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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
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Bette turned her head, her eyes slid open, she gave a sharp intake of breath as her sight registered that she had company. She immediately removed her hand from her underwear, her eyes not yet able to meet Tina’s, she felt embarrassed, deeply embarrassed, mortified at being caught, she closed her eyes as she slowly sat up in silence, she covered her face with her hands, mumbling to herself, “oh my god, fuck, fuck, fuck…”
“Bette…” Tina quietly said.
“My god…” came a very mumbled reply as Bette continued to sit with her head in her hands, shaking her head in complete and utter disbelief, she could not think of a worse situation to be caught in than this, the intimate and private act that she had actually done no more than half a dozen times in the whole time they had been together, and she gets caught. Her mind flashed momentarily to the earlier dream, where it all began, maybe she needed to be alone for a minute to come to terms with what had just happened to her, and that was something she couldn’t do with Tina standing a couple of steps away from her, and watching her intently.
Bette stood, with her head bowed, she pulled the jeans back up over her hips, leaving the front unbuttoned, she stepped forward but saw Tina’s feet rooted to the spot, she moved to step around the other side of the coffee table, but saw that Tina sidestepped, also blocking her exit, she felt caged and shut in, she wanted and needed to hide her embarrassment, her mortification and her humiliation.
“Bette, sit down a minute…”
“I can’t…”
“Please…”
“I’m sorry… I am so, so sorry…”
Bette reached for the remote, the images catching the corner of her eye, as if taunting her to what she had been caught in the midst of.
“Leave it…” Tina said, a little more sternly than she realised.
Bette dropped the remote as she heard the anger in Tina’s words; she was still looking downward, not able to meet the eyes of the woman she loved.
“Bette, sit down… please…”
The tape continued to taunt her with its images as they flashed across the screen behind Tina.
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Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!