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Disturbance – The Day After Part 3
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Bette: TINA HOW LONG ARE YOU GOING TO PROTECT HIM HUH? UNTIL HE KILLS YOU.
Tina walked over to the couch and began to sob again. Bette realized she was shouting at this woman and that’s probably the last thing she needed to hear, she went over and kneeled in front of Tina.
Bette: Tina I’m sorry…please forgive me I have no rights to yelled at you…please I’m so sorry.
Bette was looking Tina in the eyes, Tina then looked Bette right back in the eyes and there she saw something…this woman truly cared about her.
Tina: please Bette I’m so scared to call the police. I was supposed to go down there this morning and make a complaint but I didn’t and now…
Tina stopped talking and kept on sobbing.
Bette then got up and sat next to her, bringing Tina into a tight hug.
Bette: I know you scared Tina but if you don’t report this it will keep happening. Tina he will never stop hurting you and I’m just afraid that when you finally make up your mind to do something about it, it just might be too late.
Tina was letting Bette’s words linger in her head, she knew that Bette was right, that Marcus was right, that the police was right, everybody and anybody was right, she needed to press charges against Henry and have him arrested. If she had to be a single parent from here on then so be it, because any parent who are willing to hurt their family don’t need to be around their family anyways.
Tina: you right Bette, I…
Tina was cut off by beating at the door, both her and Bette jumped and fear washed over them.
Bette: Tina does Henry know where I live.
Tina: No
And at that moment they heard the voice.
Henry: hey I’m looking for my wife I know she is in there because I saw her running to this door, now open the fucking door!
Tina: OMG! Bette what are we going to do?
How the hell did I get myself into this…was the first thought that ran through Bette’s mind.
Bette: Tina go in the room with the children and call the police, I will try to talk to him okay.
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Please some good news………
It wouldve been good news earlier hadn’t Tina listened to everyone but she didn’t, maybe next chapter things will change
Spousal abuse probably happens way more than the public realizes. We just see the sensational cases like in the NFL And yet no one thought it was too bad UNTIL they saw the video tape of Ray Rice knocking his fiancee unconscious in the elevator.
Please give Tina the courage to press charges against Henry for attempted murder and depraved indifference. Post when you can.
Exactly..and you are so right but trust me Tina has courage she just need to find it
Hello! I was off today so I broke down and read this story! Its a very sad and amazing story! I don’t understand how a person don’t realize they don’t have to be in a situation like abuse. All we can do is pray for them and pray they get MAJOR help! Love your self more than you love the person that’s beating you. I stepped outside my box on this one.
Everytime I write a chapter I have to step outside the box also to complete it because it becomes too emotional sometimes…sigh
henry es un desgraciado y merece lo peor por lo que le ha hecho a tina
espero el proximo capitulo
No speak any English!
Oh my heart was so tight to see Tina being mistreated
by the monster, it was a very sad scene, also sad to know
it happens in real life.
Maybe now Tina has the courage to send to jail
this soulless.
You are a fantastic writer!
10 stars.
Note: I’ll have to buy medicine from the heart
to the next chapter.
Please lock this mother f$%&er up pronto and please let him be raped nightly that’s all I can say apart from great story and pps.
I’m with topcoat! Domestic abuse is the hidden evil in our society. Hopefully you telling this story will help at least one person find the strength to get out of an abusive situation – whether heterosexual or homosexual or blood relative. Thank your for sharing.
What a day
Thank you for a wonderful update. Hope Tina’s nightmare end soon. she should have get help sooner. Abusive is a sickness , can’t explain much. A good fren of mine trying to get over her abusive boyfriend, trying to leave him many times but something holding her back. A lots of beating until end up in a very bad shape, at the end one of our fren act discreetly and beat the hell out of him, maybe an eye to an eye works better, only when he felt the pain he did to others then he will stop. Of course I don’t encourage violent here but we all felt great after hearing what happened to him. My fren is well now but no confident in other relationship.
I like your story…. keep it up and more soon.
Yes, it is indeed a difficult situation, but I really liked it, dear.
for the victims is very difficult to take the first step to put an end to the situation. Tina just lucky because she found Bette to whom she feel confidence immediately.
I’m so glad that Tina went to Bette’s house, but the bastard found them, but police arrived in the nick of time.
I hope, we never to be heard from him again !!!! :)
and now we are able to read the wonderful friendship of two women and finally getting closer to each other ;)
the two little girls were so sweet, I have tears in my eyes.
I agree with all the comments above.
Hope we will never have to see that evil bastard and that Tina and Christie can move on with their lives.
Luckily they have two amazing persons who can support them.
You are doing a amazing job with this subject!