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Denial / Acceptance – chapter 10
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“You look incredible too Dane, pretty sexy I’d say”. The athlete chuckled and gave Alice a peck on the cheek leading her date to the car walking with pride each step she took.
The car journey was surprisingly quiet, both ladies content with being in each other’s company, awaiting the night ahead, stealing glances at each other, until Alice’s curiosity got the better of her. “Where we going Dane?”
“I thought I’d take you to Rivado’s if that’s ok with you”.
“Oh my god yeah! That place is awesome, I had to check it out…” A smirking Dana interrupted Alice, “let me guess, top 10 best of list right?” Alice stopped talking, slightly embarrassed that she was already so predictable.
“Oh no babe I didn’t mean it like that, I love your lists, I think they’re cute”.
“You do?” Alice looked at Dana unconvinced as they pulled into the car park and unclipped their seatbelts.
“I really do”, Dana confirmed this by planting a short but fiery kiss on Alice’s rouge lips.
“Can we just do that all night and not eat?” Alice asked wiggling her eyebrows. Dana giggled at her friend, “we could but we’d probably be interrupted by our stomach’s growling”. Alice joined in Dana’s giggling. The brunette opened her door and ran over to Alice’s side just in time to open the door for her.
“Wow, and whoever said chivalry was dead obviously hadn’t met you Miss Fairbanks”.
“Well if you liked that I’m sure you’ll like the rest of my plan tonight”.
“I’m sure I will too”.
The women walked hand in hand into the restaurant as Dana gave her name and they were directed to their table, a quiet one with a spectacular view of a small fountain outside. The place was perfect, not over the top romantic but with a soft ambience that set the mood impeccably.
“I’m just gonna pop to the ladies room Al, I’ll be right back”.
“Ok, I’ll go order us some drinks at the bar, vodka martinis ok?”
“Perfect”. With that Dana walked off swaying her hips in a manner that transfixed the blonde’s eyes. ‘She has a really nice ass’, Alice thought.
A few minutes later, Dana returned and was puzzled when she didn’t spot Alice at their table. She drew her gaze to the bar and saw a sight that tied her stomach in such a tight knot she wasn’t sure it would ever come undone. Alice was standing extremely close and holding a hand that belonged to none other than Gabby Deveaux.
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ughh gabby.. way to ruin the perfect danish date.. haha i love this fic.. lol but to be honest i was wondering when the “angst” would show its ugly head. and here goes eh? yay!! cuz i love it more when they make-up.. hehee
UGGGGHHHH Gabby! I am sure it will be okay…Keep Up The Good Work!They are cute!
Oh no, no, no – not Gabby!! But I am sure she can’t hold a candle to our Dana. The green top was the right choice for her jealous streak to raise it’s head!!!
I was waiting for you to throw Gabby in there! Ha. Have Dana beat her up, okay? This is more fabulous with every update.
I sense drama ahead for some reason, lol. But I hope everything works out sooner or later and Gabby will leave the picture. So great update and can’t wait for the next!PPS.
Aww… poor Dana. But I know you’ll make it right… right? :) Awesome update though. Love the cuteness of Danish.
I’ll say it again EVIL. Ok so you threw in the Gabster, I agree with Muted have Dana deck her or better yet have her kiss the daylights outta ALice and walk off with her. Keep up the good work, I love this story.
Definitely evil! That includes the comment about killing our beloved danish – but then you’d just have to let them be ghosts, live on…
Uh uh missy. Nothing from me until Gabby is dead! lol. PPS
I’ve been one of the silent readers for the last couple of chapters. I’ve finally got the time to comment and say that this story makes me feel of fuzzy and warm…even with Gabby’s appearance at the end. ;) They are so cute together. Sigh… :D
=O Wh… Whe… Why???…Yeah. Don’t even know what to say. It was a great update by the way. Very cute Danish. Can’t wait for the next update as usual =P
Oh my gosh…..I wondered when something would go wrong. I like Gabby though. I love your story, please post soon! x
AWWW WHAT THE HELL…damn it gabby!
Oh no she didnt! Gabby step away from Alice. Hopefully Alice wouldnt do something like that to Dana, especially after she just hooked up with her. It was sweet and funny up until the last sentence. Even with that i still loved the update. Cant wait for the next. PPS
Boo Gabby! I think that woman needs a tennis ball to the head. And I know just the girl to do it. All this happy danish is making me want to get them back together in my own story! I’m totally loving this one. Keep it up.