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Discovering Aphrodite
The almost stillness of the water with the slight ripples allowed the pool lights to flicker around them. The insects chirped, clicked and rattled with their anonymous callings as they stood facing one another.
“I had a great time today…” Tina whispered.
Bette smiled, the slight crooked smile laced with what she knew in her stomach was nervousness of the moment, “thank you for letting me share your breakfast table…”
“It was my pleasure.”
“Maybe we can…”
“…do it again tomorrow?” Tina finished with a smile.
Bette nodded, “I’d like that…”
Tina brought her hand to Bette’s cheek, the lights from the pool highlighting the fine bone structure as her fingers gently traced along Bette’s jaw. She leant forward, allowing her lips to touch Bette’s, she parted her lips slightly as she felt Bette respond.
Their touch lingered as Bette brought her hands to Tina’s hips, resting them gently as Tina’s fingertips traced down Bette’s jaw to her neck, slowing as she held it on her shoulder.
Bette tilted her head slightly as she moved her lips against Tina’s.
Their lips gently parted as their foreheads touched, their parted lips sharing the breath between them.
Bette closed her eyes briefly as she straightened, feeling the pounding in her chest from the sensual, gentle kiss.
She brought her finger to Tina’s lips, tracing along the sensitive skin she could still feel on her own lips. She moved her hand to Tina’s, gently touching her fingers.
“Goodnight Tina…, maybe tomorrow we can discover Aphrodite…” Bette said quietly. She turned, allowing their hands to slowly part as she made her way slowly back to her apartment with her own thoughts.
“Come back with me…” Tina whispered as she watched Bette’s retreating figure, slowly walking into the darkness.
Bette reached her door, slipping the key in. She rest her forehead against the door, letting out the breath she had been holding before turning the key in the lock and walking into her apartment for what she knew would probably be a restless night.
Tina had stood watching Bette’s figure disappearing into the night, her fingers on her own lips as they continued to burn with the intensity of a simple kiss, wondering that if she had said the words louder she would be walking back to her room alone…
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Hey….well i have to agree with Tina here..Bette could not be more adorable than she is in this story..and tho Bette didnt hear Tina as she left her..i kinda have a feeling the wait will be worth it..Great update to a really lovely story that you can “see” unfolding :)
I am not into torture, but that is what you are doing to me ,JO. Tina needed to speak up louder. Bette was in her own thoughts and didn’t hear Tina. Aphrodite will definitely show up tomorrow for them. I expect one HOT night when they do get together. Great update. Please post soon.
Great story, looking forward to more.
I adore the romance here. Thanks for sharing your talents.
Tina didn’t have any problem speaking up earlier and I bet she won’t have that problem later. But why the cat got her tongue just then beats me.
Nice story, Jo. Always enjoy your writing.
I think they will be discovering more than Aphrodite tomorrow! PPS:)
Romantic and tender but I’m shallow. Let’s get to the NC-17. ;-)
Your writing exudes sensuality. Just beautiful!
Hey Jo can we get a chapter a day?I am enjoying this story.I prefer the build up.
What a touching chapter…love the interaction between these two. Bravo Jo!
Hello there, dear sweet Jo! This update was a complete delight to read. Bette’s candor is adorable indeed and Tina’s subtle romantic advances are enchanting. You made us give a big sigh at the end of this chapter. Thanks for bringing us this beautiful and amazing story, dear friend. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lu & Marsh (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
Beautiful, sweet, romantic chapter. I can hardly wait to the next…
This is such a great story. Can’t wait to see what happens. Thank you for this :)
This is such a great story. Can’t wait to see what happens. Thank you for this :)
nice, really nice…maybe Tina should go after Bette…nice to see Tina being more confident one :)
Thank you, Jo for that great update.Very romantic. PPS
Wow wow wow!!! Just joining in, what a great original fic!! I Love it!!! So romantic!! I’ve always wanted a holiday romance… or should I say a romance that starts on a holiday! PPVVS!
adorable Bette, bold Tina. I can see it all, perfect. Thk u.
Well Tina if you said a little louder you wouldn’t be walking back now, would you, lol. They are cute and the kiss is sweet, love them. Please post more, thanks!
This is a sweet story. Maybe next time I’m on vacation something like this can happen to me. Well here’s hoping. Thanks for posting!
nice chapter! Looking forward to the aphrodite;P
So good… The setting, the growing attraction, the pace… everything is spot on. Thanks Jo!
Oh my goodness, you did not just leave us there?? I can’t wait to see where this goes from here. I’ll be waiting. :) PPS
Romance? Holiday? So cute! I can’t wait for the next one. Thanks for the great update…
Jo this is a wonderful story and the way you are unfolding it slowlymakes it all the more enticing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Whoa…well I’m certain that everyone could feel Bette and Tina’s growing lust in that chapter! Unbelievable writing Jo.
wonderful update. i am completely enthralled!
aww so romantic…this story..thanks
Jo, This story is just Amazing!!! I so love how romantic it is. Thank you PPVS