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    Denial / Acceptance – chapter 10

     

    Thirty minutes later Dana emerged; her wavy hair flawlessly sat at her shoulders setting off her smoky eyes and glossy lips. She had indeed gone with Shane’s choice and it complimented her figure perfectly. She looked simply stunning. Shane glanced up from the sports magazine that she wasn’t actually reading instead opting to ogle at the toned female athletes in arousing poses.

    “Whoa Miss Dana, got a hot date tonight or something, please don’t tell me you made all that effort for me”, she teased.

    “Haha, keep dreaming McCutcheon, I’ve only got eyes for one woman tonight”. Shane beamed at her friend, “you look a million bucks. See Yoda prevailed after all!”

    “Yeah don’t push it, that outfit will scar my memory for a while and no telling the rest of the group about it ok?”

    “Hey my lips are sealed. Where are you taking Al tonight anyway?”

    “I was thinking about Rivado’s, not too fancy like L’Orangerie but hardly Chuck E Cheese either.” Shane laughed, “yeah but Alice would probably fit in better in the latter”. The pair giggled at the thought. “Right I’ll leave you to it Dane, you look great, you really do, I’ll probably see you at The Planet tomorrow so um good luck”. With that the hairdresser pulled Dana into an uncharacteristically tight hug, smiled, then waved goodbye. Dana waved back grinning from ear to ear and went to go make a reservation for Rivado’s.

     

    Alice’s Apartment 7:45pm

      

    Like Dana, Alice had dragged one of their friends over to her place to help her get ready for the date. Tina and Alice were in the kitchen sipping on glasses of wine. Well Tina was sipping; Alice was throwing hers back like there was no tomorrow.

    “Whoa there missy, we can’t have you trashed for your date tonight”.

    “I know Tee but I’m so fucking nervous, I know right? Alice Pieszecki nervous about a date”. Tina laughed at her friend, she couldn’t say she was honestly surprised that Dana and Alice were now dating, everyone had seen it coming a mile away, aside them of course.

     

    “Al, it’s totally normal for you to be nervous and even freaked out about this. You’re taking a huge step from friendship to dating but I don’t think you have anything to worry about. You already know each other so there’s no need for that awkward first date questions. I know you and I know Dana and I can honestly say that I can only see a positive outcome for the both of you, so quit worrying because you’re starting to work me up and I’m not even going on the date!” Alice looked at her friend and laughed at her words, she knew she was 100% correct; she was flustered for no reason.

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    Comments

    1. ughh gabby.. way to ruin the perfect danish date.. haha i love this fic.. lol but to be honest i was wondering when the “angst” would show its ugly head. and here goes eh? yay!! cuz i love it more when they make-up.. hehee

    2. Oh no, no, no – not Gabby!! But I am sure she can’t hold a candle to our Dana. The green top was the right choice for her jealous streak to raise it’s head!!!

    3. I sense drama ahead for some reason, lol. But I hope everything works out sooner or later and Gabby will leave the picture. So great update and can’t wait for the next!PPS.

    4. I’ll say it again EVIL. Ok so you threw in the Gabster, I agree with Muted have Dana deck her or better yet have her kiss the daylights outta ALice and walk off with her. Keep up the good work, I love this story.

    5. I’ve been one of the silent readers for the last couple of chapters. I’ve finally got the time to comment and say that this story makes me feel of fuzzy and warm…even with Gabby’s appearance at the end. ;) They are so cute together. Sigh… :D

    6. =O Wh… Whe… Why???…Yeah. Don’t even know what to say. It was a great update by the way. Very cute Danish. Can’t wait for the next update as usual =P

    7. Oh no she didnt! Gabby step away from Alice. Hopefully Alice wouldnt do something like that to Dana, especially after she just hooked up with her. It was sweet and funny up until the last sentence. Even with that i still loved the update. Cant wait for the next. PPS

    8. Boo Gabby! I think that woman needs a tennis ball to the head. And I know just the girl to do it. All this happy danish is making me want to get them back together in my own story! I’m totally loving this one. Keep it up.

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