmen…sort of.

     

    I look at it…falling into that moment……

     

     

    “Hey Shane…come on….the water is great…”

      

    “No Carmen you go I’ll just watch you splash around….”

      

    “No, you get you sexy ass over here now…”

      

    “Alright…”

      

    “Hey you two…smile.”

      

      

      

      

    That was the first weekend we spent in Orlando. Miriam finally talked John into letting Carmen and I have a room together. After we got back from the beach I moved my things into Carmen’s room. It was farther away from John and Miriam’s bedroom. He joked that if we where gonna be in the same room that he should be a far away from us as possible.

     

    John and Miriam went for some take out and Carmen and I made the most of our alone time. As soon as the pulled out of the driveway Carmen had my clothes off. We kissed in our trademark way. Her lips soft and wet, her hands on my neck, then curling my hair. then grabbing my head as I draw circles on her nipple with my thumbs. Her skin had the taste of suntan lotion and something that was all her. Some days it was sweetness, sugar, caramel that day I really couldn’t place it. I kinda tugged at her dress to get it off…she still had her bathing suit on underneath it. She was feeling self coconscious worried that I didn’t find her as sexy because she thought she was getting too fat. Which was all in her mind. She wasn’t really showing and it had me a little worried. But the stress of everything at the time…and she had just found out about Marco.

     

    I told her she was beautiful. And as I looked at her that sunny Saturday afternoon. that hot little thing she was wearing…my mind melted. I smirked at her as she pushed me on the mattress. She was always trying to play bottom and top with me. The truth was I didn’t care one way or the other.

     

    She peeled her bathing suit off. And I just marveled at all of the flesh invading my vision.

    She climbed on the bed and standing on it so I have to look up at her. We just stared at each other seeing who would break first. Would she lean down so I could feel her wetness on my face? Was I gonna sit up, kneel at her feet and worship her with my mouth, my hands? Yes I broke first I couldn’t take all that flesh…that scent of her driving me out of my head. I pulled her down on top of me and she laughed. Told me that I was so whipped by her. I told her it wasn’t the first time someone said that to me.

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    1. And you were not even sure whether you should post this or not??? Are you insane? This is FANTASTIC!!!! I love your writing style, I love the story and very happy your continuing with it! Please update soon, I can’t wait for more!

    3. OOhh so amazing!! I really thought I had read the last of this story, but you have no idea how happy I am that I haven’t!!! In my opinion, this is THE best fic I’ve ever read about these two. I love it!! And you totally made my day.

    4. Gotta agree w/ Bigprisc let Carmen live, witness protection or somethin’. Glad you’re continuing this. I know whatever you have in store will be worth the read.

    5. Yeah, you can bring Carmen back from the dead [switches to uber-geek-mode] like that X-Files episode where that guy was a walking, talking tumor and he could just grow another body that could be killed to escape the feds. You know the episode, right? [switches back to average-geek-mode] I’m kidding, that would just not fit into this story at all (but witness protection, as 2BMe mentioned, sounds plausible). Anywho, the story is great. I’ll be honest, it has a different feel to it, knowing that Carmen is dead, but it’s still awesome. I, too, would like to thank alkaline for encouraging New Dawn Fades to post, because NDF can rock a mean story, and it would have been a shame if it had stayed hidden in some laptop. Thanks to you both.

    6. Oh my god! This is fantastic… I hope you don’t make Shane fuck Bette though… It is just wrong. I hope miraculously, Carmen appears from the dead or something… Please… you know like something from one of those weird ass movies… Thanks for this.

    8. Well fuck me sideways…This is all because of me? That made me so unbelievebly happy to hear…I’m also really excited that you decided to continue this story, because I love it. You are my favorite writer, so please don’t ever hesitate to post anything, ever, because it’s pretty much guarunteed that I will love it. I also figure that I should ask for some more NC-17 stories because maybe this request will make you write another amazing fic like this one. And to everyone who reads this story, there’s no need to thank me…

    9. YAY YOU’RE BACK! I express my happiness in a little jig *does happy jig* i’m looking forward to the rest of this saga you’ve conjured up (did i spell that right?) good job right off the bat keep it coming…

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