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Do you remember when… Chapter 9
“I know you are, but you don’t need to be…, I think… I should be putting some things right…”
Bette gave a big swallow as the words she uttered flashed in Tina’s eyes, “I love you ya know…”
“I know you do, and I also know how much, but do you know that I have this unquenchable… thirst for you…”
“Fuck T…” Bette’s eyes slid closed as she heard the words.
“Stand up…”
Their eyes met as Tina words continued to sink in, the intent behind them very plain to understand.
Bette stood.
Tina remained seated on the coffee table as her eye level came into contact with the already opened buttons of the Levi’s. She brought her hands to the waistband as she lent her forehead against the warm skin on Bette’s stomach, breathing in the scent she knew would hit her senses in a matter of seconds. She eased the material over Bette’s hips, bringing her underwear with the denim, she felt Bette’s hands on her shoulders, steadying the heady feeling of the impending onslaught that was about to take place. The denim travelled southward as Tina’s hands slowly caressed the long smooth limbs before her, her own breathing altering in anticipation of what she was about to experience.
Bette sat back down, her eyes meeting Tina’s, the silence between them palpable, her own mind knowing that Tina was going to be in charge of their encounter.
“I think you should put your feet back on the coffee table, I kinda liked seeing that…” Tina said with a smirk, her eyes danced with devotion as Bette raised her bare feet and planted them on the table either side of where Tina sat.
The words swirling in Bette’s mind wouldn’t meet her lips, all the things she wanted to say to this woman forgotten as their eyes remained fixated, Bette watched as Tina slid herself off the coffee table onto her knees between Bette’s legs, she gave an intake of breath as Tina’s eyes lowered to her centre, she felt the physical pulse of anticipation as she watched Tina unconsciously licking her lips, her heart was pounding, and this pounding was like nothing she had been experiencing throughout the morning.
“T…” Bette whispered.
Tina slowly raised her eyes to meet Bette’s, her face showing ‘The Look’ that Bette knew so well, she did not stand a chance.
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(4 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Hey…what a chapter…well you managed to bring my favorite chapter of all time……And if at all possible make it even better!…The Portard porn really should have a health warning on it ..not only for Bette..but for the rest of us!.lol..Ok So Bette was caught in a compromising position…but ya know!…Tina was teasing her way more than she could handle…so really i think it only right that Tina finish what she started…and What a finish..lol…as always loved this!…
Oh…my…gosh! That was so hot! I should have known better than to read this at work…. Can’t wait for the next installment.
I forgot to breathe while i was reading that.That was tooooo Hot.Thud job. The gallery scene was so intensely Hot, and erotic. And The portard porn collectionTinaloving..Oh my Gawd. Loss for words.B&T are freaks(iloveit). I need air!
Oh how I remember that day at the gallery oh so well..actually i just read that chapter not so long ago..I love your stories…Thanks for posting..I look forward to them everytime..
I can’t believe I’m reading this at work. I swear I was holding my breath. Here I am trying to have lunch thinking I’ll just check and see whats been posted. OMG, the rest of the day is going to be so long.
Poor Bette was caigh doing what come naturally when you want your soul mate and lover and she isn’t there That was one of the best charter your wrote and you brough it back in such a beautiful way. thanks
i’m speechless…….maybe later my mind can process this, for now it’s blank…all i can think of is Holy f***
Damn woman! *Thud* Mouth is dy and i think I stopped breathing for a minute! Post soon!
HOT!!!!! HOT!!!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!
That was the most erotic thing I’ve ever read.
This chapter only is the anthology of erotic “situations” and grandiose writing. You’re a maestro at building the scene and bringing it to its apogee, your description of the feelings going through their mind at those times leaves me breathless. Bravo!
What a great chapter. Love the story.
OMFG that was awesome! You made the little hairs stand up on the back of my neck! No one can write the Tibette chemistry like you do Jo! Yep, nobody even comes close! JB your the best!
Damn….this was pretty damn HOT!! – I have to add that while Tina wears her Nike Shox for running, I wear mine for fashion. A girl must always be cute!! ^_^
Jobadge, you’re AWESOME. That was????????? Go girl.
Damn, damn that was just toooo hoooot. I really need a copy of that tape of the very erotic gallery scene. You only enhanced that scene and brought out even more intense feelings and desires. I do believe that this chapter is tied with the original gallery scene as my favorite chapters. I also love your situations chapters.
Goodeness, Jo, I think I’m almost as dazed as Bette. Could my nub be swollen? I’ll have to sashay someplace to check it out. I think I told you when you put out the original gallery chapter about how slowly I read it, the better to enjoy it. Well, you did it to me again.
Jo….You’re just amazing. Your NC-17s are off the chain! I can barely breathe. I can hardly write a simple note and look what you can do w/moments.
wow…
wheeeeeeeeew wut a hot chapter! i very much enjoy ur writing! those cute lil situation chapters too! keep on writing! hope to see more (a lot more) posts soon!!! =)
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Triple THUD!! Jo you’re simply the best. Better than all the rest. Oh my God. What a way to start the weekend. Thank you for what you do.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lmao@honda90. Problems typing, sweetie? ;) As if I’m one to talk I typed “swttie” at first. lol I’d kinda like to see you write a short collection of gallery chapters.
This was just as hot, amazing and mind-blowing as I had expected, thanks for listen to my advise :o))
Cold shower… Be right back!!!
That’s what I’m talking about!
damn that waz hottttttttttttttttttt
Holy WOW!… What can I say? Awesome! Just absolutely awesome!!!!!