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You could see the room being halved. My reluctant side. And this Dominguez guy side. This is gonna be fun I thought cryptically.
“Hey, Hector. I am just here for a visit. Catch up take care of some things…”
“So you’re the famous Shane. I don’t know you. But everyone around here has a story about Shane…Mcwhatever your name is…’
“It’s funny…that’s funny Mr. Dominguez….like I said just paying a visit…you know…no disrespect or anything intended. I thought the guys where bringing me here for a drink…not a civil war…”
“You’re funny lady Shane…how is that Fed of yours?”
“You know you’re the second person today to ask me about that…and I have no lady…but if you introduce me to yours maybe I will….”
The guns all click into place around me…I don’t blink. I don’t flinch. I don’t care. I light a smoke and walk away.
Well that went well. I walk out to my bike and Hector is yelling for me to wait.
“Shane come one. you gotta help us. Man everything has been fucked up around here since you left. We gotta talk…”
“I know Hec…I know. Look tell me where and when and I will be there.”
He wants to meet at The Rectory. It was the worst case scenario place for senior members of Slayer X. If he wanted to meet there I knew I could trust him…not that I did. I don’t trust anyone anymore. I agreed. And I ask him if I could take a shower at his place. He leaves me his keys and I knew the way. But something weird happens before I get there. I hear sirens and I get pulled over.
“License”
“Um officer what did I do?”
“Yeah it’s her. “
“Officer?”
“Ma’am you’re going to have to come with us.”
“Why what did I do?”
“Nothing ma’am but the F.B.I would like a word with you.”
“What about my bike?”
“Don’t worry ma’am we will take good care of it…”
This is the reason you can never go home. Not here for more than 5 hours and I was already in the shit. My crew is having a civil war…everyone thinks I killed Carmen, and now the fucking Feds…what more can go wrong?
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And you were not even sure whether you should post this or not??? Are you insane? This is FANTASTIC!!!! I love your writing style, I love the story and very happy your continuing with it! Please update soon, I can’t wait for more!
dont ever hesitate to post anything you write! great job!
OOhh so amazing!! I really thought I had read the last of this story, but you have no idea how happy I am that I haven’t!!! In my opinion, this is THE best fic I’ve ever read about these two. I love it!! And you totally made my day.
Gotta agree w/ Bigprisc let Carmen live, witness protection or somethin’. Glad you’re continuing this. I know whatever you have in store will be worth the read.
Yeah, you can bring Carmen back from the dead [switches to uber-geek-mode] like that X-Files episode where that guy was a walking, talking tumor and he could just grow another body that could be killed to escape the feds. You know the episode, right? [switches back to average-geek-mode] I’m kidding, that would just not fit into this story at all (but witness protection, as 2BMe mentioned, sounds plausible). Anywho, the story is great. I’ll be honest, it has a different feel to it, knowing that Carmen is dead, but it’s still awesome. I, too, would like to thank alkaline for encouraging New Dawn Fades to post, because NDF can rock a mean story, and it would have been a shame if it had stayed hidden in some laptop. Thanks to you both.
Oh my god! This is fantastic… I hope you don’t make Shane fuck Bette though… It is just wrong. I hope miraculously, Carmen appears from the dead or something… Please… you know like something from one of those weird ass movies… Thanks for this.
Love that you are continuing this storyline. I can’t wait to see what you have planned!
Well fuck me sideways…This is all because of me? That made me so unbelievebly happy to hear…I’m also really excited that you decided to continue this story, because I love it. You are my favorite writer, so please don’t ever hesitate to post anything, ever, because it’s pretty much guarunteed that I will love it. I also figure that I should ask for some more NC-17 stories because maybe this request will make you write another amazing fic like this one. And to everyone who reads this story, there’s no need to thank me…
YAY YOU’RE BACK! I express my happiness in a little jig *does happy jig* i’m looking forward to the rest of this saga you’ve conjured up (did i spell that right?) good job right off the bat keep it coming…