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    Dead Souls

    Story written on August 17, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Author Notes:

    Shane deals with life without Carmen…sort of.

     

     

     

     

    Dead Souls

     

     

    CH 2

     

     

    When I wake up I didn’t know where I was at first. Then gun still where I left it. The loft still had that rotten food smell. I go to take a shower but no water comes out. Great. I head down the stairs and head to Ricky’s. It’s amazing looking around at everything how much nothing has changed. It feels like a maze I will never get out of. The same streets, people not on them. I pull up to Ricky’s shop the door pops open as he runs out. He has this shocked look on his face.

     

    “Holy shit! Shane. Mother fucking Shane! Goddamn girl…it’s you. We all thought you where dead…man…You guys fucking Shane is back! “

     

    I walk in and all the guys are there. Hector, Chino, Brad, Christy, Keith, Boingo. They all rush over to give me the nod.

     

    And it goes. And they wanted to know if it was true was Havoc dead? Yes I said. Was it true that his girl was Fed? Yes. Was it true that I killed her? No? The idea of it made me want to kill them. What happened with Mark and Curt? They told me word was Havoc popped them at The Roadhouse…but no one knows for sure. We all went for a ride. In  a pack like how we use to roll.

     

    We get to  The Roadhouse…and the rest of Slayer X where there including the new leader. A guy by them of Dominguez. Ricky and Hector walk me over to him. Dominguez wasn’t a member of Slayer X. he was not the rightful leader I was. I could feel the tension in the room. I could feel how much Hector and Ricky and the boys wanted this guy gone. But I played it cool. I wasn’t really here to take charge of my crew. I was here to get my money. And with any luck I was gonna get killed. I had a hard time deciding which one I wanted more.

     

     

    “Who is this? You fellas know the rules…you can’t just walk in here unannounced that’s the old guard…”

     

    “Yeah Dominguez this is here is Shane. Shane she goes where she wants. She is our rightful leader…and now she is back….” Hector said.

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    1. And you were not even sure whether you should post this or not??? Are you insane? This is FANTASTIC!!!! I love your writing style, I love the story and very happy your continuing with it! Please update soon, I can’t wait for more!

    3. OOhh so amazing!! I really thought I had read the last of this story, but you have no idea how happy I am that I haven’t!!! In my opinion, this is THE best fic I’ve ever read about these two. I love it!! And you totally made my day.

    4. Gotta agree w/ Bigprisc let Carmen live, witness protection or somethin’. Glad you’re continuing this. I know whatever you have in store will be worth the read.

    5. Yeah, you can bring Carmen back from the dead [switches to uber-geek-mode] like that X-Files episode where that guy was a walking, talking tumor and he could just grow another body that could be killed to escape the feds. You know the episode, right? [switches back to average-geek-mode] I’m kidding, that would just not fit into this story at all (but witness protection, as 2BMe mentioned, sounds plausible). Anywho, the story is great. I’ll be honest, it has a different feel to it, knowing that Carmen is dead, but it’s still awesome. I, too, would like to thank alkaline for encouraging New Dawn Fades to post, because NDF can rock a mean story, and it would have been a shame if it had stayed hidden in some laptop. Thanks to you both.

    6. Oh my god! This is fantastic… I hope you don’t make Shane fuck Bette though… It is just wrong. I hope miraculously, Carmen appears from the dead or something… Please… you know like something from one of those weird ass movies… Thanks for this.

    8. Well fuck me sideways…This is all because of me? That made me so unbelievebly happy to hear…I’m also really excited that you decided to continue this story, because I love it. You are my favorite writer, so please don’t ever hesitate to post anything, ever, because it’s pretty much guarunteed that I will love it. I also figure that I should ask for some more NC-17 stories because maybe this request will make you write another amazing fic like this one. And to everyone who reads this story, there’s no need to thank me…

    9. YAY YOU’RE BACK! I express my happiness in a little jig *does happy jig* i’m looking forward to the rest of this saga you’ve conjured up (did i spell that right?) good job right off the bat keep it coming…

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