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    Don’t fall for me

    Story written on March 10, 2011 by kins40.
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    As I keep looking on, intrigued now by the vision on the opposite side of the bar, I feel a pair of hands on my waist and jump at the sensation. Turning quickly, my eyes fall on a tall predatory red head. She leans in and whispers something in my ear. It is direct, no hidden agenda. I smile and politely decline. She looks disappointed but lets me know where to find her, should I change my mind.
    My eyes return to the blonde. Her eyes are following the retreat of the red head.  She has witnessed my little interaction with the bold woman and for a split second seems unsettled. She looks over to me and our eyes meet again. I smile and await her reaction and there it is, a hint of a smile. Her head turns quickly back towards her bottle, she takes a swig, she looks definitely nervous now but somehow her eyes fall back on me again accompanied with a smile.
    I take it as my cue. I signal to the bartender and order two beers. I grab the two bottles and step down from my stool to walk the small distance which separates us. 
    She has not seen me move and is startled when I place the two drinks on the table in front of her.
    "Hi" I simply say. I don’t do cliches or pick up lines, assuming that I am here to pick up someone……….I accompany my greeting with a big smile, "looks like you have finished picking off the label of that bottle" I add pointing to the little mound of torn wet sticky paper in front of her….. "thought you might need a new one."
    Her startled look turns into genuine smiling eyes as her Hazel orbs look directly into mine. I marvel at how beautiful she is now that I am closer to her and my heartbeat picks up instantly.
    She thanks me and makes a quick joke about how she is in therapy because of the whole label picking habit and she is trying to get over it. She lets out a little nervous laugh. It might be the most magical sound that I have ever heard. She looks at me again and invites me to sit down almost embarrassed at her lack of manners for not having it   done sooner. I do not hesitate, now worried that I might seem a little too eager. This is going to be fun if we have to tread awkwardly around each other like this all night.
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    5. That was lovely. Really enjoyed it, hate to see it end. Wish you could continue it, the story would be very interesting to see how their love develops and if Tina does indeed fall for Bette, which we hope she would. At any rate, thanks for sharing. Come back soon with more for us.

    22. I have to say I truly loved this story. And for the fact that I was slightly confused as to why Bette didn’t want Tina to fall for her. But when I got to the end I realized…. It was sweet and capture a lot of what happens when you meet someone you know you have this instant connection to. I believe in falling for someone almost as simultaneously as love at first sight. Great story would have loved more. Great writing as always. Caramel

    28. What a treat to see you back! I just love your writing style and could feel the entire encounter. Even though I’d love to see the story continue, the ending was perfect.

    32. beautiful!! the dancing made me think about season 5 of the L word when Bette and Tina danced to “Walk on By” at the lez girls wrap party, and how they kiss and touch each other with little whispers in between…love it!!!

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