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    Do you remember when… Chapter 4

    Story written on July 22, 2006 by Jobadge.
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    PART 2 of “Can I kiss you… really kiss you” – the aphrodisiac of falling in love…

    The moment, the long moment, a moment turning into minutes and hours, the merest of a lingering kiss turning into the full unadulterated, passionate embrace that lasted three hours and eighteen minutes, the single longest kiss she’d ever had, just the long kiss, slow at times, passionate at times, teasing, tasting, exploring bottom lips, top lips, deep tongues, and moments of just lingering sensual kisses.

    She felt intoxicated, their lips parted, their foreheads met, both needing the quiet moment to draw breath, a moment of clarity as the realisation set in of how that one singular kiss would change each of their lives. 

    As Tina had opened her eyes she felt the gaze from the woman in her arms, she allowed her eyes to travel up from the bruised lips to the intense eyes, the darkest pupils emanating such pure tenderness it took her breath away.

    "Hey…" Bette said as their eyes finally met.

    "Hey…" Tina replied in a whispered reply, her body was still pounding, her heart had yet to ease its furious beating, her body’s ache had yet to settle, regardless of the internal clenching muscles, hoping to dissipate the arousal that had been fiercely making its presence felt since their lips had met.

    "Are you okay?"

    Tina smiled at the concern, the woman before her continued to astound her with her gentleness and consideration for her well being. The feeling of safety once again entering her mind as Bette’s arm pulled her in closer.

    "I’m more than okay Bette; in fact I don’t think I’ve ever felt better."

    "I’m glad about that, I’m not sure I’d cope if I scared you away."

    "Don’t worry babe, I’m not going anywhere…"

    Bette had smiled as she heard the first endearment coming from Tina’s lips, "I could get used to that…"

    Tina backed away slightly, looking into the smiling face, knowing how the word had slipped out so easily, her female intuition kicking in as she read into Bette’s words, "you like me calling you babe?"

    Bette nodded as she smiled at the amazing woman in front of her, "just like you like me calling you ‘T’"

    "Looks like that’s settled then… babe."

    Bette laughed, "fine by me T, although I may be tempted to call you others things too."

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    3. A 10+ on the Richter Scale! *Thud* No One writes passion and romance and lust and desire like you do. Jo, you’re simply amazing. I agree with judith, I am breathless. Your stories should come with a health warning that oxygen canisters are needed while reading and for recovery afterwards. I know you must place yourself w/i your characters minds and hearts. That ‘s the only way your story could be so realistic. It’s as if I am participating in their actions not just observing. And you write in a way that is respectful to your characters and your readers. I am in awe of your talent in expressing so clearly what emotions your characters are experiencing. You write a love story that we all wished we had.

    5. i think my jaw hit the floor and my mouth went dry readin your story jo and it was fuckin amazing absolutly outta this worldfuckk i am work how am i supposed to concentrate on spreadsheets when i am dreamin and fatasizin abt b and t having hot as fuck makeout sessionouch

    6. No one captures it quite like you do …Every emotion that you can possibly imagine in this situation is right here…this chapter is so full of intense passion,…I had goosbumps! as always you come up with amazing chapters…then consistently top them!…Never surprised hun…But in complete awe at your talent…BTW the ending…Well!!this leaves it wide open for part 3…..lol…cant wait!……….

    7. Damn I need a cigarette after that. I think I know what azmama’s talking about. You make it easy to step into the characters’ shoes. That’s when a story becomes 3D. I’ve noticed when I read your stories that it can take me over an hour to finisha chapter. Not so much because it’s long or I’m a slow reader but rather so much is happening that I find myself going over certain things multiple times to make sure I didn’t miss anything. One more thing. If I had been in Tina’s shoes and watched Bette take off her bra, I wouldn’t let out a subtle whimper. I would’ve probably fallen right through the door and landed on the floor in a gooey puddle of love. I’m still waiting for Tina to find the bathroom. I’m sure her bladder is hurting right about now. =p

    10. so my little devonian shellfish – another genius chapter from you. i keep telling you that you are by a large distance the best writer on the site and everytime i say that you get all shy on me so – going to say it again – you are the best writer on the site. though i think he devouring of Bette Porter might be easier for you given your devotion to JB. frankly i am going to email the administrators and complain that this isn’t an nc17 cos it should be. i am in awe of you and i love you deeply — even if you are a clam

    11. just thought of something else == while i write this season 3 has just started on UK television – – give me your version of bette and tina everytime cos you are more talented than the hacks that cobbled together s3.

    12. OMFG, that was so real, erotic, sensual and any other word that can be used to descripe this chapter. Even though they never consummated their love in this chapter you could feel the tension, want and need of both woman. I am amazed that both women could hold themselves apart from another for as long as they did. I loved your description of Bette as the Super Hot Sex on Legs. It sounds like a very delectable desert. You now have earned not only the Cold Shower Award but also the Most Erotic Sensual Award.

    13. Way much better than a NC-17. So much love and passion…Gosh, you describe so well what everybody is looking for. So so good. Couldn’t do anything than just read. This is trully amazing. The writing is amazing ! I felt like i was spying on them in their living room. It was amazing, really really amazing !!! Thank you so much !!! Fantastic !!

    16. Jobadge you have outdone yourself this time. This is a wonderful story and this is exactly what we all want to see, well, at least all of us TiBetter’s, “our girls” in love and loving each other. Thanks for your story.

    17. Damn! These girls know how to make out. So glad Bette came to her senses. What was wrong with her, anyway? Well Jo, you’ve left me high and dry. All I’ve got is the couch.

    19. You know in my state I don’t need much to get myself going…Damn, girl, are you trying to kill me? You and Ally…I love England!!! Great chapter and I definitely can’t wait for the next one.

    21. God, when I asked last time for an other jewel to add in this marvellously beautiful necklace of yours, how could I have dream for a lovelier update ? You’re amazing, simply that, and I adore the way you depict with such a talent, deepness and sensitivity each step of this forever love story. What a wonderful tribute to this magical L word – the most powerful feeling ever. Thank you SO much for given us such an unforgettable gift ! They’re truly chapters to remember… And I cannot wait for the next !! ^_^

    22. JB You are fucking amazing!!!! You say so much that needs to be said about something that (to some) seems so small. Excellent! Three hours and eighteen minutes – where did you come up with that time exactly JB?

    23. All I can say is “OH MY GOD!!!!!!!” That was absolutley incredible!!!!!!!!!!!!! And you are absolutely incredible. Thank you for a WONDERFUAL chapter.

    26. WOW what a kissing marathon, but still no NC-17 Jo LOL!!! I don’t know what to say this time….other than you’re simply the best on this side and in general!!!!!! Your humble mate

    28. Wow…I read this story at 3 o’clock and was gonna comment on it when a friend came by for me to go to the store for a minute and here it is freakin 1:14 a.m….anyway love the story love B&T beginnings please post soon.

    31. Wow and that was just kissing!! Your chapters leave me breathless. You write like no other. The show could use your talent!! Please hurry soon with an update on what happens after the “I Love Yous”.

    33. Jobage, Your write the intense, imaginative and romantic chapters. The love just flows from each and every thought and word spoken by Bette and Tina. Their sudden connection has both terrified and engaged and entraped both of their hearts. The level of detail is magnificent as I can picture every scene and feel every breath, every loving touch, every amorous moan, every anticipated lick and suck. I adore the way in which you had Bette being the one trying to cool things down as Tina’s ador was taking them past the point of no return. Bette was so brilliant is trying to soothe Tina and explain her rationale for stopping this act. Tina’s vision of Bette’d unexpected strip tease was a joy. I could feel my heart start to pump faster and as my breathe swallowed as this scene played out. Bette’s reaction was glorious as she tried to reassure Tina that all was well. I was on the stairs as Tina recoiled from Bette’s rebuttal and jumped for joy as Bette captured Tina once more and took her into the house. This is so much desire and passion in this magical melodrama. Please let the night continue and our gals get all hot and sweaty in each others arms. Brava!! For an awesome adventure. Your Loyal Fan.

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