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Disturbance – The Day After Part 3
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Officers: Freeze!! Hands in the air now!! Hands in the air now!! Get them up!! Let’s see those hands!
Officers were all yelling at Henry at one time.
Henry did as instructed.
Officers: Step away from the victim now!!
Henry moved away from Tina not before looking down at her one more time, Tina met his eye and knew that was the last time she would have to see that evil devish look again. She was going to put a end to this now! Nomore lying, nomore covering for her abusive husband, no more beatings, nomore fear, nomore tears, nomore putting the ones she loved in danger, most of all NOMORE HENRY!
Meanwhile Outside…
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Bette was standing next to a officer who grab them once they ran out the house in put them out of harm’s way, she needed to make sure Tina was ok so she told Angie and Christie to stay with the police officer.
Bette: Angie baby I need you and Christie to stay here with this officer, he will keep yall safe, mommy needs to go check on Ms.Kennard ok.
Bette was kneeling down to her daughter in a panick to go back inside. Angie nodded her head.
Bette: good girl I will be right back.
With that Bette began to run back inside when the officer suddenly grab her arm.
Outside Officer: ma’am I’m sorry but I need you to stay here.
Bette: no I need to go back in their and make sure she is ok!
Bette pulled away from the officer.
Officer: ma’am stop! You can’t go back in there it’s not safe.
Bette: I don’t fucking care right now, I’m not staying out here while she’s in there with that predator.
Bette snapped at the officer, and without waiting for another response she ran back inside. Immediately spotting Tina still on the floor she went over to her aid.
Bette: Tina baby are you ok? Come on sweetie let’s get you up and out of here.
Bette slowly helped Tina up and they quickly walked outside towards the police car. Bette held Tina tight in her arms, probably causing her pain but her emotions were gwtting the best of her, she couldn’t believe what they just went through and now she was happy everyone was safe and out of harm’s way.
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Please some good news………
It wouldve been good news earlier hadn’t Tina listened to everyone but she didn’t, maybe next chapter things will change
Spousal abuse probably happens way more than the public realizes. We just see the sensational cases like in the NFL And yet no one thought it was too bad UNTIL they saw the video tape of Ray Rice knocking his fiancee unconscious in the elevator.
Please give Tina the courage to press charges against Henry for attempted murder and depraved indifference. Post when you can.
Exactly..and you are so right but trust me Tina has courage she just need to find it
Hello! I was off today so I broke down and read this story! Its a very sad and amazing story! I don’t understand how a person don’t realize they don’t have to be in a situation like abuse. All we can do is pray for them and pray they get MAJOR help! Love your self more than you love the person that’s beating you. I stepped outside my box on this one.
Everytime I write a chapter I have to step outside the box also to complete it because it becomes too emotional sometimes…sigh
henry es un desgraciado y merece lo peor por lo que le ha hecho a tina
espero el proximo capitulo
No speak any English!
Oh my heart was so tight to see Tina being mistreated
by the monster, it was a very sad scene, also sad to know
it happens in real life.
Maybe now Tina has the courage to send to jail
this soulless.
You are a fantastic writer!
10 stars.
Note: I’ll have to buy medicine from the heart
to the next chapter.
Please lock this mother f$%&er up pronto and please let him be raped nightly that’s all I can say apart from great story and pps.
I’m with topcoat! Domestic abuse is the hidden evil in our society. Hopefully you telling this story will help at least one person find the strength to get out of an abusive situation – whether heterosexual or homosexual or blood relative. Thank your for sharing.
What a day
Thank you for a wonderful update. Hope Tina’s nightmare end soon. she should have get help sooner. Abusive is a sickness , can’t explain much. A good fren of mine trying to get over her abusive boyfriend, trying to leave him many times but something holding her back. A lots of beating until end up in a very bad shape, at the end one of our fren act discreetly and beat the hell out of him, maybe an eye to an eye works better, only when he felt the pain he did to others then he will stop. Of course I don’t encourage violent here but we all felt great after hearing what happened to him. My fren is well now but no confident in other relationship.
I like your story…. keep it up and more soon.
Yes, it is indeed a difficult situation, but I really liked it, dear.
for the victims is very difficult to take the first step to put an end to the situation. Tina just lucky because she found Bette to whom she feel confidence immediately.
I’m so glad that Tina went to Bette’s house, but the bastard found them, but police arrived in the nick of time.
I hope, we never to be heard from him again !!!! :)
and now we are able to read the wonderful friendship of two women and finally getting closer to each other ;)
the two little girls were so sweet, I have tears in my eyes.
I agree with all the comments above.
Hope we will never have to see that evil bastard and that Tina and Christie can move on with their lives.
Luckily they have two amazing persons who can support them.
You are doing a amazing job with this subject!