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Discovering Aphrodite
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“Life? There aren’t any cars in this car park…” Bette said, wondering whether the treacherous little mountain trip had been a waste of time as she got her breath back and the pounding in her chest diminished slightly.
“Well, let’s just walk up to the baths and see if it’s open…” Tina said as she gathered her bag and sunglasses. She leant forward and gently kissed Bette, “you okay now babe?”
“I think so now my feet are on solid…, ish…, ground…”
Tina smiled as she linked her hand in Bette’s and they casually headed towards another hand painted sign to indicate the entrance to the Baths of Adonis, their earlier tension from the Kourian completely forgotten.
The old wooden entrance looked deserted, no other patrons visiting or leaving the Baths of Adonis, or so it seemed.
“Hey ladies…” A Cypriot woman called as she appeared from behind the desk.
“Oh hi…,” Bette said, “uh, are you open?”
“Yes, yes, please come…, we just closing but you come in and see…”
Bette looked at Tina, “you still want to go in?”
“Sure,” Tina said, looking over at the lady, “how long do we have in there?”
The dark haired woman waved her hand, “you pay fifteen Euros…, you stay as long as you want, just come through this gate when you finished.”
“So…, you’re letting us go in for as long as we want, but you are closing?” Bette asked, slightly confused.
“Yes, yes, its quiet today so we shut, but you come…, come ladies, see the Baths…, fifteen Euros…, each…”
Bette glanced at Tina once again, “fifteen Euros each? You okay with that?”
“Yeah, we made the car journey down that cliff side, there has to be something to see for it.”
Bette paid the money and they walked through the gateway.
“Thank you ladies, enjoy the Baths…, we close now, so please just shut this gate when you have finished…, okay?”
“Sure, yes we’ll make sure the gate is closed.” Tina said.
Bette stalled slightly, turning back to the woman and quietly reaffirming her thoughts, “so…, no one else will be coming in today?”
The woman looked directly at Bette , she smiled slowly as her mind caught up with the hidden question in Bette’s eyes, “that’s right lady…, you have the place to yourself…, for as long as you need it…”
“Thank you…” Bette said, smiling as her intentions of making it a holiday Tina wouldn’t forget started to come to fruition without any specific attempts from her.
“Enjoy ladies…, enjoy…” the Cypriot woman said finally as she began to empty the till and finish off the seemingly simply organised attraction.
Bette and Tina walked through the entrance depicting the history of the owner of the Baths, various pictures of the man named ‘Elvis’ with visitors both famous and not.
Tina raised her eyebrows at Bette as the quirky surroundings didn’t really add up to the attraction itself, displays of beds, old chairs and a spinning wheel which she presumed must have some significance to ‘Elvis’.
“Are we really at the Baths of Adonis?”
“I have absolutely no idea…, oh uh…” Bette nodded her head forward, “I think that uh…, thing means we are at the Baths…”
There was a statue in front of them. A monstrous white statue of a naked man with an erection bigger than either of them had ever seen before.
“Holy shit…”
“You think ‘that’ is what the hussy saw in him?”
“I think I’m kinda hoping that this statue is larger than life-size…” Bette said, her groin clenching at the mere thought of such an appendage, should she have been a straight woman.
Tina stood with her hands on her hips, she smiled wryly, “I think I now have before me the confirmation that my choice of loving the ladies was most definitely the right one.”
“I think that would be far more useful as a coat stand than anything else…, and did you read that sign below it…, there is no way on God’s given earth that I am touching it…”
Tina bent to read the sign beside the statue, ‘ladies infertile who wish to become pregnant touch Adonis’s appendage and have many children thereafter’ “eww!”
“Eww indeed…, I think I’d rather be visiting the place where they jerk off in a pot and hand it over.” Bette said, now wondering whether their trip to the Baths was such a good idea after all.
“You think they have massive penises down the steps too?”
“Oh God help me I hope not…” Bette laughed at the irony of it. Two lesbians visiting the Baths of Adonis where they have a much larger than life statue of Adonis himself with the absolute biggest penis she had ever seen.
Tina laughed, “maybe we could just go see the bath itself and hope it really is just that.”
They made their way down the curved rocky steps, the sound of water gently falling in the distance. They stepped over the small stream at the bottom of the steps where a huge boulder also had the signs on it for ‘women who want many children touch the fertility rock’.
“Are they obsessed with fertility?” Bette asked while shaking her head.
“Babe…, Adonis…, he was the man who fell in love with the Goddess of Love, he fathered their children…”
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Hi Jo, Glad you are feeling better. I’ve missed this story and was happy to see that you’ve decided to continue posting it. Take good care, Lin
Glad you are back.All the best for you.Grear story.
Keep typing…it was a long holiday! LOL! Great post, glad to see you’re back my friend.
To be perfectly honest I was among those that forgot “their earlier tension from the Kourian”, but that’s not my fault. I’m glad you’ve mended, just keep it that way. You did provoke a few memories for me, though. My father built something we called a camper that later would be described as an RV by commercial producers. He took 2 delivery trucks (or lorries, if you prefer), smashed them together and took the windshield from from one to make a large side window which offered thrilling views of the Colorado Rockies on one of our first trips. Not always thrilling in a good way, as you could also look down from the road into deep chasms, sometimes seeing the torn remains of trailers below and the road didn’t always have room enough for even shitty guardrails. At least the road was paved. And Adonis brought King Kong to mind. I mean Kong used the Empire State Building as penile metaphor. No wonder Fay Wray screamed. A lot.
So glad you are going to finish this story. I’m sorry you have been so ill and hope it’s all behind you now.
What a great update, thx again for continuing this story! So glad to hear you’re well, please stay that way : )
love is in the air… i’m glad you’re better and can bring back this beautiful story
welcome back, always a pleasure to read you. This story seems to have great potential, mythology and love make for a delicious cocktail.
Great to see you back. Glad you are feeling better. Looking forward to more of this story.
Best wishes with your recovery – may the road ahead be smoother.
Glad you are feeling better. I hate cold water, but with Bette there Tina will be very warm soon.
getting well into this please do another post
Hey. Where are you??? Please continue with your story. Expectation for the next chapter. hahahahaha
yay! This story is back!! =)) Well, that was a cruel place to leave us once again… TSK. Now that you’ve started you can’t stop. Please please please update soon! =))
So glad that you are feeling better!! I was hooked on this story, so I am happy to see you are continuing it. Thanks Jo!!
Yeahhhh missed this story soooo much and now your back again with a chappie!!! Luv it, pps
Yeah! Sooo excited to see you continuing this story!
So happy that you’re back writing. I truly hope that you feeling A-OK. You’ve been sorely missed.
Really missed this story. Thank you for posting and glad you’re feeling better. THank you for this.
It’s so great to see a chapter of this story again. I was hoping you would be able to post again. Thank you!
Well, I guess I have already commented on this chapter, but I just wanted to say it again. I find this chapter utterly lovely and this whole story feels like an addiction, so can you imagine how painful the withdrawal has been ? ;) Can’t wait for more of this, Jo. And before you ask, I don’t mind if Bette and Tina’s vacation lasts forever … Don’t mind at all ;) Take good care of yourself.
OMG…I almost forgot about this story. I love it and am soooooo glad you brought it back. I would love a vacation like theirs. :) Can’t wait to read more. Thank you so much!
So glad your back and feeling better, well can’t wait to see what happens next.
Helllooo Jo,Well this is quite the pleasant surprise I got on here this morning..I am so flipping excited to see u back here and Welcome back and am so glad that u are getting better..When i saw this post here this morning I literally almost peed my panties bc I was just so flabergasted and shocked that u came back…I was like holllllly mooooooses and my heart was doing some major cartwheels..I have waited for this story for sooo loooong and am so very glad that u decided to come back and write on here..this has just totally made my day and u have put such a huge smile on my face now..Thank you verrrry much for coming back and posting this story I for one so appreciate it bc your writing is so indescribable to me..it just has this special effect on me :) so thank u for returning**hugs from me to u from afar** i know this might be asking too much but do u think u might also finish or bring back Lady Slayer?? This chapter was soo good and im excited to see where u take this little tale of yours…i sooo hope that we get a looove scene in the next chapter..LOL..yea i know my mind is probably perverted but I love the way u write those scenes so I hope that u provide us with one..**blushing**..im flippen crazy..AHHHHHH…but am so glad u are back…well please post REAL SOOOON and i will be patiently awaiting for your next update..Thank you again..take care.Sincerely,Christina :) :)