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Do You Remember When? – CG’s Chapter
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It was early in the morning when Bette walked into the kitchen. She was dressed in a black suit and fully focused on the day ahead. There were big decisions to be made at work and she wanted what was best for her as well as the gallery and she knew that she had to leave on time to pick up an important visitor at the airport. She opened the refrigerator door and peered inside, while she was reaching for the orange juice she was aware that Tina had followed her into the kitchen. When Bette looked up she was surprised to see Tina sitting on the kitchen counter, looking down at her hands.
“When I sit on the counter you always tell me it’s unhygienic.” said Bette, a smile in her voice.
“What?” asked Tina, still paying more attention to her hands that to Bette.
“It’s unhygienic T. To sit on the counter.” tried Bette, again.
“Yeah, sorry. I should get down.” replied Tina, looking at Bette and starting to move from the counter.
“No, don’t.” said Bette, moving quickly across the kitchen to keep Tina exactly where she was.
As soon as Bette had reached Tina she positioned herself between Tina’s legs and reached for the back of Tina’s neck. Their eyes met for a brief moment before Bette leaned in to kiss Tina fully on the lips. It was gentle at first, almost hesitant, like tasting something for the first time, then Bette felt Tina’s hand on her lower back, pulling Bette towards her. Bette knew what this meant. It meant that Tina wanted more and how Bette wanted to give her more. She probed a little harder with her tongue and felt her knees buckle for a moment when she felt Tina’s tongue against her own. They stayed like this for the next few minutes, exploring each other’s mouths, like it was something that they could never get enough of.
When Bette finally pulled back she cupped Tina’s face in her hands and stroked her thumbs across her cheeks. To really look at Tina when it was just the two of them was something that Bette had always cherished. The sense of stillness, the sense of contentment in that kitchen, right at that time was palpable to them both, and neither of them wanted to ruin it by saying anything. Eventually Tina’s curiosity got the better of her.
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What a wonderful conversation, among other things. :-) Something we will never see on the show…Bette and Tina actually talking…saying things that can’t fit into one short sentence. Thanks!
Great dialogue…..Cannot wait 4 round 2…bio….
WOW, Melvin and sex in one chapter!!! And the three hour and eighteen minute kiss!! LOL That was really great mate. You still really don’t realise how good your writing is do you?? You know, when we talked about which chapter you wanted to write as part of our deal I certainly never expected to see and NC17 and Melvin!!! LOL Perfect B&T mate – thank you so much.
Great post… and great dialogue between Bette and Tina. They actually talk about there feelings, which is what most people do in a relationship, but I guess IC is a bit off. Who would have thought that talks about Melvin could lead to sex on the kitchen counter. Can’t wait for the update.
Great, as usual!
What a cliffy….I hope Jo let you write a follow-up :o))
Wow…so “sitting” on the counter is unhygienic….lol. BOTH of you ladies blow me away with your writing…it’s crazy. If only Melvin could see them now…and to know talking about him was foreplay…lol. Keep posting! Both of youse.
this was wonderful, the talk, the memory, the loving…wonderful
So much of what you both write, as well as as others is the talking, the communication, the description, the dialogue, banter…it all forms to create a beautiful tale. A brilliant chapter, thankyou!
wow
That was a very enjoyable post. : )
hotttttttttttttttttttttttt
Who knew talking about a diapproving parent could get Tina, Bette, and the rest of us so hot? Unhygenic? Well, the old folks have a saying that everybody eats a peck of dirt in their life. I’m willing to bet Bette’s partaken of Tina’s ass a time or two already, so what’s the problem?
that was very sweet and very funny PPS
Love the mixture of sex and talk! Round 2 coming up???
Awesome chapter – what a great conversation and I love where it led them and us. thanks for teaming up on this one.
Excellent, the dialogue, their interaction and the love they share, if only this will happen sometime in S4, you doing great!
Love this now lets see how Jobadge does. You did very well. considing you were writing about Melvin thanks
Wow, Bette is standing up to her dad to protect the love of her life. I just wish that you would write more happy stories about B&T not sad ones.
Melvin and hot sex–who would have expected those two in the same chapter? Hope you get to do a follow-up!
Well, citygirl, gotta say, you certainly have guts! It takes a hell of a writer to accept the challenge to write one chapter of Jobadge’s “Do you remember when…”! And I won’t lie by saying that I didn’t have myself some expectations…;) Well, I think it’s safe to say that you’ve more than definitely met them!!! It was a great chapter, tender, loving, hot, but also very smart and, I’ve gotta say, very loyal to Jo’s storyline!!! So, congratulations to you, and thanks a lot for this moment of pure pleasure! K.
The topics of Melvin and sex remind me of “Melvin at the Beach” or whatever B&T named that sex tape in AmandaMG’s story. xD Nice chapter!
That was a wonderful chapter, Citygirl! Thank you so much!
excellent story. I’m missing your writing, pleas come back with anoher story.
Melvin was a asshole some times but he just come from a different time were lesbians weren’t really the right thing especially not a biracial couple, but he eventually he came along just a lil too late, and Tina still love Bette despite it all