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Disturbance – The Day After Part 3
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Tina: Bette please you don’t know what he’s capable of.
Bette: Tina please just go!
Tina ran into the room with the children leaving Bette alone to deal with her dangerous husband.
Bette hands were shaking uncontrollably she was so nervous but Henry continued to beat on the door, clearly he wasn’t going away. Bette took one last deep breath and slowly unlocked her door
Bette: yes can I help you, it’s Henry right?
Henry: cut the bullshit, where is my wife?
Bette: I’m sorry but you are mistaken, I haven’t seen your wife since early today at the school.
Henry: don’t lie to me you fucking bitch I saw her come here…to this house, now I will ask you one more time WHERE IS SHE?
What Bette saw in Henry’s eyes could scare her for a lifetime…they were filled with darkness and pure evil. Slowly she said a prayer in her head, this wasn’t going to be good and she knew it.
Bette: Henry please I’m going have to ask you to leave my property before I call the cops.
At that moment Henry barged in the house pushing pass Bette, he started searching the house room by room.
Bette got near her phone on the couch where she left it when talking to Tina and immediately dialed 911.
Operator: 911 what’s your emergency?
Bette: yes my is Bette Porter I live at 3123 West Holloywood, I have a man here who have broken into my home looking for his wife.
Operator: ok ma’am we have police already in route, can you tell me where the man now?
Bette: he’s in my bedroom
Operator: can you describe him to me?
Bette: white male, dark brown hair, about 6’3, probably in his late thirties early forties not sure, just please get here as quick as possible there are children in the house.
Tears were now falling down the brunette cheeks.
Operator: ma’am a unit is outside of your home…
As the operator said that last sentence Bette heard a loud bang in the house and immediately her heart rate dropped, she already knew what it was….HENRY HAD FOUND TINA.
Omg Angelica…was all Bette thought…she dropped the phone and ran into Angelica’s room.
She heard Tina screaming the closer she got to the door, when she opened the door Henry was just about to punch Tina when Bette ran up behind and kicked him in the growing. Henry winced at the pain and slightly release his hold on Tina and that gave her enough amount of strength to break free and get out of the hold. She quickly got to her foot and ran to the closet where Angie and Christie were hiding and pulled them out. Everyone began running towards the front door, Tina was behind and suddenly felt a strong yank by her hair. Henry had caught up to them ignoring his pain now, he pulled her the floor and gave her one hard kick in the stomach. Everything was happening in speed motion, too fast for anyone to think or comprehen exactly what was hapoening, everyone was just living this horrible moment as it was happening. Bette had made to the door witht he kids not realizing that Tina was pulled back but luckly the cops were rushing through and immediately attacked Henry just as he was about to kick Tina again.
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Please some good news………
It wouldve been good news earlier hadn’t Tina listened to everyone but she didn’t, maybe next chapter things will change
Spousal abuse probably happens way more than the public realizes. We just see the sensational cases like in the NFL And yet no one thought it was too bad UNTIL they saw the video tape of Ray Rice knocking his fiancee unconscious in the elevator.
Please give Tina the courage to press charges against Henry for attempted murder and depraved indifference. Post when you can.
Exactly..and you are so right but trust me Tina has courage she just need to find it
Hello! I was off today so I broke down and read this story! Its a very sad and amazing story! I don’t understand how a person don’t realize they don’t have to be in a situation like abuse. All we can do is pray for them and pray they get MAJOR help! Love your self more than you love the person that’s beating you. I stepped outside my box on this one.
Everytime I write a chapter I have to step outside the box also to complete it because it becomes too emotional sometimes…sigh
henry es un desgraciado y merece lo peor por lo que le ha hecho a tina
espero el proximo capitulo
No speak any English!
Oh my heart was so tight to see Tina being mistreated
by the monster, it was a very sad scene, also sad to know
it happens in real life.
Maybe now Tina has the courage to send to jail
this soulless.
You are a fantastic writer!
10 stars.
Note: I’ll have to buy medicine from the heart
to the next chapter.
Please lock this mother f$%&er up pronto and please let him be raped nightly that’s all I can say apart from great story and pps.
I’m with topcoat! Domestic abuse is the hidden evil in our society. Hopefully you telling this story will help at least one person find the strength to get out of an abusive situation – whether heterosexual or homosexual or blood relative. Thank your for sharing.
What a day
Thank you for a wonderful update. Hope Tina’s nightmare end soon. she should have get help sooner. Abusive is a sickness , can’t explain much. A good fren of mine trying to get over her abusive boyfriend, trying to leave him many times but something holding her back. A lots of beating until end up in a very bad shape, at the end one of our fren act discreetly and beat the hell out of him, maybe an eye to an eye works better, only when he felt the pain he did to others then he will stop. Of course I don’t encourage violent here but we all felt great after hearing what happened to him. My fren is well now but no confident in other relationship.
I like your story…. keep it up and more soon.
Yes, it is indeed a difficult situation, but I really liked it, dear.
for the victims is very difficult to take the first step to put an end to the situation. Tina just lucky because she found Bette to whom she feel confidence immediately.
I’m so glad that Tina went to Bette’s house, but the bastard found them, but police arrived in the nick of time.
I hope, we never to be heard from him again !!!! :)
and now we are able to read the wonderful friendship of two women and finally getting closer to each other ;)
the two little girls were so sweet, I have tears in my eyes.
I agree with all the comments above.
Hope we will never have to see that evil bastard and that Tina and Christie can move on with their lives.
Luckily they have two amazing persons who can support them.
You are doing a amazing job with this subject!