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Discovering Aphrodite
“No definitely not, I’ve thought about that since the first time I saw a sunset…” Tina replied, glad their conversation was a little lighter.
The slow walk back to the hotel was relatively quiet, their gentle pace in the diminishing evening light matched the mood of the peaceful night.
Tina’s pace subconsciously slowed as she looked in a shop window, her hand moved along Bette’s arm as Bette’s pace remained, allowing their hands to come into contact. Their fingers lingered as Bette’s fingers spread, automatically linking hers with Tina’s.
Tina glanced at their hands, seeing her fingers entwined with Bette’s. She looked up into Bette’s face, wanting confirmation that although it hadn’t happened on purpose, that it was still okay.
Bette felt the heat travel through her as she felt her fingers laced with Tina’s, she tried hard to not make anything of it, but she knew that from the simple movement of Tina’s hand moving down her arm to them linking fingers affected her. She took a deep breath, trying to slow down the pounding that she felt in her chest.
She couldn’t help the words Tina had said half an hour before popping into her mind, ‘holiday romance’, was it inevitable that this was what this would turn into? She had no idea, but whatever was happening had been the furthest thing from her mind when she had stepped off the plane at Pafos airport the previous day.
“Tina…” Bette said in a quiet voice.
Tina looked around at Bette, she was moving closer, almost in slow motion.
Their lips met in the briefest kiss, the brushing of soft lips against one another.
It was over as soon as it started.
But it was a simple, gentle kiss…
Their hands remained connected as they slowly made their way back to the hotel.
The sky had deepened and the moon rose above them. They walked in silence, their slow pace setting the tone of not wanting the evening to end.
Their steps took them through the meandering paved paths of the hotel apartments, weaving to the centre where they had met that morning.
One area to the side was where they had shared breakfast, the other side with the pool where Bette had sat on the lounger awaiting Tina’s arrival that evening.
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Hey….well i have to agree with Tina here..Bette could not be more adorable than she is in this story..and tho Bette didnt hear Tina as she left her..i kinda have a feeling the wait will be worth it..Great update to a really lovely story that you can “see” unfolding :)
I am not into torture, but that is what you are doing to me ,JO. Tina needed to speak up louder. Bette was in her own thoughts and didn’t hear Tina. Aphrodite will definitely show up tomorrow for them. I expect one HOT night when they do get together. Great update. Please post soon.
Great story, looking forward to more.
I adore the romance here. Thanks for sharing your talents.
Tina didn’t have any problem speaking up earlier and I bet she won’t have that problem later. But why the cat got her tongue just then beats me.
Nice story, Jo. Always enjoy your writing.
I think they will be discovering more than Aphrodite tomorrow! PPS:)
Romantic and tender but I’m shallow. Let’s get to the NC-17. ;-)
Your writing exudes sensuality. Just beautiful!
Hey Jo can we get a chapter a day?I am enjoying this story.I prefer the build up.
What a touching chapter…love the interaction between these two. Bravo Jo!
Hello there, dear sweet Jo! This update was a complete delight to read. Bette’s candor is adorable indeed and Tina’s subtle romantic advances are enchanting. You made us give a big sigh at the end of this chapter. Thanks for bringing us this beautiful and amazing story, dear friend. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lu & Marsh (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
Beautiful, sweet, romantic chapter. I can hardly wait to the next…
This is such a great story. Can’t wait to see what happens. Thank you for this :)
This is such a great story. Can’t wait to see what happens. Thank you for this :)
nice, really nice…maybe Tina should go after Bette…nice to see Tina being more confident one :)
Thank you, Jo for that great update.Very romantic. PPS
Wow wow wow!!! Just joining in, what a great original fic!! I Love it!!! So romantic!! I’ve always wanted a holiday romance… or should I say a romance that starts on a holiday! PPVVS!
adorable Bette, bold Tina. I can see it all, perfect. Thk u.
Well Tina if you said a little louder you wouldn’t be walking back now, would you, lol. They are cute and the kiss is sweet, love them. Please post more, thanks!
This is a sweet story. Maybe next time I’m on vacation something like this can happen to me. Well here’s hoping. Thanks for posting!
nice chapter! Looking forward to the aphrodite;P
So good… The setting, the growing attraction, the pace… everything is spot on. Thanks Jo!
Oh my goodness, you did not just leave us there?? I can’t wait to see where this goes from here. I’ll be waiting. :) PPS
Romance? Holiday? So cute! I can’t wait for the next one. Thanks for the great update…
Jo this is a wonderful story and the way you are unfolding it slowlymakes it all the more enticing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Whoa…well I’m certain that everyone could feel Bette and Tina’s growing lust in that chapter! Unbelievable writing Jo.
wonderful update. i am completely enthralled!
aww so romantic…this story..thanks
Jo, This story is just Amazing!!! I so love how romantic it is. Thank you PPVS