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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
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“No it’s not.”
“Bette, please look at me.”
“I’m sorry…”
“Bette, please babe, just look at me for a second…” Tina took Bette’s hands and moved them away from her face, seeing the silent tears, she gave a small inward smile as her heart went out to this woman, “babe, come here…”
Bette lent forward into the loving arms of her partner, her face nestled into Tina’s neck as she felt the arms pull her in closer, “I’m sorry…”
“It’s okay, I’m sorry I walked in on you…”
“But T… I was watching the tape that we were going to watch together…”
“We can still watch it together, its okay… stop apologising, it’s okay, I understand…”
“How can you T?”
“Bette stop beating yourself up… tell me… what you were thinking about.” Tina stroked Bette’s back, calming the rising self loathing in her partner.
Bette smiled into Tina’s neck, wasn’t that the most obvious answer, maybe not, maybe Tina needed to hear what she was thinking about, “I was thinking… about you… but it started with the fucking dream… I should have stayed awake…”
“Tell me about the dream babe?”
“I had a dream that kept going around in my head…”
Tina moved back, bringing them face to face, “please… tell me about it…”
“After I went back to sleep this morning, I had this really vivid dream, and it just kept going around and around, and I couldn’t concentrate on my work, and I felt unsettled, and these feelings kept making me… and god…” Bette held her head in her hands once again, shaking her head, trying to free her mind of the caustic thoughts that kept creeping back in.
“Tell me about the dream…” Tina smiled at Bette’s rambling words, the repeated words about the dream, how significant this dream was to how she was feeling.
“I can’t…”
“You can, just tell me babe, talk to me…” Tina brought her hand to Bette’s face, gently stroking her cheek, their eyes met and Tina smiled, “its okay…”
Bette took a breath, “it was… so real… you were… you were…um… kissing… and sucking… my nipple… and it felt so real… and my body kept feeling it,” Bette’s eyes welled at her confession, she felt so emotionally exposed at that very moment.
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Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!