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Disappearing
These were people that looked important. Or liked to look important. Special. VIP lounge-land from the Changi of Singapore to Zurich International, the type that was a cut above your typical business-class lounge, was a common landing spot for them, for here the air was perfumed, the living, easy, and your every whim, catered to. Maybe these people actually were important to whatever thing they were heading to while transiting through this Eden-like oasis that 99% of their fellow travelers couldn’t enter, or didn’t even know was existing in their midst. Yup, life was good here.
This story starts in such a place, at one end of the curved bar in the cushy newly-opened VIP lounge of LAX, a vast, future-facing space in bluish dissolve. Several of the 1%ers perched on stools by this end of a bar that served top-flight Champagne and whiskey, and everything in between. They were in their twenties, but didn’t carry themselves with the air of your typical important-seeming VIP-lounge habitue’.
“What I’m talking about is,” the polished one in the power-suit-Birkin-bag-combo jabbed a gel-manicured finger on her friend’s shoulder for emphasis, “look, when we were that age, when, you know, we were nine or ten…”
“Eleven,” her companion in the torn-jeans-and-luxe-cashmere faux grunge outfit corrected the power suit quickly, shrugged the finger on her shoulder off, and lazily hitched her heel on the side of the bar-stool she was half-sitting on. “Pour me another shot please,” torn-jeans asked the bartender. She raised an eyebrow at power suit as if to inquire whether she wanted one also.
A lean figure perched on one of the bar stools nearby couldn’t help but overhear them. She looked up occasionally to quietly observe the two obviously close friends who seemed to be oblivious to the hushed atmosphere that hung thickly around them. Their voices would have been normal-pitched in a typical bar or bistro, she thought. Under normal circumstances, the lean figure who’d been perched on her stool long before the two picked this end of the bar to hang out in, would have tuned out the funny conversation going on between the two friends.
But these weren’t normal times, the young woman thought to herself as she half-listened to their chatter. She needed a distraction from the utter chaos her life had become in the last week.
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Hey skydancer,
It is so great you are back with another incredible story!
I am grateful to the someone who sent you the draft.
It is a fantastic first chapter and like Bette “There better be something worth running to at the end of all this.” But knowing you it will be worthy!
Great to see you back, skydancer. Love your vivid style of writing. Outstanding! Great hook to kick this off. You got some mad skills woman.
Big fan, Skydancer. Your work is always stunning…polished. You have a talent for creating such interesting characters. Looking forward to seeing where this leads.
Nice to have you back skydancer love your writing.
Hope you can give us a regular ‘fix’ particularly as this story has had such a great and enticing start.
Hey Sky, long time no post. I love the intrigue that you masterfully offer in your stories. Feel free to visit again soon.
Hello! Am glad the story is finding an audience. Was working on the next couple of chapters but am revising aspects of what’s going on, bec I think we’re not allowed to post sexy scenes. And you know how the Bette in my stories likes to play.
Let me know if you think this story continues to work!
Very interesting. Will read almost anything with Bette and Tina especially if there is little bit of intrigue and mystery. Thanks for posting.