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Do You Remember When? – CG’s Chapter
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Tina was taken by surprise by how aroused she had become so quickly. She reached for Bette’s hands and guided them towards the top of her pyjama pants. All she could think about was how she had to feel Bette, surrounding her, consuming her, inside of her. She felt Bette sliding her hands underneath the material of her pyjama’s and moved so that they could be removed completely.
Bette gasped, and had to swallow hard at the sight that now confronted her. She had always loved how wet Tina got for her, but this was something else. She had never seen Tina this wet, this quickly. It was like their talk of love had been the arousing Tina, without her even knowing it. Bette took another glance down between Tina’s legs and then into Tina’s eyes. The look of adoration that Tina gave her stole Bette’s ability to breathe.
Then she felt Tina gently take her hand, guiding it to where Tina needed her the most. Tina let go, wanting Bette to do what she pleased, wanting Bette to make her come. To feel that exquisite pleasure of Bette loving her, hard yet gentle, soft yet firm, persistently yet, at the same time, wanting Tina to feel every loving touch knowing that the slow teasing will make it worth the wait.
Bette gently ran the tip of her finger up the side of Tina’s clit and then over the peak and down the other side. Tina gripped the back of Bette’s head, through her dark hair, bringing her closer, kissing her as if her life depended on it. All the while Bette maintain the steady, but infuriating rhythm on her clit. Up and down, just hard enough for Tina to feel every nerve ending snap but never hard enough to give her any relief. Bette smiled inside knowing how this was frustrating Tina, the passion in the kiss was enough to let her know that Tina wanted to come but at the same time wanted this to go on indefinitely.
Eventually, when even Bette couldn’t stand the intensity any longer, she moved her hand to quickly slide two fingers into Tina. At that sudden movement Tina’s heart missed a beat, Bette had taken her completely by surprise but she could feel the torrent of her orgasm already rushing up to meet her, there was nothing that could hold it back, wave after wave of extreme physical pleasure, of emotion, of love came pouring out of Tina, all for the woman that was now holding her close in her arms.
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What a wonderful conversation, among other things. :-) Something we will never see on the show…Bette and Tina actually talking…saying things that can’t fit into one short sentence. Thanks!
Great dialogue…..Cannot wait 4 round 2…bio….
WOW, Melvin and sex in one chapter!!! And the three hour and eighteen minute kiss!! LOL That was really great mate. You still really don’t realise how good your writing is do you?? You know, when we talked about which chapter you wanted to write as part of our deal I certainly never expected to see and NC17 and Melvin!!! LOL Perfect B&T mate – thank you so much.
Great post… and great dialogue between Bette and Tina. They actually talk about there feelings, which is what most people do in a relationship, but I guess IC is a bit off. Who would have thought that talks about Melvin could lead to sex on the kitchen counter. Can’t wait for the update.
Great, as usual!
What a cliffy….I hope Jo let you write a follow-up :o))
Wow…so “sitting” on the counter is unhygienic….lol. BOTH of you ladies blow me away with your writing…it’s crazy. If only Melvin could see them now…and to know talking about him was foreplay…lol. Keep posting! Both of youse.
this was wonderful, the talk, the memory, the loving…wonderful
So much of what you both write, as well as as others is the talking, the communication, the description, the dialogue, banter…it all forms to create a beautiful tale. A brilliant chapter, thankyou!
wow
That was a very enjoyable post. : )
hotttttttttttttttttttttttt
Who knew talking about a diapproving parent could get Tina, Bette, and the rest of us so hot? Unhygenic? Well, the old folks have a saying that everybody eats a peck of dirt in their life. I’m willing to bet Bette’s partaken of Tina’s ass a time or two already, so what’s the problem?
that was very sweet and very funny PPS
Love the mixture of sex and talk! Round 2 coming up???
Awesome chapter – what a great conversation and I love where it led them and us. thanks for teaming up on this one.
Excellent, the dialogue, their interaction and the love they share, if only this will happen sometime in S4, you doing great!
Love this now lets see how Jobadge does. You did very well. considing you were writing about Melvin thanks
Wow, Bette is standing up to her dad to protect the love of her life. I just wish that you would write more happy stories about B&T not sad ones.
Melvin and hot sex–who would have expected those two in the same chapter? Hope you get to do a follow-up!
Well, citygirl, gotta say, you certainly have guts! It takes a hell of a writer to accept the challenge to write one chapter of Jobadge’s “Do you remember when…”! And I won’t lie by saying that I didn’t have myself some expectations…;) Well, I think it’s safe to say that you’ve more than definitely met them!!! It was a great chapter, tender, loving, hot, but also very smart and, I’ve gotta say, very loyal to Jo’s storyline!!! So, congratulations to you, and thanks a lot for this moment of pure pleasure! K.
The topics of Melvin and sex remind me of “Melvin at the Beach” or whatever B&T named that sex tape in AmandaMG’s story. xD Nice chapter!
That was a wonderful chapter, Citygirl! Thank you so much!
excellent story. I’m missing your writing, pleas come back with anoher story.
Melvin was a asshole some times but he just come from a different time were lesbians weren’t really the right thing especially not a biracial couple, but he eventually he came along just a lil too late, and Tina still love Bette despite it all