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Don’t fall for me
Story written on March 10, 2011 by kins40.
I move my head back to look at her. My eyes first travel along her jaw line move up her soft features until they lock into those brown eyes. Not so much brown, lighter in colour as it gets closer to her pupil, but perfect doe like eyes.
Right now those eyes are inquisitive and I detect a slight apprehension. I look at her reassuringly to appease her. My right hand moves up and down her back slowly in a soft caressing stroke.
I avert my gaze and redirect it to her lips, rosy, soft, alluringly kissable lips.
I tilt my head slowly and close the distance between our faces gradually. I hazard a quick glance and see her eyes have closed. My heart does a little flutter and our lips meet in an unhurried, lightly applied kiss. We part a breath separating us and we both inhale softly. I lean back in and delicately take her upper lip in mine, I release it pulling on it a little bit; I realise she does the same with my bottom lip. Our eyes open and meet again. I read surprise and almost relief in her eyes. I smile, she smiles as I lean in again. My lips are parted, they meet hers and my tongue tentatively brushes on her lips asking for entry. I am not disappointed when her lips open and the tips of our tongues touch for the first time, beginning their slow dance back and forth, sliding over each other in an explosion of savour.
We moan in each other mouths as the kiss deepens. I feel her body relax into mine. Our feet are now still, our minds concentrated on the task at hand. She feels incredible against me, thousands of butterflies collide in my stomach and my heart is racing against time itself. Her Tongue is light against mine, exploring my mouth tenderly, retreating momentarily to bite gently on my lower lip before resuming its soft duel. Time stops. I cannot even hear the music anymore as I totally tune in the soft noises coming from Tina as we remain locked in our embrace. Her hands rest on the back on my neck and I slowly wrap my arms tighter around her waist. If I was to pull up she would be lifted off the ground.
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(36 votes, average: 4.81 out of 5)
You’re incredible. Please keep your writing, it is also a vicil read their stories.
So glad your back…as usual. brilliant writing…hope you post again soon :D
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing!
“Don’t fall for me…” because for me it is already too late, “I have fallen for you!” – nice ending :)
That was lovely. Really enjoyed it, hate to see it end. Wish you could continue it, the story would be very interesting to see how their love develops and if Tina does indeed fall for Bette, which we hope she would. At any rate, thanks for sharing. Come back soon with more for us.
Your writing is brilliant! Now I think I’m gonna read At first sight because I loved this! Thank you :D
beautiful this was. Beautiful.
Another hit! Thanks for sharing and please come back with another one asap.:)
That was delightful, I loved every word.
Wow, you can write. Please continue to post more stories. I’m a fan.
So Beautifully written. I felt like I was watching this scene take place. Please continue to write.
What a beautiful encounter! Please continue writing. I’ll write as many nice comments you’d like just to keep you writing.
Amazing story.
Thanks for the beautiful story :D
Yay! So glad you are back and we really, REALLY, need more of your stories. You are just too good to not share your talent with us! PLEASE??!!
You have incredible talent and understand our girls well; thank you more please
So beautiful..Yes Bette convince Tina..But I know, just like you she had fallen too.
That was just a beautifully written story. Thank you.
Wonderful!!!
Amazing.Thank you.
Wow… You rocks! :-)) sweet ending, and it’s so cute that somehow Bette is being the one who admit of her fall afterwards
I have to say I truly loved this story. And for the fact that I was slightly confused as to why Bette didn’t want Tina to fall for her. But when I got to the end I realized…. It was sweet and capture a lot of what happens when you meet someone you know you have this instant connection to. I believe in falling for someone almost as simultaneously as love at first sight. Great story would have loved more. Great writing as always. Caramel
You do have a way with words my dear.
That was awesome and beautiful, love it, thanks for sharing it with us!
Wow. Very nice, very sensual. I’ve fallen for the fic.
oh dear that was marvellous How can we not fall. ;)
Amazing story!
What a treat to see you back! I just love your writing style and could feel the entire encounter. Even though I’d love to see the story continue, the ending was perfect.
That was beautiful. Thank you!
So beautiful! Thank you for writing another story for us.
BEAUTIFUL!!!
beautiful!! the dancing made me think about season 5 of the L word when Bette and Tina danced to “Walk on By” at the lez girls wrap party, and how they kiss and touch each other with little whispers in between…love it!!!