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Discovering Aphrodite
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Tina remained quiet as she looked at her plate, she looked back at Bette, seeing a twinkle in the other woman’s eye.
“You want another coffee?” Tina said innocently.
Bette gave a crooked smile, it hadn’t taken long to work it out, but there had to be some kind of agreement if they did end up having some kind of ‘holiday romance’. “Sure…”
Tina returned with their coffee, she didn’t know whether there was going to be a specific conversation about it but Bette seemed ‘focused’ on knowing that she had possible intentions.
“Tina…?” Bette said as Tina sat back in her seat silently.
“Uhuh?” Tina said, taking a subconscious deep breath, waiting for a knock back.
“If we are going to…,” Bette smiled, “‘spend time’ together…”
Tina looked up, interrupting Bette’s question, “do you want us to ‘spend time’ together?”
Bette smiled, “of course…, but why don’t we just leave everything from home behind…, just spend time here on holiday and whatever happens…, happens…, let’s just enjoy one another’s company…”
Tina smiled, she couldn’t have put it better herself, “that sounds good…”
Bette placed her napkin on her plate and finished the remnants of coffee in her cup, “are you ready to go and discover Aphrodite?”
“Sure…, I just need to go back to my room and get my bag…, do we need a map…, guidebook…?”
Bette stood up, pulling Tina’s chair out for her. She touched her back gently as they walked to the path, “I already have those, but bring whatever you want…, I’ll just wait here for you…”
Tina turned towards Bette just as Bette stepped forward, their bodies almost colliding. Bette caught Tina as she stumbled forward, “hey, you okay…” Bette said as she straightened, her hands still around Tina.
“Uh yeah, I don’t know what happened then…” Tina replied as she too stood straight, feeling an instant reaction in the pounding in her chest at the closeness.
Bette looked directly into Tina’s eyes, then dropping to her lips. She licked her own lips without thought and leaned forward slightly.
Tina’s breath caught in her throat as Bette’s lips touched hers. They both straightened their bodies and leant closer to one another as Bette’s arm tightened her grasp.
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You’re up late! Great story, Jo. I hope your holiday was as enjoyable as this story is! Take care.
I bet you say OMG every time you glance at that wonderful photo of JB in the shower, eh? Great writing per usual, Jo.
OMG, I SEE IT ALL!!! wonderfully written as usual. Loving it.
OMG you didn’t just stop there did you? There HAS to be another page….where is it? It must have got lost…because you would NOT leave us hanging like that….JO!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG is right!! I didnt see that coming. what will they do next Jo? great story.
She’s wearing granny pants, isn’t she? ROFL!OMG is right – get that next steaming hot chappy to us pronto, Jo!
Okay so I’m sure that there must be another page that my computer just didn’t load! Seriously, that’s where you stopped?!?! I love this story! Can’t wait for more!
Jo, OMG is right, that was just beautiful and I did not expect Tina to unwrap Bette so soon. I’d say the dinner will have to wait for awhile. Bette is the only thing on the menu at the moment. Hope Tina doesn’t ruin her pretty blue dress. At least let her hang it up and not leave it on the floor. Loved it but the computer ate the last page because you would not leave us hanging like that, now would you. PPS Jo, pretty please. Thanks for posting.
i was waiting for Levis to make their appearance but naked Bette is even better…i guess their dinner would have to wait, right? can wait for the next chapter
Well I think I know what is for dinner, and it’s not on a menu at a resturant! lol PPS:)
Oh. My. God. I echo Tina’s sentiment. The build-up is brilliant – the tension palpable – and the anticipation … gah! I can’t wait. Loved this update as it was both sweet and hot. Thanks Jo!
My recent holiday really can’t compare… Enjoying the story, thanks, Jo.
Jo…I am catching up..and I know there is another chapter all ready out there but I just have to say OMG! you are amazing woman.
i guess just like Tina all we can really say is ‘oh my god’ lol this is really a wonderful story. can’t wait for the next one!
‘Whew’… unexpected and freakin’ good!~
Oh My God, indeed. Looks like they’re having dinner of a different variety. Tina isn’t shy at all, which in my opinion is very very good.
So, Aphrodite is discovered indeed!
my thoughts exactly Tina my thoughts exactly…
Just discovered this story. Looks good. I’m gonna catch up on it asap.
Holy…….. a wet and naked Bette. I cannot stand it. Cancel dinner, Tina is going straight for DESSERT. Please DO NOT TORTURE ME BY MAKING ME WAIT. PPVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVS.
Oh my. Their dinner plans look like they’re about to change. Maybe Tina needs a dip in Aphrodite’s baths? I know I do… pps, Jo. Thanks!
I love it! Great story.
A wonderful tale as always! I will say though that I feel the need to come to the defense of the ‘blue rinse brigade.’ This sentence, “maybe, they might need some aspect of their life sprucing up, so you never know, or maybe they’ll be visiting the Baths of Adonis to see if they can get back some of their long forgotten fertility…” was spoken with the true arrogance of the young. Not everyone is as lucky as Bette and Tina and able to visit these mythical places when they are young like B&T. For many people it is only after they have retired and have let go of so many of lifes obligations can they finally visit places that they have read about their whole lives. So please Jo…be nice to those people who are in their waning years, and be happy for them that they can finally fulfill one of their lifelong dreams, no matter the color of their hair. (Sorry, not sure why that sentence upset me so, but, LOL, it clearly did. Thanks Jo!!
OMG can’t believe you leave us like that lol, that was beautiful and sweet, love them. I think their dinner need to wait cause a naked Bette is more important now lol. Please post more, thanks!
Finally caught up! Wow so amazing! I want a holiday romance ;) please please please post soon I can’t wait to see what happens
OMG noone ever answers the door in a towel for me..You stay on my favorite authors list!
My thoughts exactly “OMG you didn’t just stop there did you?” PPS Love it Jo!
This is a freakin good story. You can actually picture it all. Thank you for this and now am off to read the next chapter! Thank you again :)
Hello, dear sweet Jo! Wow! This update was just breath taking. Gosh! All the fine details you added were just beautiful and a joy to visualize. Thanks for this marvelous update, dearest friend. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lu & Marsh(Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick and Tias Adoradas to Patpez)
No, Tina, it’s “Oh my goddess.”
OMFG!!!! That was wonderful. Dinner is so going to be put on hold. Love it. Thanks Jo PPVS