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Discovering Aphrodite
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“Have you been reading up on this?” Bette said with a wry smile.
She made her way across the uneven ground to stand in front of the small pool of water, the waterfall from the high cliff like surroundings gently fell into the back area of the pool. She looked up to see the ledges where it was reported Adonis had dove into the pool. It was again much smaller than she had anticipated, but it was bigger and much deeper than the Baths of Aphrodite.
“It actually feels kind of serene here doesn’t it?” Tina said as she stood beside Bette.
“Yeah it does…, it seems to have more of an atmosphere that Aphro’s pool…”
“You can swim here…” Tina said, wondering if Bette would take the plunge if she knew that no one would be following them into the attraction.
“Oh, I didn’t bring my swimsuit…” Bette said in quick reply.
“Me neither…” Tina chipped as she pulled her tee shirt over her head, revealing that she wasn’t wearing a bra.
Bette stood with her mouth open as she watched Tina undress and dip her toe at the water’s edge.
“Oh my god…” Tina squealed, quickly bringing her foot onto solid ground.
Bette smirked, “cold?”
Tina giggled slightly, “it’s like a goddamn ice bucket…”
“Well you uh…, undressed for the occasion…, just jump in or swing on the rope and let yourself just drop into the Baths of Adonis…”
Tina took a deep breath as she suddenly decided to go for it, “you coming in?”
“Uh, not sure…”
Tina grabbed the rope hanging from the tree which was conveniently leaning over the pool of cold water. She took another deep breath as she took a naked swing, screaming as she let go and splashed into the middle of the ice cold water.
Bette laughed as Tina surfaced, coughing and spluttering, trying to formulate words as the cold temperature hit Tina’s body. Tina shook her head, her blonde hair flying around with droplets spraying the water’s surface around her.
“You are insane!” Bette said as Tina gathered her breath and began swimming around the Baths of Adonis.
“It’s so good…”
“You said it was an ice bucket!”
“It feels good when you’re used to it.”
“You are still insane…” Bette yelled as she sat on a rock beside the pool, dipping her toes in the cold water as she watched Tina swim nakedly in the cold water.
Her hand absentmindedly ran along the rocks at the side of the pool, stopping and picking up the odd stone, running her thumb along the surface before dropping it and repeating the exercise once again.
Her thumb rubbed a smooth surface and her eyes dropped to the stone she was holding. She smiled as she saw the unusually shaped stone in her palm. A perfectly rounded heart shape sat in her hand, she glanced at Tina who was treading water while watching her intently.
“Come here…” Bette said seriously but in a voice barely audible.
Tina looked deeply into Bette’s eyes as she swam slowly towards her, the water seemingly caressing Tina’s skin as her slow but direct strokes brought her closer to Bette.
Tina brought herself from the water, droplets running swiftly down her nakedness. Bette’s eyes caught the erect nipples, her lips parted sub-consciously as they came closer to her.
Tina’s face came level with Bette’s, her breath coming in short rasps as the warmth from the afternoon sun soothed her cold skin.
Bette captured Tina’s wet lips in a kiss filled with unspoken emotion which whispered its presence, it was an action which not only surprised her but also from the reaction, took Tina by surprise too.
As they kissed deeply, Bette’s hand found Tina’s, she slipped the heart shaped stone into Tina’s palm. Their kiss broke and Tina looked down at her hand, she gave a small smile as she took in the shape of the stone, silently acknowledging the significance. She also knew the perfect place she would be keeping the stone when she got home. Her box of memories would be its new home, but there may be a time that it would stand on her bedside table…
“Thank you…” Tina whispered as she looked back at Bette, her fingers gently smoothing the surface of her newest and most precious jewel.
Bette merely smiled as her heart began to pound. Her breath became shorter as her hand glided across Tina’s warming body, moving lower as her fingertips brushed past the droplets of water. Her fingers were met with the golden hair covering Tina’s centre…
The Cypriot woman from the entrance looked down over the Baths of Adonis from the cliff above, she smiled widely as she watched Bette’s actions, “the magic works once again…” the woman whispered as she turned and walked away to leave the two women doing what the Baths of Adonis were famous for…, making love…
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Hi Jo, Glad you are feeling better. I’ve missed this story and was happy to see that you’ve decided to continue posting it. Take good care, Lin
Glad you are back.All the best for you.Grear story.
Keep typing…it was a long holiday! LOL! Great post, glad to see you’re back my friend.
To be perfectly honest I was among those that forgot “their earlier tension from the Kourian”, but that’s not my fault. I’m glad you’ve mended, just keep it that way. You did provoke a few memories for me, though. My father built something we called a camper that later would be described as an RV by commercial producers. He took 2 delivery trucks (or lorries, if you prefer), smashed them together and took the windshield from from one to make a large side window which offered thrilling views of the Colorado Rockies on one of our first trips. Not always thrilling in a good way, as you could also look down from the road into deep chasms, sometimes seeing the torn remains of trailers below and the road didn’t always have room enough for even shitty guardrails. At least the road was paved. And Adonis brought King Kong to mind. I mean Kong used the Empire State Building as penile metaphor. No wonder Fay Wray screamed. A lot.
So glad you are going to finish this story. I’m sorry you have been so ill and hope it’s all behind you now.
What a great update, thx again for continuing this story! So glad to hear you’re well, please stay that way : )
love is in the air… i’m glad you’re better and can bring back this beautiful story
welcome back, always a pleasure to read you. This story seems to have great potential, mythology and love make for a delicious cocktail.
Great to see you back. Glad you are feeling better. Looking forward to more of this story.
Best wishes with your recovery – may the road ahead be smoother.
Glad you are feeling better. I hate cold water, but with Bette there Tina will be very warm soon.
getting well into this please do another post
Hey. Where are you??? Please continue with your story. Expectation for the next chapter. hahahahaha
yay! This story is back!! =)) Well, that was a cruel place to leave us once again… TSK. Now that you’ve started you can’t stop. Please please please update soon! =))
So glad that you are feeling better!! I was hooked on this story, so I am happy to see you are continuing it. Thanks Jo!!
Yeahhhh missed this story soooo much and now your back again with a chappie!!! Luv it, pps
Yeah! Sooo excited to see you continuing this story!
So happy that you’re back writing. I truly hope that you feeling A-OK. You’ve been sorely missed.
Really missed this story. Thank you for posting and glad you’re feeling better. THank you for this.
It’s so great to see a chapter of this story again. I was hoping you would be able to post again. Thank you!
Well, I guess I have already commented on this chapter, but I just wanted to say it again. I find this chapter utterly lovely and this whole story feels like an addiction, so can you imagine how painful the withdrawal has been ? ;) Can’t wait for more of this, Jo. And before you ask, I don’t mind if Bette and Tina’s vacation lasts forever … Don’t mind at all ;) Take good care of yourself.
OMG…I almost forgot about this story. I love it and am soooooo glad you brought it back. I would love a vacation like theirs. :) Can’t wait to read more. Thank you so much!
So glad your back and feeling better, well can’t wait to see what happens next.
Helllooo Jo,Well this is quite the pleasant surprise I got on here this morning..I am so flipping excited to see u back here and Welcome back and am so glad that u are getting better..When i saw this post here this morning I literally almost peed my panties bc I was just so flabergasted and shocked that u came back…I was like holllllly mooooooses and my heart was doing some major cartwheels..I have waited for this story for sooo loooong and am so very glad that u decided to come back and write on here..this has just totally made my day and u have put such a huge smile on my face now..Thank you verrrry much for coming back and posting this story I for one so appreciate it bc your writing is so indescribable to me..it just has this special effect on me :) so thank u for returning**hugs from me to u from afar** i know this might be asking too much but do u think u might also finish or bring back Lady Slayer?? This chapter was soo good and im excited to see where u take this little tale of yours…i sooo hope that we get a looove scene in the next chapter..LOL..yea i know my mind is probably perverted but I love the way u write those scenes so I hope that u provide us with one..**blushing**..im flippen crazy..AHHHHHH…but am so glad u are back…well please post REAL SOOOON and i will be patiently awaiting for your next update..Thank you again..take care.Sincerely,Christina :) :)