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Don’t fall for me
Story written on March 10, 2011 by kins40.
I introduce myself, "Hi, I’m Bette" I say extending my hand.
She takes it, she is blushing "Hey….. Tina" she answers.
Our conversation picks up instantly and the awkwardness soon disappears, replaced by unbroken exchanges about everything under the sun. She is delightful, attentive to my words and her face responds in all manners of expression. It is is hard not to stare at the beautiful face in front of me, my heart jumps every time she lets out a small laugh or her face is illuminated by her amazing smile.
The cadence of the music suddenly changes and the lights by the dance floor dim. The mood in the club instantly changes. I look at her and offer my hand. "Would you like to dance?" I ask.
She nods in that slightly shy way which seems to be predominant in her demeanour.
We make our way through the crowd. I walk in front, carving a passage to the darkened dance floor she lets herself be guided. Only the tips of our fingers are touching, bent in a small hook our hands are locked in a subtle grip.
We get there and I make my way further on to the dance floor passing couples already in their hold. I turn around and she closes the distance between us. My hands reach around her waist and I pull her in gently. Her hands rest on my shoulders. I can feel their warmth radiating through the fabric of my thin top. She is a little bit smaller than me, her temple rests lightly against my cheek. She fits perfectly in my arms. We sway to the music in silence for a few minutes.
I subtly tighten my grip around her waist. I let my hands slide along her lower back and she responds by stepping further into me. Her hands are now resting on the back of my neck. I can feel her soft breath on my skin.
She moves gracefully against me. I whisper in her ear something to that effect, complimenting her on her dancing skills. She thanks me modestly with a slight embarrassed laugh. It increases the vibration of her breath on my neck and sends my mind in overdrive. A warm sensation takes me over and a dull ache starts in my lower belly. She feels so sexy in my arms. Her warm body into mine, her hips against mine, the whole length of our legs are touching. Her perfume has overtaken my senses, fresh and sensual all at the same time.
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(36 votes, average: 4.81 out of 5)
You’re incredible. Please keep your writing, it is also a vicil read their stories.
So glad your back…as usual. brilliant writing…hope you post again soon :D
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing!
“Don’t fall for me…” because for me it is already too late, “I have fallen for you!” – nice ending :)
That was lovely. Really enjoyed it, hate to see it end. Wish you could continue it, the story would be very interesting to see how their love develops and if Tina does indeed fall for Bette, which we hope she would. At any rate, thanks for sharing. Come back soon with more for us.
Your writing is brilliant! Now I think I’m gonna read At first sight because I loved this! Thank you :D
beautiful this was. Beautiful.
Another hit! Thanks for sharing and please come back with another one asap.:)
That was delightful, I loved every word.
Wow, you can write. Please continue to post more stories. I’m a fan.
So Beautifully written. I felt like I was watching this scene take place. Please continue to write.
What a beautiful encounter! Please continue writing. I’ll write as many nice comments you’d like just to keep you writing.
Amazing story.
Thanks for the beautiful story :D
Yay! So glad you are back and we really, REALLY, need more of your stories. You are just too good to not share your talent with us! PLEASE??!!
You have incredible talent and understand our girls well; thank you more please
So beautiful..Yes Bette convince Tina..But I know, just like you she had fallen too.
That was just a beautifully written story. Thank you.
Wonderful!!!
Amazing.Thank you.
Wow… You rocks! :-)) sweet ending, and it’s so cute that somehow Bette is being the one who admit of her fall afterwards
I have to say I truly loved this story. And for the fact that I was slightly confused as to why Bette didn’t want Tina to fall for her. But when I got to the end I realized…. It was sweet and capture a lot of what happens when you meet someone you know you have this instant connection to. I believe in falling for someone almost as simultaneously as love at first sight. Great story would have loved more. Great writing as always. Caramel
You do have a way with words my dear.
That was awesome and beautiful, love it, thanks for sharing it with us!
Wow. Very nice, very sensual. I’ve fallen for the fic.
oh dear that was marvellous How can we not fall. ;)
Amazing story!
What a treat to see you back! I just love your writing style and could feel the entire encounter. Even though I’d love to see the story continue, the ending was perfect.
That was beautiful. Thank you!
So beautiful! Thank you for writing another story for us.
BEAUTIFUL!!!
beautiful!! the dancing made me think about season 5 of the L word when Bette and Tina danced to “Walk on By” at the lez girls wrap party, and how they kiss and touch each other with little whispers in between…love it!!!