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Denial / Acceptance – chapter 10
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“Thanks Tee, I really appreciate you coming over tonight and being so cool about the whole me and Dana thing”.
“Oh Al there’s no need to thank me hun, even though I wasn’t exactly expecting a fashion show from you that would last almost two hours, talk about being fickle.” Alice giggled recalling her activities earlier on, “sorry about that, here take the rest of this bottle back to your place and go be with your woman, congratulations again, I can’t tell you how fuckin’ excited I am at the thought of being ‘cool aunt Alice’ again”. Tina laughed at the blonde’s enthusiasm.
“Thanks Al, you look incredible, Dana won’t be able to keep her hands off you if she has any sense”. Alice just smirked at the thought. “Goodnight and thanks for the wine, you’re calling me later with all the details of course”.
“Of course, night Tee”. Alice walked her friend to the front door and let out a shriek of excitement once Tina had left.
Alice was tidying up her bedroom when she heard the intercom buzz. Oh my god, she’s here. Alice frantically ran to her mirror checking that her make up was still on perfect and applying a little more lipstick. She anxiously pressed the intercom switch waiting to hear the voice of the woman who was stealing her heart away.
“Hey Al you ready to go?” The athlete’s voice was chirpy and keen, all Alice could do was grin and let out a “sure”. Grabbing her keys, purse and cell, Alice flew out of the door raring to see what Dana had in store for the two of them.
Dana’s breath literally was taken away when she saw the blonde. Alice had chosen a light red coloured babydoll top flattering her skin tone and accentuating her perfect tits, teamed with a pencil skirt in crimson. Red was definitely this woman’s colour. She looked like an erotic temptress and Dana just wanted to ravage her right there.
“What? Did my lippy smudge or something?”
“Um…no…it’s… just, you, you look amazing Al.” Dana barely managed to get the words out as she entwined their fingers. Alice gave the brunette a shy smile as a slight shade of pink appeared on her cheeks.
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ughh gabby.. way to ruin the perfect danish date.. haha i love this fic.. lol but to be honest i was wondering when the “angst” would show its ugly head. and here goes eh? yay!! cuz i love it more when they make-up.. hehee
UGGGGHHHH Gabby! I am sure it will be okay…Keep Up The Good Work!They are cute!
Oh no, no, no – not Gabby!! But I am sure she can’t hold a candle to our Dana. The green top was the right choice for her jealous streak to raise it’s head!!!
I was waiting for you to throw Gabby in there! Ha. Have Dana beat her up, okay? This is more fabulous with every update.
I sense drama ahead for some reason, lol. But I hope everything works out sooner or later and Gabby will leave the picture. So great update and can’t wait for the next!PPS.
Aww… poor Dana. But I know you’ll make it right… right? :) Awesome update though. Love the cuteness of Danish.
I’ll say it again EVIL. Ok so you threw in the Gabster, I agree with Muted have Dana deck her or better yet have her kiss the daylights outta ALice and walk off with her. Keep up the good work, I love this story.
Definitely evil! That includes the comment about killing our beloved danish – but then you’d just have to let them be ghosts, live on…
Uh uh missy. Nothing from me until Gabby is dead! lol. PPS
I’ve been one of the silent readers for the last couple of chapters. I’ve finally got the time to comment and say that this story makes me feel of fuzzy and warm…even with Gabby’s appearance at the end. ;) They are so cute together. Sigh… :D
=O Wh… Whe… Why???…Yeah. Don’t even know what to say. It was a great update by the way. Very cute Danish. Can’t wait for the next update as usual =P
Oh my gosh…..I wondered when something would go wrong. I like Gabby though. I love your story, please post soon! x
AWWW WHAT THE HELL…damn it gabby!
Oh no she didnt! Gabby step away from Alice. Hopefully Alice wouldnt do something like that to Dana, especially after she just hooked up with her. It was sweet and funny up until the last sentence. Even with that i still loved the update. Cant wait for the next. PPS
Boo Gabby! I think that woman needs a tennis ball to the head. And I know just the girl to do it. All this happy danish is making me want to get them back together in my own story! I’m totally loving this one. Keep it up.