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Do You Remember When? – CG’s Chapter
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Of all the things that Bette loved to do holding Tina, naked in her arms, while she recovered from an orgasm was one of Bette’s favourites. No matter how many times she had done this she was still amazed by how Tina always gave everything of herself in these moments. There was nothing held back and Bette never wanted it any other way. She absolutely adored the way that Tina trusted her enough to see her at her most vulnerable, about how she trusted Bette to catch her when she fell.
Tina pulled Bette as close as she could and held on, just wanting to feel Bette’s strong arms around her. In the back of her mind she knew that she this conversation had one wildly off track but right now couldn’t be happier that Bette still wanted her this much, after all this time together they still felt the pull to express there love in a physical, earth moving way. Once Tina had regained her regular breathing pattern she pull back to find Bette smiling at her, announcing her love and yet saying nothing at all.
“That was incredible.” whispered Tina.
“I aim to please.” replied Bette, smirking.
“I can’t remember where we were.”
“I think you were telling me how you’re the luckiest woman in the world.” said Bette, the smirk now getting dangerously close to gloating.
“Bette can’t you see that I’ve always thought that. Even that night when you were having a hard time with your father. Every time he’s been here, it may not have always been easy, but it never once affected the way that I felt about you. In some ways when I talk to him I see some of the things that I love about you. The way that he knows what he wants, how he has principles, even that stubborn Porter streak. You got all of that from him, and I wouldn’t change that for anything.”
“You’re too good for me.” laughed Bette, thinking that no-one could really love a stubborn streak a mile wide.
“No, I think we fit just right.” laughed Tina, in reply.
“So that’s what you wanted to tell me. That you love me despite everything.”
“No Bette, I love you because of everything. Everything that’s made you the woman you are today makes me fall in love with you a tiny bit more every day.”
“Thank you, but you know something? It’s still unhygienic to sit on the counter.” said Bette, moving away quickly to avoid the swat of Tina’s hand that she knew was coming her way.
Tina jumped off the counter and rescued her clothes from the floor before following Bette to the bathroom. Bette might think that she was smart but Tina knew something that she didn’t. Bette was going to be very late for work this morning.
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What a wonderful conversation, among other things. :-) Something we will never see on the show…Bette and Tina actually talking…saying things that can’t fit into one short sentence. Thanks!
Great dialogue…..Cannot wait 4 round 2…bio….
WOW, Melvin and sex in one chapter!!! And the three hour and eighteen minute kiss!! LOL That was really great mate. You still really don’t realise how good your writing is do you?? You know, when we talked about which chapter you wanted to write as part of our deal I certainly never expected to see and NC17 and Melvin!!! LOL Perfect B&T mate – thank you so much.
Great post… and great dialogue between Bette and Tina. They actually talk about there feelings, which is what most people do in a relationship, but I guess IC is a bit off. Who would have thought that talks about Melvin could lead to sex on the kitchen counter. Can’t wait for the update.
Great, as usual!
What a cliffy….I hope Jo let you write a follow-up :o))
Wow…so “sitting” on the counter is unhygienic….lol. BOTH of you ladies blow me away with your writing…it’s crazy. If only Melvin could see them now…and to know talking about him was foreplay…lol. Keep posting! Both of youse.
this was wonderful, the talk, the memory, the loving…wonderful
So much of what you both write, as well as as others is the talking, the communication, the description, the dialogue, banter…it all forms to create a beautiful tale. A brilliant chapter, thankyou!
wow
That was a very enjoyable post. : )
hotttttttttttttttttttttttt
Who knew talking about a diapproving parent could get Tina, Bette, and the rest of us so hot? Unhygenic? Well, the old folks have a saying that everybody eats a peck of dirt in their life. I’m willing to bet Bette’s partaken of Tina’s ass a time or two already, so what’s the problem?
that was very sweet and very funny PPS
Love the mixture of sex and talk! Round 2 coming up???
Awesome chapter – what a great conversation and I love where it led them and us. thanks for teaming up on this one.
Excellent, the dialogue, their interaction and the love they share, if only this will happen sometime in S4, you doing great!
Love this now lets see how Jobadge does. You did very well. considing you were writing about Melvin thanks
Wow, Bette is standing up to her dad to protect the love of her life. I just wish that you would write more happy stories about B&T not sad ones.
Melvin and hot sex–who would have expected those two in the same chapter? Hope you get to do a follow-up!
Well, citygirl, gotta say, you certainly have guts! It takes a hell of a writer to accept the challenge to write one chapter of Jobadge’s “Do you remember when…”! And I won’t lie by saying that I didn’t have myself some expectations…;) Well, I think it’s safe to say that you’ve more than definitely met them!!! It was a great chapter, tender, loving, hot, but also very smart and, I’ve gotta say, very loyal to Jo’s storyline!!! So, congratulations to you, and thanks a lot for this moment of pure pleasure! K.
The topics of Melvin and sex remind me of “Melvin at the Beach” or whatever B&T named that sex tape in AmandaMG’s story. xD Nice chapter!
That was a wonderful chapter, Citygirl! Thank you so much!
excellent story. I’m missing your writing, pleas come back with anoher story.
Melvin was a asshole some times but he just come from a different time were lesbians weren’t really the right thing especially not a biracial couple, but he eventually he came along just a lil too late, and Tina still love Bette despite it all