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Disturbance – The Day After Part 3
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Outside officer: ma’am ambulance is on their way…here take it easy.
He helped her sit on the edge of the curb.
Tina: Christie. My baby.
Tina said in a whisper like voice as the pain was shooting through her side from being kicked.
Bette: it’s okay Tina they are safe in the police car.
Tina looked up and saw Angie and Christie looking at her through the window with crocodile tears in their eyes, but they weren’t the only voyeurs, as neighbors were beginning to come outside and stand in their yards watching the scene from afar. Tina noticed this and instantly became embarrassed at the thought of people seeing her now and as the days pass. Bette noticed Tina looking around at the neighbors.
Bette: hey Tina don’t worry about them, the most important thing is your health right now and our safety.
She then turned to the car and opened the door for the girls to get out.
Bette: its okay babies you can come out it’s safe now.
Both girls ran to their parents.
Bette: aww baby I know I know, shh everything is fine now sweetie.
Tina: im fine Christie, nomore tears from now on, I promise baby.
Both women were speaking to their daughters at the same time, comforting them the best way possible. After all they were two 8 years olds, still very young kids, witnessing a terrible crime. Angie and Christie both were sobbing into their mothers shoulders which caused the parents to also silently sob.
The outside officer was watching every moment of this and he too had tears in his eyes…yes a real men cry too! He heart went out to these ladies and he would make sure the police department put that bastard away for a long time.
At the moment the ambulance arrived and even though it seemed like forever, only five minutes had only passed, it’s just that everything was happening so fast.
Outside officer: come on ma’am lets get you in the ambulance.
He and Bette both helped Tina up and the ambulance men rushed out with a strecher and also start helping Tina. They quickly hooked her up to the bed in put her in the back on the truck.
Tina: Christie
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Please some good news………
It wouldve been good news earlier hadn’t Tina listened to everyone but she didn’t, maybe next chapter things will change
Spousal abuse probably happens way more than the public realizes. We just see the sensational cases like in the NFL And yet no one thought it was too bad UNTIL they saw the video tape of Ray Rice knocking his fiancee unconscious in the elevator.
Please give Tina the courage to press charges against Henry for attempted murder and depraved indifference. Post when you can.
Exactly..and you are so right but trust me Tina has courage she just need to find it
Hello! I was off today so I broke down and read this story! Its a very sad and amazing story! I don’t understand how a person don’t realize they don’t have to be in a situation like abuse. All we can do is pray for them and pray they get MAJOR help! Love your self more than you love the person that’s beating you. I stepped outside my box on this one.
Everytime I write a chapter I have to step outside the box also to complete it because it becomes too emotional sometimes…sigh
henry es un desgraciado y merece lo peor por lo que le ha hecho a tina
espero el proximo capitulo
No speak any English!
Oh my heart was so tight to see Tina being mistreated
by the monster, it was a very sad scene, also sad to know
it happens in real life.
Maybe now Tina has the courage to send to jail
this soulless.
You are a fantastic writer!
10 stars.
Note: I’ll have to buy medicine from the heart
to the next chapter.
Please lock this mother f$%&er up pronto and please let him be raped nightly that’s all I can say apart from great story and pps.
I’m with topcoat! Domestic abuse is the hidden evil in our society. Hopefully you telling this story will help at least one person find the strength to get out of an abusive situation – whether heterosexual or homosexual or blood relative. Thank your for sharing.
What a day
Thank you for a wonderful update. Hope Tina’s nightmare end soon. she should have get help sooner. Abusive is a sickness , can’t explain much. A good fren of mine trying to get over her abusive boyfriend, trying to leave him many times but something holding her back. A lots of beating until end up in a very bad shape, at the end one of our fren act discreetly and beat the hell out of him, maybe an eye to an eye works better, only when he felt the pain he did to others then he will stop. Of course I don’t encourage violent here but we all felt great after hearing what happened to him. My fren is well now but no confident in other relationship.
I like your story…. keep it up and more soon.
Yes, it is indeed a difficult situation, but I really liked it, dear.
for the victims is very difficult to take the first step to put an end to the situation. Tina just lucky because she found Bette to whom she feel confidence immediately.
I’m so glad that Tina went to Bette’s house, but the bastard found them, but police arrived in the nick of time.
I hope, we never to be heard from him again !!!! :)
and now we are able to read the wonderful friendship of two women and finally getting closer to each other ;)
the two little girls were so sweet, I have tears in my eyes.
I agree with all the comments above.
Hope we will never have to see that evil bastard and that Tina and Christie can move on with their lives.
Luckily they have two amazing persons who can support them.
You are doing a amazing job with this subject!