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    Do you remember when… Chapter 4

    Story written on July 22, 2006 by Jobadge.
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    PART 2 of “Can I kiss you… really kiss you” – the aphrodisiac of falling in love…

    Bette swirled her fingers in the blonde hair as Tina devoured her neck, her own bodily reaction taking her by surprise as the immediate reaction was felt through every nerve ending in her body, this was so new to her, how could this woman she met only a few days ago have such a powerful effect on not only her mind but her body as well, not to mention the muscle in her chest that she always guarded with such ferocity, the cold heart that Alice always said that no one could get to, the walls that no one would ever get to penetrate, yet this blonde woman devouring her with a vengeance, had systematically looked into her eyes and blown away every single thought of self protection that she had learned to live with.  This woman had got under her skin the moment their eyes met, and she wanted nothing more than to embrace the unique feeling that was invading her life, this was what all the fuss was about, this was falling in love, this was the rush of feeling and finding ‘the one’.  But…, she needed Tina to slow down, they couldn’t rush this unique union, "T…" the call was answered with silence, her neck continuing to be ravaged, "Tina…" her voice slightly louder.

    Tina brought her head up, her eyes filled with unbridled lust and passion, her face with a look of surprise, with her voice full of concern as she began to ramble, "What… did I do something wrong, did I hurt you? I’m sorry…"

    "T, honey slow down, we’ve got all the time in the world…"

    Tina’s face dropped, her eyes dropped, inspecting the buttons on Bette’s blouse as her voice was barely a whisper, "don’t you want me?"

    Bette laughed at the statement, she brought her finger under Tina’s chin, lifting it so their eyes could meet, her eyes searched Tina’s face as she watched her eyes well with unshed tears, "T, baby, I want you more than I have ever wanted anything in my life, but… I want you to be sure about us, we’ve known each other for such a short time and I don’t want to ruin what we have together for the sake of rushing. And I know that I am really having to keep myself restrained here, because if we start, I really won’t be able to stop…"

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    3. A 10+ on the Richter Scale! *Thud* No One writes passion and romance and lust and desire like you do. Jo, you’re simply amazing. I agree with judith, I am breathless. Your stories should come with a health warning that oxygen canisters are needed while reading and for recovery afterwards. I know you must place yourself w/i your characters minds and hearts. That ‘s the only way your story could be so realistic. It’s as if I am participating in their actions not just observing. And you write in a way that is respectful to your characters and your readers. I am in awe of your talent in expressing so clearly what emotions your characters are experiencing. You write a love story that we all wished we had.

    5. i think my jaw hit the floor and my mouth went dry readin your story jo and it was fuckin amazing absolutly outta this worldfuckk i am work how am i supposed to concentrate on spreadsheets when i am dreamin and fatasizin abt b and t having hot as fuck makeout sessionouch

    6. No one captures it quite like you do …Every emotion that you can possibly imagine in this situation is right here…this chapter is so full of intense passion,…I had goosbumps! as always you come up with amazing chapters…then consistently top them!…Never surprised hun…But in complete awe at your talent…BTW the ending…Well!!this leaves it wide open for part 3…..lol…cant wait!……….

    7. Damn I need a cigarette after that. I think I know what azmama’s talking about. You make it easy to step into the characters’ shoes. That’s when a story becomes 3D. I’ve noticed when I read your stories that it can take me over an hour to finisha chapter. Not so much because it’s long or I’m a slow reader but rather so much is happening that I find myself going over certain things multiple times to make sure I didn’t miss anything. One more thing. If I had been in Tina’s shoes and watched Bette take off her bra, I wouldn’t let out a subtle whimper. I would’ve probably fallen right through the door and landed on the floor in a gooey puddle of love. I’m still waiting for Tina to find the bathroom. I’m sure her bladder is hurting right about now. =p

    10. so my little devonian shellfish – another genius chapter from you. i keep telling you that you are by a large distance the best writer on the site and everytime i say that you get all shy on me so – going to say it again – you are the best writer on the site. though i think he devouring of Bette Porter might be easier for you given your devotion to JB. frankly i am going to email the administrators and complain that this isn’t an nc17 cos it should be. i am in awe of you and i love you deeply — even if you are a clam

    11. just thought of something else == while i write this season 3 has just started on UK television – – give me your version of bette and tina everytime cos you are more talented than the hacks that cobbled together s3.

    12. OMFG, that was so real, erotic, sensual and any other word that can be used to descripe this chapter. Even though they never consummated their love in this chapter you could feel the tension, want and need of both woman. I am amazed that both women could hold themselves apart from another for as long as they did. I loved your description of Bette as the Super Hot Sex on Legs. It sounds like a very delectable desert. You now have earned not only the Cold Shower Award but also the Most Erotic Sensual Award.

    13. Way much better than a NC-17. So much love and passion…Gosh, you describe so well what everybody is looking for. So so good. Couldn’t do anything than just read. This is trully amazing. The writing is amazing ! I felt like i was spying on them in their living room. It was amazing, really really amazing !!! Thank you so much !!! Fantastic !!

    16. Jobadge you have outdone yourself this time. This is a wonderful story and this is exactly what we all want to see, well, at least all of us TiBetter’s, “our girls” in love and loving each other. Thanks for your story.

    17. Damn! These girls know how to make out. So glad Bette came to her senses. What was wrong with her, anyway? Well Jo, you’ve left me high and dry. All I’ve got is the couch.

    19. You know in my state I don’t need much to get myself going…Damn, girl, are you trying to kill me? You and Ally…I love England!!! Great chapter and I definitely can’t wait for the next one.

    21. God, when I asked last time for an other jewel to add in this marvellously beautiful necklace of yours, how could I have dream for a lovelier update ? You’re amazing, simply that, and I adore the way you depict with such a talent, deepness and sensitivity each step of this forever love story. What a wonderful tribute to this magical L word – the most powerful feeling ever. Thank you SO much for given us such an unforgettable gift ! They’re truly chapters to remember… And I cannot wait for the next !! ^_^

    22. JB You are fucking amazing!!!! You say so much that needs to be said about something that (to some) seems so small. Excellent! Three hours and eighteen minutes – where did you come up with that time exactly JB?

    23. All I can say is “OH MY GOD!!!!!!!” That was absolutley incredible!!!!!!!!!!!!! And you are absolutely incredible. Thank you for a WONDERFUAL chapter.

    26. WOW what a kissing marathon, but still no NC-17 Jo LOL!!! I don’t know what to say this time….other than you’re simply the best on this side and in general!!!!!! Your humble mate

    28. Wow…I read this story at 3 o’clock and was gonna comment on it when a friend came by for me to go to the store for a minute and here it is freakin 1:14 a.m….anyway love the story love B&T beginnings please post soon.

    31. Wow and that was just kissing!! Your chapters leave me breathless. You write like no other. The show could use your talent!! Please hurry soon with an update on what happens after the “I Love Yous”.

    33. Jobage, Your write the intense, imaginative and romantic chapters. The love just flows from each and every thought and word spoken by Bette and Tina. Their sudden connection has both terrified and engaged and entraped both of their hearts. The level of detail is magnificent as I can picture every scene and feel every breath, every loving touch, every amorous moan, every anticipated lick and suck. I adore the way in which you had Bette being the one trying to cool things down as Tina’s ador was taking them past the point of no return. Bette was so brilliant is trying to soothe Tina and explain her rationale for stopping this act. Tina’s vision of Bette’d unexpected strip tease was a joy. I could feel my heart start to pump faster and as my breathe swallowed as this scene played out. Bette’s reaction was glorious as she tried to reassure Tina that all was well. I was on the stairs as Tina recoiled from Bette’s rebuttal and jumped for joy as Bette captured Tina once more and took her into the house. This is so much desire and passion in this magical melodrama. Please let the night continue and our gals get all hot and sweaty in each others arms. Brava!! For an awesome adventure. Your Loyal Fan.

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