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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
Their breasts were currently the only skin to skin contact, as Bette moved from side to side, allowing their nipples to dance against one another, which in turn produced four very erect and hardened nipples, now dragging across each others skin, heightening the sensation.
Bette moved her mouth close to Tina’s, her breath teasing Tina’s skin as her head tilted backward, giving undeniable access for Bette to devour Tina’s neck, which she did so in a slow deliberate manner, licking, biting, kissing, using her lips and tongue as dual weapons, the moans coming from Tina, confirming that the attention was having the desired effect.
Bette slowly allowed her body to lower completely onto Tina’s as the moans from Tina’s increased in volume, the muscles in her arms tensing as the ribbons were pulled tighter, as their centre’s met in a hot union they both arched their backs, pressing themselves closer to one another, as Bette caught Tina’s lips with her own, they both immediately began to devour each other with the intensity and hunger that had been building between them, their tongues began a ferocious dual, their bodies unconsciously moving in a synchronization, familiar to them from their years of unique love.
As their kiss continued to deepen, their hips moved in unison, their ragged breathing allowing the passionate encounter to further escalate.
Bette sat on the edge of the sofa, once again cradling her head in her hands, gently rocking her body back and forth as the pending confrontation was about to take place. She felt movement around her, looking through her splayed fingers she saw that Tina had sat herself on the edge of the coffee table, directly in front of her and mere inches away, her mind flashed at the closeness, the uncomfortable ness at the situation.
“Bette?”
“I’m sorry…” came the mumbled words from behind the hands.
“Babe?”
“I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m so very sorry…” she didn’t know what else to say, apart from the simple words of apology that she knew would never be enough to quantify how deeply ashamed she was.
“Bette, look at me…”
“I can’t…”
“Please…”
“I can’t, it was that fucking dream, I couldn’t get it out of my head…”
Tina listened intently to the mumbled words, her ears trying to take in what she thought she was hearing, something about a dream.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!