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Disturbance – The Day After Part 3
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Bette: Tina where are you?
Tina didn’t answer right away.
Bette: Tina! you need to tell me where you are now please so I can help.
Tina: Bette…I’m at your door.
Bette heart skip a beat, Tina was at her doorsteps and she didn’t know what she was about to see.
Tina: Bette I’m sorry for bothering you with my problems, I will just go.
Bette realized she was silent and that made Tina feel like Bette didn’t want to help her, she quickly recovered from her train of thoughts.
Bette: No I’m sorry Tina I’m just coming to the door please don’t leave, please!
Bette reached the door and quickly opened it to let Tina in, but what she thought she would see was nothing like the visual in person. The door opened and there stood Tina, both eyes now black, lip busted, cheeks redden and swollen, nose bleeding and clothes ripped exposing her bra. She looked like someone had slapped her over and over, punched her in the face more than once, and then dragged her around by her clothes ripping them…just a horrible view to see on anyone. Bette immediately grabbed Tina and burst into sobs, she only knew this woman for one day, well two if you count last night but she felt like she had known her forever and wanted to protect her. Tina had Christie’s hand in hers while crying hysterical into Bette’s shoulders. Christie shrugged away from Tina and ran to Angelica who was now standing in the living room watching this horrific scene unfold. Angelica grabbed Christie’s hand and both little girls ran into Angie’s room closing the door.
Bette: its ok you’re safe now, he will never hurt you again as long as I’m around.
Bette was trying to comfort Tina in a soft voice but it wasn’t working.
Bette: go head sweetie get it out, I know…I know…its ok you’re safe now.
Bette said again to reassure Tina, and after a few more minutes Tina was finally starting to settle down.
Bette: come on let’s get you clean up then we need to call the police.
Tina: No…no police!
Bette froze in her tracks.
Bette: ARE YOU KIDDING ME TINA! LOOK AT YOUR FACE!
Tina: Bette please
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Please some good news………
It wouldve been good news earlier hadn’t Tina listened to everyone but she didn’t, maybe next chapter things will change
Spousal abuse probably happens way more than the public realizes. We just see the sensational cases like in the NFL And yet no one thought it was too bad UNTIL they saw the video tape of Ray Rice knocking his fiancee unconscious in the elevator.
Please give Tina the courage to press charges against Henry for attempted murder and depraved indifference. Post when you can.
Exactly..and you are so right but trust me Tina has courage she just need to find it
Hello! I was off today so I broke down and read this story! Its a very sad and amazing story! I don’t understand how a person don’t realize they don’t have to be in a situation like abuse. All we can do is pray for them and pray they get MAJOR help! Love your self more than you love the person that’s beating you. I stepped outside my box on this one.
Everytime I write a chapter I have to step outside the box also to complete it because it becomes too emotional sometimes…sigh
henry es un desgraciado y merece lo peor por lo que le ha hecho a tina
espero el proximo capitulo
No speak any English!
Oh my heart was so tight to see Tina being mistreated
by the monster, it was a very sad scene, also sad to know
it happens in real life.
Maybe now Tina has the courage to send to jail
this soulless.
You are a fantastic writer!
10 stars.
Note: I’ll have to buy medicine from the heart
to the next chapter.
Please lock this mother f$%&er up pronto and please let him be raped nightly that’s all I can say apart from great story and pps.
I’m with topcoat! Domestic abuse is the hidden evil in our society. Hopefully you telling this story will help at least one person find the strength to get out of an abusive situation – whether heterosexual or homosexual or blood relative. Thank your for sharing.
What a day
Thank you for a wonderful update. Hope Tina’s nightmare end soon. she should have get help sooner. Abusive is a sickness , can’t explain much. A good fren of mine trying to get over her abusive boyfriend, trying to leave him many times but something holding her back. A lots of beating until end up in a very bad shape, at the end one of our fren act discreetly and beat the hell out of him, maybe an eye to an eye works better, only when he felt the pain he did to others then he will stop. Of course I don’t encourage violent here but we all felt great after hearing what happened to him. My fren is well now but no confident in other relationship.
I like your story…. keep it up and more soon.
Yes, it is indeed a difficult situation, but I really liked it, dear.
for the victims is very difficult to take the first step to put an end to the situation. Tina just lucky because she found Bette to whom she feel confidence immediately.
I’m so glad that Tina went to Bette’s house, but the bastard found them, but police arrived in the nick of time.
I hope, we never to be heard from him again !!!! :)
and now we are able to read the wonderful friendship of two women and finally getting closer to each other ;)
the two little girls were so sweet, I have tears in my eyes.
I agree with all the comments above.
Hope we will never have to see that evil bastard and that Tina and Christie can move on with their lives.
Luckily they have two amazing persons who can support them.
You are doing a amazing job with this subject!