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Discovering Aphrodite
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Chapter 13
Bette sat quietly, taking in the magnitude of the start of their ‘conversation’, thoughts rolled around her mind, wondering whether there was any point in even continuing given the amount of miles separating them when they settled back at home.
Tina looked over at Bette, she knew in her heart of hearts that it was too much to hope their home lives could become entwined, in some way or another. Was that too much to ask? If the distance between them was anything to go by, then yes it was…
“Fuck…” Bette mumbled.
Tina looked up at Bette as she heard the word.
“That’s a great start isn’t it?” Bette added, directly at Tina.
“I guess that depends…”
“On what? I live in California and you live in Virginia.”
Tina detected a defeated tone in Bette’s voice. She half wondered whether Bette’s words meant that she felt whether it was worth any effort.
Tina took a deep breath, she didn’t know whether to say the words or not, but if she didn’t, she would never know.
“Bette…?”
Bette looked up at Tina, noticing how her eyes bored into her. She felt herself take an involuntary deep breath, not knowing what words Tina was about to say.
“What do you want from this?”
“Th.., this?”
“Yes…, this…, this… ‘holiday romance….”
Bette winced, the words seemed almost cutting in the way Tina accentuated the ‘holiday romance’. “Tina…”
“What? I’m getting vibes from you Bette…”
“What do you mean…, vibes?”
Tina huffed slightly, it was all she could do to stay sitting on the lounger. She saw this woman in front of her who was seemingly strong and independent, knew her own mind and gave the impression that the time they had spent together meant something. But the conversation they had been avoiding was not turning out how she had expected. She knew that she had avoided it, probably at all costs because she didn’t want their holiday to end. This felt real to her, the time they had spent together for near on the whole week had been magical. But it was coming to its end. She was leaving in the morning and she didn’t know what the future held.
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that’s mean!
More please and soon.
Makes ya want to shake Bette and feel so sorry for her at the same time! Ok I get alittle carried away with this lol. I think this story has gone from strength to strength.. Maybe Bette have just approached the nice lady in the red bikini and said something like ‘step off b*itch’! Lol. Great chpt..as always im lovin it. X
If ya snooze ya lose! Always great. I hope that after this story ends you will continue writing. You are such a talent!
crap…please fix this LOL i have faith in you ;)
Please don’t leave us in misery for very long. I’m curious as to how the distance issue will finally be resolved…because I KNOW you won’t let this ‘Amelia chick’ snake Bette….and our girls will finally be together right!!?? Please come back soon!
I hope that was Bette’s wake up call and she goes back and tells Tina how she really feels. Thanks Jo Great Update!!! PPVS
Hey !! What do you mean this story is coming to an end ?!! You’re scaring me, Jo. You’d better have another story in store for us, then… I mean, this was of course a very good and enthralling chapter, but it kinda depressed me. The hope I have is for Bette to switch the “jealous mode” on for I must confess I love a jealous Bette, but apparently she seemed more hurt than jealous…. I guess that can change though and this way Tina will see how much she cares. Still, I worry about their relationship, I mean I don’t see Bette moving to West Virginia, and I’m not sure what Tina is doing for a living there but this Tina seems quite confident and self-assured and I’m not sure she’d move to California for a woman she’s known a week or so… So Bette’d better get her act together. Anyway, I’m loving this story and really hope it doesn’t end so soon, but if you need to finish with this one I certainly hope you have plenty of ideas for new stories, Jo. We looove your stories. All of them !! Thank you !
Excellent update. I hope you also can continue with “Lady Slayer”
I cant wait for more,please post soon.
I really really love this story and have missed seeing more posts from you. Please continue the story and share with all of us what you plan for our girls. :)
Oh dang, finally Bette goes to explain herself and her feelings to Tina and she walks up on this sight. Thanks for writing this and all the other stories that you have posted for our reading pleasure.
Please fix this and we need a happy end.Thank you for the update.Great story.
Damn red bikini! I don’t like drama, but it keeps us hooked and you know that…please make it go away so they can both move to Californ..I…A and be happy ever after….The End…:0)
I agree with B, Bette needs to go back there and say “step off bitch”!! Go Bette, don’t let your woman go!!
Excellent update. I just want to shake both of them. Please post soon. thank you for this story.
First off I’m SO happy to see you back here! How have you been? As for Bette, I truly can feel for her in this…I’m a pretty introspective person too & when the emotions are great as they can be like this, it’s difficult to even say “give me a few to take this in.” I hope nothing happens w/ Amelia’s flirtation w/ T and that when T goes back & doesn’t see B on the lounger she doesn’t think that B is blowing her off..aaand hopefully B’s either jealous rant or distraught & jealous crying fit will make T realize B is just as desirous of them extending their holiday romance as she is…Happy Easter to you if you celebrate, thx for this & anxiously awaiting the next one!! :D
PPS!!
Hi Jobadge… Thanks for another chapter, although now I want to splash a bucket of cold water on Bette to wake her up and being more decisive… :-p uhm … The story is coming to it’s end?? Well.. Happy to hear that! :-) I do appreciate story with an ending, feel better to know there’s no unfinished business kind of things :-) however… As many of your reader said before.. We do hope to see more of your masterpiece :-) I personally hope that even though you are not in the spotlight anymore you would be kind enough to share and post your story :-) anddddd if it takes a spotlight to nudge you to post… Absolutely I will NOT hesitate to request it to the mod :-) LOL … PPVS! thanks! :-)
Awesome as ever. Dare I hope that you are back, life allowing? You are one of the best you know? Happy Easter!!
Hi Job, Great misunderstandings as both Bette and Tina are desperate to say theor true feeling however both are still to scare toshare. Perhaps Amelia will prompt Bette to reveal her inner emotions and break down the walls around her heart for Tina. I can’t wait to read more. Your Loyal Fan.
What a great chapter! Please write more soon. I keep my fingers crossed that they will see they are destined to have a future together :)
please write again soon! its been like 2 months since your last post! :( love all your stories :)