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Don’t Fade Away Ch. 7
“Thanks.” Shane walked away from the window and took a seat. She grabbed a magazine and flipped through the pages. She heard heels hitting the floor and looked up. She saw a blondish brown walk up to the window. She watched her from behind the magazine.
“Hey Kelly. How’s everything going?”
The receptionist looked up and smiled. “Hi Elise. Everything’s going alright. So are you looking for your mom?”
She smiled and tapped her foot. “Yeah, is she working?”
“Yeah, she’s with a patient right now. I’ll tell you’re here.”
“Thanks Kelly.” Elisa walked away from the window and took a seat a couple of seats across from Shane. She looked at Shane and smiled. Shane looked at her and smiled. She looked back down at the magazine and waited for the doctor. She kept catching herself looking over the magazine at this woman in her sight.
A doctor walked from the hallway and stood in the room. “Shane McCutcheon?”
Shane looked away form the magazine. “Yeah.”
The doctor smiled. “Come with me please.” Shane put the magazine down and stood up. She walked away from her seat and walked past Elise. Elisa looked up at Shane and smiled again. Shane smiled and looked away. She followed behind the doctor and went down the hallway.
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Carmen was sitting at The Planet waiting for Olivia to meet her for lunch. She took a drink of her green tea and sat the cup down. She looked down at her laptop and began working on her paper again. The chair moved, and someone sat down.
“Hi Carmen.”
Carmen looked away from her laptop. “Oh, hi Jenny. What’s going on?”
Jenny smiled. “Nothing really, how are you?”
“Okay I guess. So how’s Shane?”
“She went to the clinic today.”
Carmen nodded her head. “I’m proud of her. I’m glad that she’s deciding to make a change.”
Jenny sighed. “Well, she’s making the change for you. She thought that she had a chance with you Carmen.”
“Please Jenny, not here. I really don’t want to talk about this.”
“You shouldn’t of said yes. That was your first mistake right there.”
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I don´t really like where the story seems to lead….that´s so complicated. And I don´t know shanes reaction that carmen “let her down” again seemes like nothing happened.
Oh, nuh-uh!! Like Wittybanter wrote… who’s this ELISE? And why isn’t Carmen breaking up with Olivia? The longer she waits, the worse it’ll be. Can’t wait ’til Carmen sees she might have some competition. That’ll get her moving! Yet another great chapter. I’m soo hooked, it’s not even funny.
Elise is just the thing to wake Carmens ass up. Bet Carmen will be pissed off & will make a decision once she spots Shane w/ someone else. Sharmen do belong together though. Update soon
I’m glad you decided to throw another girl in the mix. Carmen is very undecisive and Shane doesn’t need that right now. Great update and I hope you update soon :)
I have a feeling what’s coming next, but I also have to say I can’t really blame Shane. Maybe Carmen will realise that she did make a huge mistake by agreeing to a marriage. I know she does already, but why doesn’t she break it off with Olivia?
great update!! now…who’s this elise? are you having shane move on from carmen? sharmen have to stay 2gether!! elise should just be a good friend.